I'm in Naruto, I Faked My Death at the Beginning and Got Away

I couldn't hold on in the first chapter. I traveled through time as a baby and survived for more than thirty years. It wasn't until the plot of the Kumogakure Mission that things started to happen. I don't expect good results with this setting.

If I remember correctly, Hizashi and Hizashi are twins, and you started wearing them as babies, so if you killed them when you were young, wouldn't you be a clan member?

Toxic, Payne will let an unknown person join Akatsuki? Don't talk about this kind of terrorist organization with shady motives. Any formal organization will not let a person who doesn't even know his appearance join, just like you won't let someone you don't know at all enter your home. Even a 3-year-old child understands this. It's hard for you to write such a retarded plot just for the sake of word count.

Thirty years have passed, and the plot has changed to waiting for death without doing anything? That's damned, and so is this book.

Good luck! As soon as you enter, you will be poisoned!

After reading 28 pictures, I felt that the protagonist had no idea what he was doing after he faked his death. He kept drifting with the flow and passively advancing the plot. This does not mean that joining Akatsuki is not good. The problem is to write out the protagonist's purpose, what he wants to do, what he wants to get, and how to improve after joining Akatsuki. The current main plot should be to open the reincarnation eye, but adding Akatsuki and writing a lot of troubles, and also having to hide and seek with Black Zetsu, there are a lot of irrelevant things.

I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter. I'm still like this after thirty years. I'll just die.

Brother, I guess not many people will read your book. .

This book is not good. It has too many poisonous points. I suggest you cut it later.

You said you closed your eyes, wouldn't you just find a mask without holes? When fighting, just turn on the white eye perspective. Not to mention contact lenses, sunglasses, masks and sunglasses. Is it okay for you to wear a black silk pullover? What if you squint your eyes? No matter what happens, you can bring a four-tube tube. There is also the one that exploded and wrote an art on the map before leaving. It's so embarrassing that I can't do it... What? Are you a god of food? Stephen Zhou? Are you writing on the map? I didn't read the rest, but you can try it

After reading the reviews, it turns out that the protagonist started traveling through time 30 years ago, and nothing has changed in the next 30 years. Only when it is about to die, I can only say thank you to Shennong... 30 Years, and this is the only one that is 30 years old in the Naruto world and can only fake death.

Hinata is not the eldest son. After watching the protagonist's defection, the protagonist went to browse the catalog. The results seemed to be no surprise. The protagonist is like a headless fly, with unclear goals and insufficient mobility.

After finishing the 100,000 Detonation Talisman, I started quantum reading to find something to watch. However, I didn't see it and didn't talk about it. The more I read about the protagonist, the worse it became. Before the fake death, I thought you had set it up blindly before starting, but after the fake death, there were no highlights. When I said I was looking for dragon veins, I ran to Xiao within two chapters. Apart from pulling out a few original characters to tell the story, I couldn't see any use in Xiao. There is no showy operation, and I don't see any troubles or plots. The advantage turns into strength, and I am even a loser, eh.

Dragon Vein was halfway through the search, and met Xie, and then Pain recruited him or something. Scorpion was recruited by Xiaonan, and was later invited to join Akatsuki. What about Dragon Vein?