The Storyteller Loves Immortal Lord at the Beginning, and the World Is Boiling

The writing becomes more and more fluent later on, and nearly 2/3 of the chapter is about Master Gu.

You can't even copy rubbish. Other storytellers have trump cards and invincible territory, so they dare to expose others' background. You just want to die and let others bully you.

Chirping, nondescript, what else is called Tian Thief Demon Lord looking for Buddhism for some unknown reason? Author, have you ever seen Master Gu? Or should you say that your understanding of Master Gu comes from the story line explanations on Douyin.

Hold on🌿, you signed the contract with 50,000 words, did you give it to him?

There are a lot of trolls in the comment area, and the popularity of the new book is more than that of real people😋I don't even think of trolls, I just want to gain traffic😋

Seriously, what's so great about the main character's shitty storyline? The only attractive thing about this book is the feedback from the public after relaying the plot of Gu Zhenren. Write a lot of things that are not there, purely to deceive people into subscribing. Especially the climax of the countercurrent river, was it interesting to deliberately delay it for so long? Has been removed from the bookshelf.

Sign the contract in Chapter 26? Did you give it?

The chatter is so nondescript that people have no intention of reading any more. It can be said that you are more than ten steps behind the Immortal Lord.

Let's just briefly mention the protagonist's chatter. Anyway, your writing is not very good. I only care about the story of Da Ai Xian Zun's experience and the attack on the indigenous people. It's almost reaching the reverse flow.

Chapter 25 is on the shelves, which studio produced it?

To be honest, it's a bit funny. I wish there were two and a half chapters out of the five chapters that are just the abbreviation of Gu Zhenren. How can I still collect the fees when I'm getting so much traffic? 😅

The plot of Shark Arm, you don't even want to read it. This title will only attract Gu book friends to scold you.

No, you tell stories about other worlds without any means, and you directly expose the concept of time travelers to the indigenous people. This is really forcibly subduing your intelligence. The normal world has already searched for you.

More than 20 yuan charge, typical writer's work, highly toxic

This is just like the commercial for "Gu Zhenren"

I just want to see how other worlds evaluate real people, but I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. The routines are too old, and the various identities seem to have names and extraordinary origins when meeting everyone. It can only be said to be flashy.

As expected, none of Gu's fanfics are well written, and the story line is terrible and not smooth at all.

The particularly exciting parts of the original text were written very blandly, such as Bai Ningbing's back stab and Dingxianyou. They were too bland. When those characters heard what the protagonist said, they didn't think they were very powerful.

Damn it, I have an idea, borrow a corpse to bring it back to life, use the storyteller to remove the seal of the Gu, just beautify the plot and copy the Gu. I have thought about the format of each chapter. What I want to talk about today is "The Legend of the Great Love Immortal, Chapter xxx: The Battle of the Big Ocean and the Stars"

The short videos are all promoting this book. Are those pirated apps?

Corny and stomach-churning. Judging from the writing, it is probably the ultimate boiling sheep.

Don't listen to the comments in the comment area. Your writing is okay. Please contribute a monthly ticket.

The book is not that good, but the one with dubbing on Douyin is much better.

It's true what the book friends said, I can't even copy it.

This storyteller should be beaten to death

I caught it on TikTok and it feels so exciting.

I came here specifically to spray it, and I was convinced. I kept reading until I saw something at the end. The forced ending was also 666. Haha, I can't even copy it.

No, it was fine in the front, but suddenly a blood demon jumped out from behind, and then it was a decisive battle. The book didn't even talk about the clones in the front, and the most exciting thing in the back of the Immortal Lord was not mentioned.

The author said it was a piece of shit

Talking about the outline, there are no famous scenes.