I'm Going to Die. Dad Li Gui Begs for Forgiveness.

1. The characters are well created, especially one section where Ma Lingdang longs for her father's love is described vividly. 2. The content of the story is compact, and the writing and drama are really good. If you take it in yourself, you will really feel it. 3. The whole book revolves around the character of Ma Liao, which gives people a lot of doubts. However, one problem is that if the doubts are only centered around this character, then the subsequent content will definitely be restricted. Of course, everything is not absolute, and it depends on how the author handles it later. 4. There are some shortcomings in this book, such as the tension in the battle scenes between the decent characters and the villains; and where the characters in the book went and what novel things are there. The author could have systematically described the surrounding environment, buildings, etc., So that readers can be better brought into the book. Summary: The overall framework of the novel is good. I personally feel that this novel can be written slowly. After all, the outline is here.