Red Mansion: Bastard's Counterattack

It is said to be mentally retarded when it is put on the shelf. After being assassinated, the assassin performs a chapter of a painful scene, telling the assassin that he wants to live with me to confront your patron, but I have to take the exam now, so you follow my uncle to his house and wait until I finish the exam. Finally added: If you want to leave, I will never stop you. Just think that I, Jia Huan, have misjudged the person. If you don't tie them up and let the three assassins go home with your uncle, how much hatred does your uncle have against you? You misjudged the person later and you were really not joking. The assassin came to assassinate you and you don't know the assassin. Why do you trust the assassin so much?

This book is quite satisfactory, but the characters are relatively reasonable and the characters are not designed to be extreme just for the sake of conflict. Jia Mu should have great wisdom, otherwise she would not be able to support the Rongguo Mansion, and she would not be able to cultivate Jia Min. Therefore, first of all, the design of Jia Mu in this book is more reasonable, and she also retains her love for Baoyu. Jia Jing and Jia She also handled the situation very well, and people will change if they give hope. It's just that the design of Xichun and Tanchun is not good. Xichun likes Jia Huan and develops too fast without paving the way, which is very embarrassing. The daily rhythm of the book is soothing, and the conflicts between the characters are not so sharp, so the daily life is bound to be soothing. In short, the shortcomings of this book are not too fatal and can be read; the highlights are basically non-existent except for the combination of civil and military brothers to make the subsequent plot more reasonable and distinctive. However, it is quite healing for me who basically only read Red Mansions at the beginning. You have already voted for your monthly vote, please come on!

A three-piece set of "Dream of Red Mansions" fan fiction: Wang Xifeng, Qin Keqing and Qingwen. These three people, in the original work, are not serious people. For some reason, it has become a three-piece set for fan fiction. This novel also makes this mistake. Even in the case of Red Mansions Huacai, where Wang Xifeng killed Second Sister You, the author of the novel glorified Wang Xifeng and vilified Second Sister You with a stroke of his pen. Since the author does not emphasize morality, why did the author crazily belittle Xue Baochai? The funniest thing is that the author's reason for belittling Xue Baochai is precisely because he thinks Xue Baochai is calculating. And Wang Xifeng is ten times better than Xue Baochai in terms of precise calculation, and 100 times better than Xue Baochai in Haidu. Why does the author kneel down and lick it again? Many fan authors make absolutely no sense logically. Who do they kneel and lick, who do they belittle? It makes absolutely no sense logically.

After realizing that he was Jia Huan, shouldn't his first thought be how to quietly let Mrs. Wang die "naturally"? Studying, imperial examinations, etc. Can be carried out after Mrs. Wang's death.

If you could choose someone else to be the heroine, I would give you my monthly vote. Don't let Daiyu be the heroine anymore. I'm tired of seeing it. For example, if you collect Tanchun, you will have new ideas.

1: Fight with women. He went to Jiangnan to help Lin Ruhai, intending to kill someone, but ended up taking a woman with him. You are already at a disadvantage, but you think there are not enough flaws? Or too energetic? Doing things in a dangerous zone, your nerves are too tense, your energy is wasted, do some backyard chores, coax women, and relax? 2: Water. It took such a long time to fail the imperial examination, but it's not even half of it. Suppress bandits, skip it no problem. On the way down to the south of the Yangtze River, more than ten chapters have not been finished, and they are still ambiguous. 3: Save the Jia family Think about changing the Jia family every day. To put it another way, although a few people were nice to the protagonist, they were treated even more badly. Separate yourself early and climb up. Isn't it easy to win over a few people? 4: Frustrated There was no problem before the momentum started, but it was over after the momentum started. They have become clan leaders, and the Jia Cong they have trained has become a general. As a result, my sister was frightened by the big face and almost died. In the end, if you just ask them and let them mess with it, it will be gone. Always talk about filial piety. But your identity and stance are different. As a younger generation, you have to endure it, but you still have the status of the clan leader, and you are still one of the future members of the Jia family. It's not easy to deal with, so I have to bite the bullet and do it.

A small suggestion to the author: use as few Internet terms as possible. Like what the hell did I do or something. It feels really uncomfortable to watch

Writing about a bastard who started his career as a soldier makes me feel good. What about studying for the imperial examination? Then Mrs. Wang pops up and comes to suppress me in all kinds of ways. I already feel like vomiting. Why? Reading is for comfort, and I don't like being abused. It's strange that many authors write about being abused and fighting back, or licking dogs. It feels like they wouldn't be able to write otherwise.

Repaying kindness with kindness? The protagonist starts the game in such a way that other servants of the Jia family, including Yingchun and Xichun, know about it, but Tanchun doesn't know about it, which shows how cold her family relationship is. In my opinion, this sister-brother relationship can be over. Because your book requires fan points to be reviewed, I ordered a chapter, but I was very unhappy when I saw the protagonist gently put down his sister while he was in a coma for a day and a night and ignored him without even knowing that something happened to him.

😰😰😰 I remember many authors who wrote ancient texts. The one who wrote about the little maid was a junior high school student in her previous life. She was not old enough and her body was not mature. When cousins ​​discussed marriage, they said that the child would be deformed. How could it disappear after being placed in the Red Mansion?

How can I put it? It's no wonder that it is not conspicuous in these few Red Mansions of the same period. If you put it in a light novel fanfic and write it as a fun article, it would be just right. If you put it in a historical novel, especially the Red Mansion type, I can only say that it is a bit fun. The protagonist is both civilized and military, and the clown king's wife is offline at the speed of light. But there is really no way to praise it. The various plot designs can only be said to be routine and inferior. , The dialogues and names of the characters make my head hurt. There is no essence of Red Mansions at all. If you don't want to delve into this book, I still recommend you to read it.

Is it the heroine Lin Meimei? 😍😍

Can Baoyu be written to death? It's rare to write Baoyu to death.

For example, this

I used to read Jia Lian's time-travel novels. My father, Jia He, was tortured by the protagonist until he was left with half his life. He could only lie in bed and wait for death. The protagonist couldn't help but suffocate the old man himself. I have seen that most people must let themselves die of illness, and the protagonist must do it himself. Carrying the hidden danger of patricide. How unbearable it is. Even if you get some tonics to kill him while he's sick, that's fine. Be sure to ask for help. I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up.

Everything else is well portrayed, but Jia Baoyu's portrayal feels a bit silly. I feel that Baoyu is just naive and likes romance, but not to the point where he doesn't know the importance.

Is Jia Jing too indifferent to Jia Rong? After all, he is his biological grandson.

The writing is pretty good! Rating 7 points, it beautifies the family infighting and characters! Just look at the 1987 version of the Red Mansion and you will see how much it has been beautified! Try to highlight some of the character conflicts, otherwise it will make people feel that there are little pitfalls and will not be enjoyable.

Very good, keep up the good work(ง•̀_•́)ง