Swallowing the Starry Sky Begins from Traveling Through Bolan

If you want to write this, don't get involved with Luo Feng. Don't get involved with Luo Feng's experience in the original Tomato book. Is it possible that you have to practice in the same dungeon with Luo Feng to become a true god? Can't you create a better character for Bolan? He was originally the number one genius, but Tomato didn't mention it when he wrote that he became an immortal in the end. Since you have traveled through time, you should shape it well, write some new experience scenes, and polish this character's character. Luo Feng can have a role, but don't write Luo Feng so mentally retarded, okay? I have to give you some tips to know that the Blood Luo Crystal can be integrated with the Golden Horn clone. Polish the character of Bo Lan and imagine some new experience scenes and opportunities to write. Your story will become a good work. Don't come to suppress Luo Feng to prove that you, the protagonist, pretend to be 13

As the protagonist, can you stop being "Li Luo" and "Bo Lan" for a while? It's too dramatic. If you travel through time and walk the world as "Bo Lan", don't let this name appear again.

Li Luo is your own name as the author, right? If you don't change your stubborn nature, you will be Li Luo and Bo Lan for a while. You can enjoy yourself and delete the book.

It's a bit like another movie Swallowing the Starry Sky. Luo Feng fuses the Bloodfall Crystal, and you fuse too. Luo Feng has a mechanical treasure, and the latest chapter also has it. There must be components in the back. Blind guessing is definitely stronger than Luo Feng's wings, because the protagonist of this book has to be stronger than Luo Feng in everything. I can basically guess the subsequent plot.

Will writing the word "Bolan" mean death or something? Is your name Li Luo? Do you recognize these two words?

I was tired of watching many earth-based openings, but I found that it was quite interesting and new to see a book that traveled back in time to an alien genius like Bolan. But at present, it seems that the protagonist's psychology, performance and personality have not been able to establish a more charming image, and even seem a bit arrogant and frivolous. To be honest, I don't object to the protagonist having a harem, but emotional scenes are inherently difficult for Swallowing Starry Sky to handle. The author's current writing doesn't seem to be that effective, so would it be better to use strengths and avoid weaknesses and reduce the length? And now it seems that the character and character are not as good as the original Bolan. Bolan at least values ​​​​cultivation, determination and hard work. I personally think that cultivation and protection are the main themes of Devour. I don't know if it's because I haven't watched enough of it, but it was the first time I saw a relationship develop into the bedroom in Chaos City. Whether it is the description of Bolan's experience or the guidance of Qianshui Aichen to the current secret method, the protagonist's arrogant attitude towards the original characters as a time traveler has been fully reflected. Of course, I know that the protagonist, as a time traveler, knows the plot and has cheats and has such an attitude. Friendly discussion, I hope the author can write better.

In the continent of origin, a normal life should be a true god when he reaches adulthood.

Does the word "Li Luo" mean that money can be added and cannot be changed?

I remember there was a novel called Swallowing the Starry Sky: Destroying the Tongtian Bridge at the Beginning, but later it was renamed: Swallowing the Starry Sky: I am the Holy King. The protagonist also has a clone in the origin continent. Then the protagonist only has a few thousand years to become the master of the universe. Then the clone was also in the Origin Continent and directly became a disciple of a god king.

En, I did some calculations. Only when the avatar evolves to a true god can the main body break through the perfect gene. The premise is that it is useful to absorb the blood crystal before a hundred times the gene.

If you don't know how to write dialogues in battle, you don't have to write them. It's too middle-class, and the impression will be reduced by two levels.

Bolan's stepping stone, at least Cody must be considered a genius.

It's coming 😜 Hurry up and explode

How about calling the giant beast clone Li Luo?

The book has to be good, and there are very few conflicts with the original work. But how can I put it, everything is good, but nowhere is it good. The writing of training is too simple. I don't care if I am simple. The key is that the whole team related to the protagonist is simple. I personally feel that this is a lightning point. But overall, it is a pretty awesome book among Devouring fandoms.

Can you add money to your name as Li Luo? If you name Bo Lan, money will be deducted.

I've read a lot of fics, but none of them have worn the body of the golden-horned beast whose body was taken away by Luo Feng. It's so interesting to have two souls in one body 🙂, and it can also be compared to the original work.

There are many time-traveling protagonists in Devouring fandoms, and I think these time-travelers can be roughly divided into three categories: the protagonist time-travels, but there is no such person in the original book; the protagonist time-travels into a character whose characteristics and training are not much mentioned in the original book (such as the very typical Yang Wu, and Baikaro, etc.); The protagonist time-travels into a character in the original work who has relatively few scenes and distinctive personality characteristics (for example, there was a previous book that time-traveled to the God of Thunder, and there are two recent new books, this one is transformed into Bolan, and the other is transformed into King Zhenyan). I read that in the previous book about Yang Wu, the protagonist was named Yang Wu before time travel, so he was also called Yang Wu after that. After the time in the book when he traveled to hundreds of Carlo, the name was unified into Bai Carlo. Now the way the two new books are handled is that the protagonist has his own name. In the book of Zhenyan King, the protagonist's name has always been Sun Hou, while in this book the protagonist's name is Li Luo. Nowadays, everyone in the book review area is more inclined to unify the names of the authors. They think that non-unification creates a sense of fragmentation, and they seem to want to unify the names into Bolan? The reason I posted this post is to discuss why book friends feel that there is a sense of separation and are relatively more willing to use Bolan's name as the main name? Is it because it sounds better than Li Luo? Another point is, I would like to ask whether the sense of separation you think comes mainly from the name or the personality? I think it's very fragmented because I already have a basic impression of the character of Bolan in the original work. The protagonist's current personality is very different from Bolan himself. If the name is unified into Bolan and the personality is completely different, will it be more dramatic? Or do book friends think that the protagonist is already a new person after time travel, and it doesn't matter what Libolan's character is in the original setting, as long as it is unified into one name so that it does not appear that there are two people interspersed? Friendly discussion 🙂 (By the way, are there any book friends who have read the author's old books? Does the author reply to book reviews before? I see that there seems to be no reply in the past few days.)

With that golden finger around, it doesn't make any difference whether it's Bolan or not.

Is your clone in the Origin Continent? The flow of time is also wrong. Tomato writes that one day is one day in the origin and one year is one year in the original universe.

Wasn't it Ai Chen who came first at the beginning, "Why did he become Qianshui?" Heroine

I haven't read the entire Tomato book, but according to the brief introduction, is Poland similar to Jun Wu from The Wilderness?

Why not write about the fusion of Kong Feng? The original book doesn't seem to mention his Five Elements talent. It says he has a low-level wind.