Novel Writer in the World of Conan

Let's talk briefly, I just read about the exchange meeting. (I didn't pay attention to come back and make up for it when I was writing, it seems to be a bit harsh 🤤) On the whole, the content is mostly used for third-person narration. Although this method can express one's content very concisely and effectively, it inevitably lacks some sense of substitution. For fan fiction, there is no sense of substitution, which is fatal. Secondly, I feel that the character creation of the protagonist is a bit general. Even though some of the protagonist's life experiences are described in the front, the author does not have an outstanding summary, which led to me personally having a sense of separation when I saw the bandage weirdo (I thought of warm sunshine and warmheartedness, but it is actually calm, dull or even indifferent) There is also dialogue and communication, the style is a bit Chinese-style, and the content gives a simple and casual feeling.

To be honest, the fandom is originally a niche, the writing is still young, and many of the dialogues are meaningless. I feel that I am inexperienced and don't know how to grasp the key points. The most important thing is that there are few exciting points and the narrative is long-winded. I feel that it is difficult to attract a large number of readers.

Sorry everyone, there is only one update today because I have to take time to sort out the follow-up plot, and updates will be resumed on August 8th. I am a complete novice, and I am not very proficient in controlling the rhythm of the plot, so I have to sort out the plot after writing so far. I would like to apologize to everyone. This is my first book. I want to write it well and do not want to deal with it. I also want to use this book to leave a good impression on everyone. Therefore, I will focus on improving the quality of the plot, but in this case, the speed will definitely not be faster. I hope you can give me more time. I would like to thank you here!

Everyone, do you have anyone who is raising a book? If so, please stop raising it and read it quickly. As long as you read it for more than ten minutes, my book will get investment. After 100 investments, my book will be promoted on a small scale. This is my motivation to keep writing. Please, please, let me get 100 investors as soon as possible. I promise here that for every ten more investors, I will add one more update, and I will never break my promise!

Everyone, what's going on? Why is the comment area so deserted? How about my writing? You could give me some feedback.

Everyone, can you give me some recommendation votes? The children are starving, woo woo hoo~

Thank you Dan Ding and Luo Yu Qianye for your recommendation votes. This is a great encouragement to me, thank you very much!

Brothers, don't I already have more than 100 collections of this book? Why is the comment area still so deserted? Brothers, please talk to me, I'm so bored! 😭😭😭

I was just wondering if there was any Suzuki Sonoko, when I saw a book

Everyone in the comment area, does anyone know what the specific contract standards for novels are? If anyone knows, please let me know, thank you.

I personally like Sonoko, but the way Sonoko is written here is a bit too ignorant and ignorant. Sonoko is just as careless as Mouri Kogoro, but he doesn't really understand nothing like a child ❤️❤️

The characters are too thin, and the storyline is not carefully polished. The immaturity of the writing can be covered up by the plot, but the plot is also too bland. To sum it up in one sentence, it's a bit false.