Dragon Clan: Professor Long Wen of a Certain Kassel College

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The writing is very restrained, but it feels like the protagonist is responsible for the work of the three-person team, helping Lu Mingfei open the way and finish the story. It doesn't feel like a protagonist's story. Plot advancement without protagonist

I feel like the fanfics in the non-Mingfei universe are not strong enough in the early stages.

The author has a problem with the time zero setting. If it only affects the enemy's sensory speed, bullets and thermal weapons are not Tianke time zero.

I still feel like there are some issues.

I kind of understand why the rating is so low, but I don't understand how the author would write it. If the King Solomon organization takes action, the protagonist will not be able to defeat it based on his current strength. It seems that the trip to Japan is just paddling. It seems that there are probably many mixed-race organizations trying to resurrect the White King. No one can beat the White King without Lu Mingfei trading.

1. The protagonist is like an emotionless tool or NPC. Reading this book is better than reading the original work 2. It makes people feel very frustrated and a bit disgusting to read 3. Whether there is a protagonist or not has no big impact on the plot, so what did the author do in writing this book? Copy the original work?

It looks good, but the quantity is too small 😥

500,000 Words is a big hurdle.

Nowadays, writing about indigenous people is too niche and difficult.

Is there any difference between what you wrote and reading the original work?

Should I still give Eri Yi to Mingfei?

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