2008, Return to the Prosperous Era

Tell me about your personal feelings. I felt good at the beginning, but the results were not good. The shortcoming may be the plot arrangement or the rhythm. The simplest way is to compare it with the Great God's (who falls in love after being reborn). It's also about borrowing money. I read more than a hundred chapters in that book and it didn't even mention how the heroine caused trouble in her family. In this book, not only does the heroine's mother come to visit, but the heroine's father also asks the protagonist to dig coal. That's it. Among the heroines, I personally think the artistic and cheerful sister is cuter. But it turns out that the main description is of the scheming sister from the science school. But my sister keeps finding trouble, and the description makes me feel that the male protagonist is a bit silly Look at how cute and obedient Feng Shunan is in the book. ………… …… To put it simply, on the one hand, this book is not fun enough to make money, and it keeps causing trouble (the heroine's parents). On the other hand, the description of the love story is not sweet enough, so it's okay not to add sugar, and it always adds a bitter description of the scheming sister. Perhaps someone can write a sweet story about this kind of dark-hearted girl, but you, the author, obviously can't. Finally, from the perspective of the real environment. Life and work are becoming more and more stressful, and people increasingly dislike strong and oppressive heroines and supporting characters. To put it another way, I don't want to see the protagonist being arranged but unable to resist (the most typical one is that almost no one uses the cheats that will be wiped out if they don't obey, and even the cheats that force tasks will be disliked by a lot). It is best whether by relying on plug-ins, relying on prediction, or relying on cleverness, the protagonist can turn passivity into initiative. ………… I can only say that the book itself is okay, but it is not suitable for the current environment, and this kind of book is not very sweet in love, but has a sweetness. If you don't want to make money describing it, highlight a strange thing. Or both. This book is a bit inferior

To be honest, the recent rebirth stories are all designed by scumbag men (who are not proactive or responsible) and work hard to make money! However, who understands life and continues to make money after being reborn? ? In the 1980s and 1990s, passenger lines were developed, logistics companies were deployed after 2000, and Tencent stocks and Bitcoin were made in 10 years later. Wouldn't it be good to buy a large number of gold bricks and sit back after making money?

Alas, the city is really cruel, and there are many big bosses at the same time. It will be free to write for a while. If you can't wait for the second round of recommendations, you can only put it on the shelves in advance~

Baozi is a fermented product and will continue to ferment if it is not steamed for a certain period of time. Therefore, most baozi shops are basically freshly made and steamed. Therefore, basically supermarkets have frozen dumplings or frozen glutinous rice balls but not frozen buns.

Hey, am I on any list? The collection has doubled in a flash 😂

Reminds me of a book plot The first day Ang: Didn't you do it yesterday? Why are you still acting coy today (bad smile) Yu: What, my sister has already done it with him, then me. . . Half push and half push The next day Ang: Didn't you do it yesterday? Why are you still coquettish today (smirk) Niao: What, my sister has already done it with him, then me. . . Half push, half push [Manual dog head]

There is no shortage of women among yellow-haired men? I regret that I will not be a prostitute in my future life 😢

I remember that around 2000 years ago, there were a few young people (both male and female), I remember they were from Henan. They were steaming buns outside the town and riding bicycles to various villages. They were among the last batch of sellers.

Is Lao Deng reincarnated or an alien demon? The book is good

I see some brothers and sisters come in and complain that "the goal of earning 300,000 yuan in two years is too low" or "the book has no main plot". How can I put it this way? Aaron's novel is about daily life and making money, not about romance. It's not a fantasy novel. He is an orphan starting from scratch. It doesn't matter that he has no background. Isn't it nonsense to earn the small goal that Mr. Wang mentioned in one go? As for the main plot, people have different opinions. In the early stage, the main plot is not controversial, it is just about making money. In the mid-term, due to the development needs of the heroine, some entertainment plots will be introduced; in the later period, after the career takes off, the focus will be on the love plot. What Aaron likes most is that some people say that the writing is not good enough, and this is true. Because when I started writing the book, I decided that the book would focus on the plot and try to make the text smooth and smooth. The entrepreneurial goal I chose was also very close to everyone's life. Maybe I am just an ordinary person. To be honest, if I had to choose between dazzling writing and plot, I would choose the latter without hesitation. Because I have also written books with dazzling writing skills, the results are really hard to describe~

Only write two heroines? I feel like three is just right

I feel that writing "I Want to Be a Yellow Hair after Rebirth" will be read by many people 🤭

Brother, you've been reborn and you're selling meat buns? I couldn't sell meat buns in my previous life. Romance novels, Huang Mao writes a lot.

If the Su sisters were not written about, the results might be better 🙂

I just read the third chapter. The protagonist obviously borrowed the money himself and thought of his own way to make money. Why does he have to share the money he makes with his younger brother in proportion? Wouldn't it be enough to just pay them wages? If we divide the money proportionally now, will we still have to give them 60% of the shares when we open a company in the future?

He said that your writing skills are not inferior to those of great writers. As expected, I admire you. Come on, author, I will continue to pursue you.

After reading it in one sitting, I found that there was nothing wrong with the author's writing and logic, and the content was also very clean, unlike those weird books on the urban channel's new book list. But there is indeed a dull problem. After reading it, I looked back and thought about it. From an emotional point of view, the reader's mood is more stable during the reading process. In other words, there is no hook to catch people. The reader may lose passion while reading, and then switch to other books. In other words, this book does not provide enough emotional value to readers during the middle period of reading, so it is a bit of a pity. Actually, I quite like this kind of plain writing, but what's a little strange is that some novels are enjoyable to read even if they are written in a plain way. The author's plain writing also makes me read a little plain, and I don't know why. But I have an idea. The author's writing style should be quite suitable for writing very realistic farming novels (that is, novels that describe the development of technology, territory, and political systems in detail. I will mention a few books in the comments later, which correspond to the author's comment that his career line is too long. Questions that can bring into play the author's strengths) At this point, I suddenly remembered that the author mentioned a box office dividend system in the recent chapters. The author mentioned it and passed it by. But when I saw it, I thought it was quite interesting, and it was something that no one else had written about. (For example, it may not necessarily be suitable for this book. For example, writing about box office dividends, what is the process, and what impact does the final change of this system have? The writing is a little more integrated, and it feels like a plot that can provide emotional value. At least for me, this is a very reasonable imagination. It should be like this but the system design has not been realized in reality. It is quite cool to realize it in the novel.) As for the operation of this book, it also provides the author with two ideas that I thought of. First, the author can try to promote this book on more book lists and channels. After all, this book has so many words and it reads smoothly. If you attract a reader, you may get a full subscription, which is very cost-effective. Second, the author can try to come up with some of his own ideas for improving the current situation. Whether it is to write this book better or to write a new book, this is necessary, otherwise the new book may face the same dilemma (insufficient emotional value). The above are some personal humble opinions. Share them with the author and keep working hard.

After reading Chapter 90, I was confused. I didn't know what to say. Going to Hong Kong and selling mines again?

The beginning is amazing, it's hard not to follow this character 😊

Emm, why is no one recommending this book? Hope it doesn't cut. .

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The Huangmao Patriarch, Shao Thief, had something to say: The best way to play with women is to use the Nine-Rank Zhongzheng System. Disciples and grandchildren, remember this!

To be honest, after seeing the latest chapter, if Su Qingluan was just such a slut, she could have reduced the length! When such a big boss goes out to socialize and then comes back to be jealous, he doesn't have any eyesight. I think this character creation is a failure.

Author, will the protagonist still go to school?

It's not enough. When will it be released?

When will the author publish it? Update quickly

Come on, come on 😡😡😡

In the story about rebirth, the heroine's previous life belonged to another man, so no matter how well-written it is, others have used it first. Others don't know, but the protagonist does.

Good looking😭😭😭

Well, no need for Shen Nong, I have tried it myself. I won't talk about the plot after the third golden chapter 🤐