All My Players Are Rebellious

Let me tell you in advance: I have a bit of a venomous tongue. What I'm talking about is my personal suggestion. Don't delete my post (there was a glass author who thought I was stepping on him to fill the cup and said thank you before deleting the post and scolding him) 1/This is a personal suggestion. It doesn't matter whether I adopt it or not. As for why I wrote this post, I just think this book is very good and has a lot of room for a long time. I don't hope that it won't become a book in the end. I don't have the vulgar taste of stepping on people to fill cups. 1/ There is a direction. The author can try to reduce the current memes and add realistic elements. Why, because memes can become clichéd and clichéd, which means it can do more harm than good. The reason why the realistic elements are funny is that the selling point of this article is obscured. You have to know the purpose of these two points. After reading it, I feel that the essence is to make the article light and humorous. Might as well change the location. Just stick to the style. 2/ Go directly into the main text in a large space, don't give too much verbosity between Qiqi and the protagonist, and don't describe too much plot for the players. Why. Because the protagonist is number one, not Qiqi. A tool is a tool, not a tool. Because today's players will eventually become obsolete, Novice Village will not be remembered. Just leaving a few outstanding original intentions is enough. Finally, today's readers rarely read slow books, especially those in this genre, who start directly with the text. 3/Write down the selling points of your book to remind yourself at all times, for example, changing reality. Realistic cultivation. Side plots such as conflicts and hidden dangers that arise after practicing practice in reality. Another example is the existence of the protagonist, when the protagonist's reality is separated from the game, and the minor climaxes of the supporting characters. For example, the cool operations in the game, the maximization of natural disasters for the players, the way the protagonist traps the players and cuts the leeks resonates. These are examples of where you have to lay the hook in a long way. This is normal. At this stage, what you need is to imitate and modify, first increase the volume of your own books, and gain a foothold in L4, so that the next book can take off directly. 5/ Here I recommend to you two previous game articles that I personally think are masterpieces. They have similar approaches but the same purpose. - Super God Mechanic - Power Leveling Empire. These two books are very consistent with the key points and selling points of what you want to write. You can directly copy "But Xianxia". This point needs to be thought of for the readers. Finally, I really hope you can write it well. I type these words because it is not easy for me to find a book that suits my taste. If one day I write something, I hope you can directly criticize me. Finally, please update quickly. Others can write 10,000 words in a day, why can't you? ? ? Update quickly

After seeing the latest chapter, I feel that this is a story where the protagonist acts as a nanny for the player. Since these players like to cause trouble so much, why not let them harm others (such as two countries at war) and monsters, and let them harm themselves 😥

Newcomers write novels, I hope everyone will support me. If you like it, please read it more. It is difficult for newcomers to write novels at the beginning, especially before they are published. The previous reading is very important, and it is related to whether they can advance! Please please🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

As for why I posted this, there are two reasons. 1/See the comment section saying that returning to reality is a poisonous point. Coincidentally, I have been reading a book about returning to reality recently, so I have a negative opinion. The poison is due to improper handling. It is straightforward to write. 2/I would like to talk about the exciting plot that I am looking forward to. If fellow Taoists have similar senses, you can join us. The following is the text: 1/The reason for reading this book is that the cultivation of immortality happens in reality, and this introduction comes in. Personally I really want to see this. 2/Resonance, where does the resonance come from? Players can have a sense of immersion directly. And, the example of you making a million by playing a mobile game is changed to a mobile game. In this game, you gain power, wealth and practice skills that can be redeemed in reality. Don't you look forward to this? 3/ Location, when you go to other countries to click on the science and technology tree, the scientific research, medicine, demonstration, time and space of the native land of China, various theories of the old generation can be scientifically tested and tried in this game. Is this not the explosion of another kind of technology 4/ The benefits brought by spiritual practice, veterans, scientific research, meritorious deeds, celebrities All kinds of Chinese people with dazzling human stars can swallow a golden elixir to prolong their lives and avoid children, the elderly and the weak, and many stubborn diseases are gradually overcome 5/Return to the game. After all, the game is the main line. The protagonist and the player are under the artifact. All the blood bars are visualized. This is the cool point when encountering an assassination or a practitioner being tortured. After all, with the blood bar, the dog on the roadside has to be kicked twice, and the grass has to be kicked 6/One of the players' objections is the invincible attempt to break the upper and lower limits, constantly challenging the rules, and there are conflicts in the game. With the addition of players, naturally there are more plots and exciting operations and common group fights and guild confrontations 7/The blessed land of traveler players, flying with swords and traveling with the United States. This kind of plot was a very large audience in ancient online game novels at that time. 8/Uniqueness In reality, there is only one manager, and the only one is Chinese, which means that the race of this country is superior to others. . . Hiss. . . King on the outside and sage on the inside. . In the game, individualization, teamwork, cyber practice, real-life guildization, and militarization can all have certain directions. The difference is how to face the next step. This is what I am currently thinking of. Just like what was said downstairs, this book currently has no poisonous points, which shows that readers are not very sticky and the rhythm is not enough. But it also shows that there are no big and dense poisonous points, which is the biggest one that is better than other books. Keep up the good work. It is difficult to achieve enlightenment at the beginning, but the key lies in perseverance and upward accumulation, rather than those glass-hearted authors who keep cutting and messing up in an attempt to win the lottery. There are too many words, and I am verbose again. The above is my personal opinion. If I see it this way and you see it this way, just keep to yourself. I also want to ask friends if they have any special plots for me to enjoy. Sleep, may we have sweet dreams

It's refreshing to watch at the beginning, but boring later on

Don't be like the one with hundreds of photos or a dozen people in the closed beta test

Rebuilding a sect does not necessarily mean binding the players to you. You can give them a final mission to "rebuild the sect" and then throw them out. Just give them some resources, opportunities, and artifacts. Then they can be rebuilt after they become stronger. The protagonist can hide behind the scenes and control the general direction.

Of the few books I've read recently, The Fourth Catastrophe, yours seems the most comfortable (personally)

The part about returning to reality is really unnecessary.

Brother Hui is here for a visit