Red Dragon: Isn't My Dragon Life Full of Tragedy?

I came here for the dnd in the introduction and the red dragon in the title of the book. The first chapter is neither dnd nor red dragon. In dnd, First, elves and giant dragons are mortal enemies, not to mention the red dragon. The red dragon may have a good impression of the elves, but this is based on the quality of the elves' meat. It is delicious, smooth and chewy. This is the red dragon's evaluation of the elves. Compared with For example, the ancient red dragon "Flying Flame" Balagas Secondly, red dragons generally do not take good care of their offspring. It is normal to throw the eggs wherever they are laid. If the protagonist can be born in a dragon's nest, he is very lucky, but if a deformed dragon like the protagonist is generally considered a shame, he will chew it up instead of driving it out and letting it wander. Third, is the protagonist a time traveler or an indigenous red dragon? If he is a time traveler, what is his character like? If it is an indigenous red dragon, the dragon will begin to learn the knowledge of dragon inheritance in the dragon egg. In other words, the dragon is an intelligent creature that is born with knowledge. The dragon's character has been finalized since it broke the shell, rather than changing its cognition through acquired learning. There are rare cases of red dragons changing their habits, such as the ancient advanced red dragon "Hellfire" Imvarnao, but the age of the protagonist, is it possible? The author has applied the template of a human infant to shape his or her identity through acquired cognition onto a giant dragon that should have been born with knowledge Fourth, the protagonist is the red dragon, the head of the color dragon, which is a typical evil dragon. What kind of elf dares to communicate with the red dragon in a friendly manner? You are simply a typical elf and a flying fire-breathing lizard in Japanese western fantasy, and have nothing to do with the dnd worldview Fifth, in DND, the red dragon is a typical chaotic evil in the nine-square grid camp. Even if the camp shifts, it will not exceed one grid. This is determined innately, and the dragon is a high-level magical race that has ruled the entire Faerun. The arrogance in its character is natural. Even the silver dragon, the friendliest among the metal dragons, is also very arrogant. The character of the protagonist is not even a giant dragon, let alone a red dragon. So, I suspect that the author has never understood the world view of the Forgotten Realms and Red Dragon. Judging from the dozens of comments, how many are critical, the author should delete the dnd in the introduction.

Being a dragon or a red dragon cannot change your dog-licking attributes. It seems that you are indeed a dog-licking person from the depths of your soul.

No, a priest in a small border town can know what the Holy Lady Jiaoyan is doing. This Jiaoyan is really good.

I can't see the main plot, and the more I watch, the more I become more and more fascinated.

In the extraordinary world, useless emotions will basically lead to tragedy

There are no characters in Thunder in the Beginning who have experienced emotions, interests or equal life contracts. Normally, even if a creature with dragon blood shows that it can listen to someone, its value is not low. The point value of a living summoned beast is much higher than the value of killing it. However, this book is a mess without any shaping on both sides. They think it is affectionate but wants to be kicked more than a licking dog that won't bark.

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Let me remind you first, this is not Shuangwen 😭. If you want to read Shuangwen, you can go there.

If the writing is not good, everyone should scold me. At least I will know that everyone is really reading 😭😭

Already invested, come on, I'll give you a recommendation vote

I feel that the climax should be after chapter thirty-nine of the first volume. When I wrote Mufeng Town, my writing was indeed a bit delayed. An old man criticized it before and drained the readers' enthusiasm for no reason. The main purpose of the town is to let the protagonist first understand the dangers of the world. There is a very interesting limerick. The urban routine is deep. I want to go back to the countryside. The roads in the countryside are also slippery and people's hearts are more complicated. So I still wrote some of the previous things.

A few questions: 1. The Riddler, there are many strange places in the beginning, "Damn, why is this time." When is it mentioned? 2. The opening chapter is all from the third person (God's perspective). I thought about the title of the book for a long time before I realized that the dragon was the protagonist. 3. A dragon turns into a human, and then becomes an ordinary person... You don't know this most basic point of dragon poison, right? 4. There is no sense of expectation, no sense of substitution, and no golden finger. What abilities this dragon has can't be seen in the first ten chapters. 5. The pace is slow. The first chapter describes the entanglement with the saint, the second chapter talks about the dragon that does not kill people and does not love money, and the third and fourth chapters enter the village and follow the flow of mortals, with a little conspiracy but never revealed. The endless daily routine exhausts the reader's patience. 6. There is a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. There is no main narrative line and no complete story. It is better to change the eighth chapter to the first chapter. Starting from the arrest, the violent conflicts and the protagonist's behavior that are somewhat different from the ordinary five-color dragon slowly recall the entanglement with the saint through the details and plot. 7. What about the world view? Is this a forgotten country or a catastrophic setting sun? Or some self-created map? In which empire is the protagonist's town located? On which continent and how big is this continent? 8. There is no dragon flavor at all, not even dragon-skinned people. The protagonist is replaced by a fugitive with a high reward, which is more suitable for the content of the article. 9. Plot design, description, etc. Are very problematic. These are basic skills and I won't go into details. Summary: The text is relatively smooth, but there are a lot of problems. I also submitted it to the newcomer crematorium category of light novels. I don't understand why I was able to sign the contract, but if I continue like this, it is impossible to meet the basic requirements of a round of trial promotion. Let's reconsider it after reading other dragon novels.

In fact, the writing style is okay, at least it's not that uncomfortable to read. However, the plot arrangement and the protagonist's character are a bit difficult. The author repeatedly emphasizes that this is not a good article, but the writing is a bit poor, and it doesn't feel that way. Forget it, I don't want to be too harsh on new authors, just try your best to finish this book, and polish the story and characters in the next book.