There Is a Cloud at the Beginning, a Fairy in the World of Freedom

A cloud, so good, 8U ecstasy🤭🤭 Every day, I look for the sunniest time and stay in a place. 🈶The young lady passes by, and a large puddle of water falls 🙂 The whole body is exposed, the national color is fragrant, two dots are bright red in the hazy, and the exquisite bumps are fully displayed.

Hongyun, right? Hongyun, right. Hehehehe, the ninety-nine-thousand-thousand-level realm, the Purple Qi Explosive Fist. Three thousand mortal guests, the true spirit will never be destroyed, Zhen Yuanzi save me.

So, this is a group portrait? The protagonist only shows up once every two chapters and ends with a few dozen words.

Cloud and Mist Life Lenovo Deformable Gigantic Cloud Computing (Super Large Computer) City in the Sky

Good-looking but the description of the woman is so speechless

The idea is good, but the imagination is a bit small, and the writing at the beginning is just average. It seems a bit boring, but I can read it.

You're right, but you're not entirely right. From a certain point of view, you are right, but from another point of view, you are wrong. I can't say it's completely wrong, I can only say it's still a little bit wrong between completely right. If it is wrong to ignore this point, then of course what you say is right, but if you examine whether what you say is right with a more rigorous attitude, then what you say is not right. In fact, looking back, what you said is right may be right in a static world, and what you said is wrong may be wrong from a metaphysical point of view. But from a developmental perspective, what you say is right may be wrong in the time and space of movement, and what you say is wrong may be right from a dialectical point of view. What you say may or may not be right at this moment, and what you say in the future may be wrong or right. All in all, in a nutshell, in one word.

The text should be more refined.

The author read this and replied to me after seeing it. Thank you. I read a novel before. One of the characters in it is also a cloud. When nothing happens to it, it is just a cloud floating in the sky. And it is not just one cloud, but the whole cloud in the sky is its body. When fighting, it gathers clouds and condenses into a dragon shape to fight. The protagonist does not need to be limited to a dragon shape. Clouds are clouds. They are changeable. What's even more exciting is what kind of activities the character will do during battle to turn ordinary clouds into thunderclouds. I hope the author can adopt this to make the protagonist more flexible when fighting.

To be honest, the last few chapters, especially after entering the dungeon, feel as if I haven't read them at all, just putting them aside to have a tea party? You tell me, the tense atmosphere depends on what people say, but in fact, I didn't feel it at all when I read it. Several people came here to play house and they wanted to slander me and you. There were also two imaginary monsters like Water God Land. It was really uncomfortable to watch. They were shocked at every turn. It was hard not to suspect that the word count was too low. Every little thing happened and everyone's reaction, expression, and psychology had to be written down. I really couldn't watch it. , The plot is also very boring, the fighting is also boring, and I have no expectations for the subsequent plot at all. I read these chapters purely to see if I can change it back to the way it was at the beginning, and they are all gods of the same county. It can be said that the relationship is bad, but it is not necessary to emphasize how bad the relationship is. If this continues, Anhefang > Pu'an County... I hope this copy will be resolved quickly, it is really boring if it continues like this.

Seeing the 161th chapter, I would like to give a brief review to other book friends. It has potential, but it is in danger. The advantages are novel subject matter, from clouds to immortals, and the story is not protracted. The disadvantages are that the writing style is ordinary and there is no foreshadowing. The system comprehension prompts always have the word "water". It can be said in one or two sentences without having to be wordy. There are too many paragraphs, the layout is bad, and the arrangement of the female characters seems abrupt. The protagonist is like a licking dog, the map opens too fast, and some old characters are useless, such as the protagonist's god-grandson. I quite like the character. Also, my high school writing and Chinese teacher said that paragraphs should be detailed and detailed. This is the first time I have seen it all in one sentence and one paragraph at the starting point. I can't say the author's writing skills. I have this kind of basic problem. If I don't change it, I will give up.

Not enough, not enough at all!

The main character is a bit sweet. I thought it would be a bit novel, but I didn't expect it to be the same old routine.

The introduction is very interesting, give it a try first

I'm surprised that you didn't listen to everyone's opinions. It turns out that you had already planned to kill the eunuch 😜

The angle is novel and the writing is quite good.

Zhen Jian's portrayal of his godfather is really good 😂 I like it so much. I hope that the conflict will turn into friendship later in the ridiculous conflict, and then Zhen will accompany Xiao Xiangyun to continue the story line.

Beautiful and beautiful~~~~~very interesting and novel~~~

Didn't you say anything when you released the new book?

Watch it first, and then comment if you like it.

Looking at the introduction, it's not like Yun Zhongzi is reincarnated, right?

The author of this regular eunuch

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

Has the protagonist transformed? I transformed and kicked me.