
Douluo: I Will Become Stronger If I Dismantle the CP!
斗罗:我拆散CP就变强!
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- Completed
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- 241k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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Shennong is here: 1. Invincible Wen has the combat power to challenge titles. 2. The first soul ring at the beginning is 30,000 years old, which was obtained in the invisible soul hunting forest of the thousand-year soul beast. 3. The first soul ring of 30,000 years only increased the soul power by three levels. I died of poison before I finished reading the first few chapters.
Author, you are so excited, why don't you check it after you finish writing? Make the protagonist so useless
At level 49, Na Na is so proud. The starting point for absorbing the Ten Thousand Year Ring is only 2 levels higher than that of Xiao Yasan. In the past 6 years, he was said to have full level talent, high martial arts and top level skills and practiced hard every day. The result is 49-20 = 29. Even if the next three Ten Thousand Year Rings all add 0 soul power, minus the first two levels, it is equivalent to the protagonist only cultivating to level 27, let alone the impossible three rings. Not even one level was added at the same time, and the initial Heaven Realm cultivation was the same as a template later, the cultivation was comparable to that of a Super Douluo, and the soul power was not to mention the high-level cultivation, and the muscles were still ordinary people, right? Moreover, the author himself said it through the protagonist's mouth, but the name of the energy was different, and the co-authored settings were all bullshit.
Most Douluo nowadays basically write Tang San as a brainless person. Although he was born as a killer, his behavior is much different, but his mind is deep enough, and he has not known the master for a long time. Although he can't let others say bad things about his teacher and insult Yu Xiaogang, he still has some brains. After seeing the first soul ring in thirty thousand years, there is no doubt in his heart, so he directly writes Tang San as something.
Where is Tang Hao? Dare to abduct and run away novel
Is your Dinghai Shenzhen a fake? Many functions, such as the ability to control the size of your body, ward off evil spirits, calm the sea and stabilize the waves, etc. Should all be built-in, right? Could it be that there are many styles of Pinduoduo?
What a lousy book. It has no logic at all. It just writes whatever comes to mind.
There are plug-ins. If you haven't broken through the Titled Douluo before Tang San reaches level 30, you don't need to read it.
It's boring to follow the original story, so leave now
Since the system has instilled in the protagonist the martial arts system of Young Song, and also given the protagonist the Thirty-six Tiangang Dharma of Journey to the West and Fengyun's three-point returning vitality, in the later stage, the protagonist can be rewarded with the ability to travel through the heavens and the world, allowing the protagonist to travel to the Young Song. OK, my senior brother is too stable, go to the Chinese comic worlds such as Fighting to Break the Sphere, Martial Universe, Great Overlord, Perfect World, Swallowing Starry Sky, etc., Practice and learn the system power, knowledge and skills of these worlds, and conquer these planes and finally use them for yourself.
A thirty-thousand-year-old soul beast faced off against the Soul Emperor, and you, a tenth-level soul master, killed it so easily? Just kill him. Absorbing the 30,000-year-old first soul ring only adds level 5 soul power? Do you clearly despise readers' intelligence?
He brutally tortured Tang Sanyu, Xiaobang and Tang Hao, and let these three eunuchs start 😁
I finally figured it out, the author is similar to Ince Zangwill
I want the main character to do the mission, so I cut off Hu and get to level 20. Even if the ten thousand years ring is only a few levels, I have taken the top talent of the Marrow Cleansing Pill and practiced hard for a year to get to level 15-17. This is still in the early stage and there are still three points of return to vitality skills. Not to mention the fake level 10 + Xuan Tian Kung of Xiao Da San, even a person who is born at level 7 and has no skills is not as good as him. After all, people only start to slow down at level 30. (Would you like to do the math yourself? If the co-author had a different protagonist who was born with level 10 cultivation skills, absorbed normal spirit rings, practiced hard every day, and waited until he was 12 years old, he would reach level 24 at 10+2+12. Even if he wasted time reading books and blacksmithing, he could reach level 29 at just 12, and Zhu Zhuqing, who has no skills and is not very talented, could also reach level 27. It is true that he is the best). I want the protagonist to get the Big Sumeru Hammer, so I strengthen it, and the rat kills the protagonist, forcing him to be indifferent to the outcome. In order to give the protagonist this strength, he gives him cultivation from the beginning. In order to cause conflict, he clearly doesn't need the Spirit Hall's one gold coin per month, but forcibly exposes it and makes him a waste. He just ran out to accept a disciple. The plot is convenient for beating Tang San, and then the rat takes action.
This problem must be solved
There is a problem you must consider when getting close to Xiao Wu. How can you prevent Tang Hao from discovering Xiao Wu's identity? If this problem is not solved, it will be difficult to consider Xiao Wu at the beginning. You must know that when Tang San first went to Notting Junior Soul Master Academy, Tang Hao followed and discovered Xiao Wu's problem at a glance. If If it weren't for Tang San's mother and Tang San himself showing concern for Xiao Wu, then Xiao Wu would only end up being kept in captivity. If there was nothing that could cover up Xiao Wu's soul beast aura and it had to be given to Xiao Wu before Tang San came into contact with Xiao Wu, then there would be nothing to do with Xiao Wu.
It would be better if the protagonist's tone of voice is changed. The protagonists in the previous books seem to have the same way of speaking.
Can you add Xueyue Sword Immortal's swordsmanship and weapons into the novel?
Observe and recommend books
The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁
It started out well, but after just a few chapters it started to get toxic and stressful.
First, I wrote that I went to the Soul Hunting Forest to kill soul beasts and sell them for money, but as a result, three thousand year old snakes appeared while killing them, and then thirty thousand year old ants. Normally, the Spirit Hall would clear out the high-year-old ones to ensure the safety of soul hunting, but the three thousand year snakes alone were a big omission. The author felt that how could a soul beast with such a ten thousand year cultivation appear in an artificial forest, and what could it usually eat in a small forest if it was so powerful? The original author's level card is 29, isn't it because it takes a thousand years to go to Star Dou? The waste Gang doesn't have that ability. Nie Feng's Fengshen Legs are not as successful as the protagonist. He can approach the speed of sound right after he appears, and the speed of sound is more than a thousand kilometers an hour. Furthermore, after the protagonist absorbs a ring of 30,000 years plus the power of the Marrow Cleansing Pill, it will rise to three or four levels. People's normal absorption limit can basically be one level and nearly two levels higher. The protagonist has absorbed other people's six rings of six years. Normally, it is no problem to go straight to 20. How many levels do you think is reasonable?