The Fourth Day of Disaster Starts with the Blue Star Administrator

The writing is too messy, isn't it? Spend so many chapters writing about appraising antiques in the early stage of the Fourth Natural Disaster? Can't this kind of thing be written simply? I came here mainly for real-life games, but ended up writing a lot of stuff 😒

The power of thermal weapons has been reduced too much

Let's just make Zhang Kai the protagonist and keep writing about him

As a GM, there is no way I would end up causing trouble myself.

Um, I won't comment anymore. I posted it but it was deleted by the author.

Good subject matter. Personally, I feel that writing behind the scenes can make it popular! ! In a system like yours, what does the protagonist show off? !

The number of players is growing too slowly, and the protagonist's operations are too boring. You need to know that you can accumulate energy while growing. There are only 12 people in Chapter 62. You need to know that adding one player a day means one more energy income. If the number of players reaches 24, will the time for the protagonist to accumulate energy be shorter? This does not include the excess energy during the period of accumulating the number of players. I can only say that the author's writing is a bit conservative.

I haven't even written the introduction for a long time... The previous plots are too cliche. The author climaxes first and then feeds you the subsistence allowance. You get wet before you reach the climax. .

It makes my head hurt. I would say that the characters in it are smart, but not many of them are clever. There are also problems with the portrayal of the police. They knew that the area where the crime occurred was dangerous but did not seal it off. They knew that there were abnormal creatures but still let ordinary police officers come in. They also let tourists go to dangerous areas. Whenever the protagonist sends a system to an unknown policeman handling the case, a few people will die less. There were so many counterintuitive details in it that it sent painful signals to my brain. We all know that the author pushed the plot forward for the sake of drama, but it was too inconsistent. As for the reason for the violation, it should be that the author's writing is too close to reality, but he cannot deal with the details, so it is very fragmented. Be extravagant and don't stick too close to reality. The water of reality is too deep for you, the author, to grasp.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is rubbish. As an administrator. The result is that he is worse than a dog. No more players. I dance by myself every day.

I don't know what happened later. The opening was too poorly written.

The subject matter is good, but what the author writes is not consistent with what the readers need. I have this system and have been recruiting players for a long time. And is Zhang Kai the son of the protagonist? I play with him every day.

When I saw Chapter 6, there was no movement at all about the Fourth Natural Disaster. The protagonist would just lie flat when he got the system, and it was not as good as the supporting characters who could operate it.

The subject matter is very good, but the author has not figured out what readers want to see and has been slow to increase the number of game players. The protagonist in this kind of novel is inherently biased.

Fourth! It has the potential to be a great player, but the updates are a bit unimpressive. The best time is 7:00 or 9:00 p. M.

I could still take a look before it was put on the shelves, but after it was put on the shelves, I got some parasites and it was like nonsense and completely collapsed

I didn't get to the topic in Chapter 5, so I quit immediately.

It's a bit interesting. The plot develops too slowly

The opening is average, but it's okay as you continue reading 🤫

Very good subject matter, keep it up!

Not bad at first. . I retreated when I saw the female assistant possessed by a foreigner.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! I would like to recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and lived by making bad movies" is hilarious...

Come on😊