I Asked You to Design Your Graduation Project, and You Designed the Particle Light Blade?

Although it is a military academy, I feel like it is not keeping things confidential very well. Not only did students create a super-technical particle light blade, it was reported publicly in the school, and they also took a video of the whole process and posted it on the school website! Some are incomprehensible!

That's great. Primitive people should be able to build airplanes out of stones.

I didn't finish the first one. Are you serious about skipping classes in military school for 4 years?

After reading the first few chapters, I can't call it science fiction anymore, but fantasy, which is more appropriate.

Why do you need to write this kind of book all at once? The most awesome thing about this weapon is the electric gun. It can be applied to as many weapons as ten times at least. Even airplanes can use electricity.

I'm looking for an introduction to how to make a particle light blade. Then it would be easier to make a light particle railgun, right?

The author has good ideas and the plot arrangement is reasonable. The current plot settings and contradictions lead to savage and reasonable ones. It would be great if it was a new author writing for the first time. It can be seen that he wants to take the route of military industry + academic dominance. At present, I am writing about the military industry, but it is too "sci-fi". If you want to write this kind of military industry novel, you need to have a basic understanding of the current mainstream military industry in various countries. Grenades like the latest chapter are the accumulation of knowledge of many talents in various disciplines such as materials science. The protagonist is afraid that he will be "sliced" if he takes it out. If the background is set in a world where the military industry is more advanced than reality, then the background must be explained clearly first. The protagonist in the current writing has a serious sense of separation from the world the protagonist lives in. Then we need to highlight the role of supporting characters and highlight the character of the protagonist as an academic master. What is the inherent impression of an academic master, self-discipline and strong understanding ability? It is not like being in the laboratory for seven or eight days and a half as arranged by the author. The author is a bit too jumpy in writing this aspect. At least I did not feel the charm of the protagonist as a "student master". There is a very simple academic book. I forgot the name. The protagonist is called Lu Zhou. The author of this book wrote very well about the charm and characteristics of the "student master". Military industry + academic master, in fact, it is still academic master's novel. The content written now is too mechanical. Readers will only feel that a new map is opened, the system issues new drawings, the protagonist has to show off, and then the cycle repeats. Although academic master's article does look like this, a tree with only one trunk standing is too monotonous after all. The time-travel stories and official documents currently in the front row of Qidian. Although they are generally system + opening new pictures + showing off and then repeating the cycle, those great authors are strong in being able to stand up the characters. I think the author can slowly write in the future and focus on this aspect. Of course, it is just my personal suggestion. It is really rare to see an individual author in Qidian these days. Sometimes it takes a day to read all the studio articles, which is very embarrassing.

Come on, I see it's not bad now,

Although it looks cool, it is a bit retarded. Solar alloys and ultra-high-energy battery packs are the real black technology. The light blade is not that eye-catching. It is impossible for the school teachers not to know this, but although they are surprised, it is too plain.

I beg you all to save it, turn to the last page and read it. It is not easy for a newbie to code, and the head of the coder is almost bald. 😭😭😭

How do you feel about the beginning of this book? There is a book with almost the same plot.

When I saw the solar power supply in Chapter 19, I was so poisoned.

Has the author ever considered that bullets and cannonballs can't penetrate, but the people inside the mecha will be shaken to pieces. Miniaturizing individual mechas is simply not feasible, and Iron Man will have to sleep after being shot twice. I personally think that mechas are large-scale combat support platforms with three defenses: sea, land and air. Provide suppressive fire support to troops. This material is more useful, and it is more powerful as a fighter.

From looking at it, it seems that the author is not even an engineering major. Many local engineering majors will not make this kind of mistake at all. It feels like the brainless yy of those cloud and military industry fans. It includes, but is not limited to, professional terminology, confidentiality regulations, research and development processes, test collaboration, and a series of other aspects. It can only be read as a mindless article. If you think about it more, it will be very poisonous.

It appeared in my daily guide, but is this eunuch?

I feel like I forgot the name after seeing it, more than 70% of it is the same.