
Reincarnation Paradise: Roulette of Realms
轮回乐园:诸界轮盘
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- Completed
- Length
- 680k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I can only say that I hope it won't be written as dog licking. Many people write it as dog licking after writing it, which directly becomes a big poisonous point, especially for newcomers.
I feel that the protagonist is getting weaker and weaker in the future, especially after the skill tree comes out. Not to mention other abilities. With this skill tree, other abilities cannot be used. They directly become this node or that node, and there are still abilities with big problems, the ability to kill yourself. All the abilities that are obvious at a glance are gone, and then become nodes that can kill you if used too much. It's so famous, not to mention other things, just the World Thunder. After using this skill scroll, this skill will disappear directly, and the protagonist will not be able to use the World Thunder. If you write it as a skill tree to convert these skills into something more friendly to the protagonist, it will be fine if the protagonist can use these abilities without side effects. There is nothing to say. The result is that even if the protagonist learns the World Thunder, the protagonist will not be able to use the World Thunder after learning it, or the protagonist will not know the skills he has learned. This is very scrambled eggs. Anyway, it just gives people the impression that even if the protagonist is given the source of God, the protagonist will not become a god, and the ability to become a god will become useless in the hands of the protagonist. Especially after the protagonist has a woman around him, the book has changed and it has become like a Japanese anime. Readers who read this book can read this book as a Japanese comic. The Japanese comic flavor is very strong.
Old pigeon, there are only about 20 chapters to describe the equipment and skills after the return of the second world. The equipment must be upgraded in each world. How do you plan to write it? At least three of the seven weapons are unusable, and resources are required to upgrade them. The applicable ranges of the weapons overlap too much, and this small horse-drawn cart will drag you to death. Since you have decided to focus on swordsmanship, why not turn the seven deadly sins into passive weapons and change them into two types? I feel that you respect the profession and talent of the original work, so I won't say anything. Just increase the size of the equipment and equip it with seven gems in the end?
Why are you still writing about yourself in such a high-spirited way? (▼ Plate▼#) Do you think you can read the updates these days? 🥵 You only need to know that he has a miserable life experience. He writes so much.
Only, personal opinion
Is this a harem or something? The feeling doesn't go well with reincarnation. After all, walking techniques have high requirements on xinxing. Will they tend to be as bland as water or extremely happy? It depends on the individual. Regarding this aspect, although I feel that many of the people who come to see Samsara are beheading girls or bloodthirsty viewers Feelings If there are multiple female protagonists, maybe... It is best if the interests are related, and being able to kill each other will be in line with the style of Samsara br>I feel like it would be safer to engage in lyb. If they are all invincible, the requirements for secondary professions are very high. Luck ones may be better. If you have one sword skill for melee skills, then you still have one long-range one and one support, archery and energy specialization? In terms of reincarnation, Akatsuki's fun is still fun. It's best to cooperate occasionally, the kind of mutual benefit In terms of destiny, it depends on how it changes. You can try fusion in the future Now that there is an equation, it can be combined~( ̄▽ ̄~)~ The breath of wind feels useless There is no sense of existence Fate path, in fact, there are too many life paths that can be obtained and it is difficult to specialize. It depends on the author's allocation of fate. It is better to be multi-faceted or specialize in one or a few points Like the pure beauty star god's influence on the charm attribute, some of them can be used as attribute point selection and direction development.
Aren't you really afraid of being ruined if you are so cheating in prison?
Regarding one point, why do you have to buy things at a lower price than the market price? I don't understand it after reading the original book. It's already 10% lower. This is not much different from selling to a chamber of commerce, and it saves you time in setting up a stall. You said you wanted to make more money, so why did you lower the price so much? Moreover, if you don't have anyone hosting you, you will only deduct 5% of the tax, which will also save you time in setting up a stall.
Simple and invincible text
It's good. It's a simple invincible article. It's estimated that the first level of combat power can reach the third level. I'm afraid that the hook is not big enough and it's not fun enough. Otherwise, why would I read the fanfic? I might as well read the original work. I'm afraid that the hook is too big and the author can't control it.
Just don't say "we". When you see "we", you think of Zhu Yuanzhang, why don't you just say "I"?
I feel that the protagonist's roulette wheel is too buggy. There are dozens of worlds in Xeon. There are many good things in the designated range. Unless the winning rate is forcibly lowered, there will not be many good things in the future. Maybe there will be these things in the future: 1. Legion-type abilities (compared to Su Xiao Zerg) ps: I feel that the lord world is quite suitable for developing legions. Let's see if we can draw similar things in advance (convenient to have enough resources to grab the treasure trove of big forces) 2. Spirit Soul-like abilities (or the only kind of rare gems, one for each weapon form) 3. Sub-career and its related promotion inheritance (the protagonist always needs to expand his side job when he is short of money and attributes): Pharmacy, sealing, etc. 4. Techniques (sublimation) 5. Breaking the limit of attributes similar to Dawn 6. Black Maple 7. The last growth equipment 8. Servant 9. Origin Stone. World (the only heaven) Life, always have to face Su Xiao) or other detachment methods 10. The high-level ones seem to be called base plates or something that can be inserted into runes, like that thing (Mosquito has not updated for a long time and forgot to read it) 11. Other good equipment such as: Su Xiao's soul crown (fill up the equipment column, maybe you can choose one that forcibly improves the quality of the equipment, and use it for worthy equipment) 12. Rare resources or potions (such as those made from the fruit of the Void Tree) The potion is similar to the soul fruit in the world of lords that increases the level and upper limit of sword skills) 13. Lucky equipment similar to Su Xiao's lighter (strengthens the advantage) 14. Original fragments or a whole piece, various sources, soul coins, soul essence and other high-level resources (get it later) 15. Original sin objects (upgrade weapons or get a book of original sin?) That's all I can think of now.
With the background of the protagonist, who would dare to mess with him in the later stage? There are more than 20 powerful inheritors. Once this formation is laid out, they are about the same as the Feather Clan Demon Clan. If they can be suppressed in the later stage, ask Brother Xiao for a few original sin objects. After all, can't they be resurrected? Anyone who dares to take action will die in front of him. Let him kneel in front of you and beg you not to die If you don't like anyone, go to his house and die once, and the original sin object will be released in his house.
Infinite Stream also added some star iron, and I really like the setting, but the author has almost no description of fighting, environment, psychology, and character appearance. I felt uncomfortable watching it and couldn't stand it.
For example, even if the protagonist eats the thunder fruit, the protagonist will not be able to use the thunder ability. Even if the protagonist eats the thunder fruit, the protagonist will not have the thunder ability. It's so fucked up that I will lose interest in watching it.
Feedback on System Tree issues
From the current evaluation, after the phylogenetic tree capability is released, it can be said that the creativity is very good, but the actual performance is very poor. The good thing is that the protagonist's abilities equivalent to more than 20 professions are integrated. From the front, I always feel that the protagonist will explode sooner or later. It would be better to solve this problem. But later, the system tree integrates all its capabilities. The settings are good, but the actual performance is very poor. To put it bluntly, it is just empty talk. The first question, the issue of growth, integrates all professions. I can understand it as integrating the essence of all professions, but what about growth? Although the upper limit you mentioned is very high, what you wrote is that the ability to grow is locked. Apart from skills, you simply cannot become stronger through your own practice. For example, after you fuse the Shadow of Destruction, how can you show abilities similar to those of the Green Steel Shadow and become stronger step by step. Although I know that each level will definitely further liberate the ability, but the two are different. You feel like a piece of equipment to me, and your attributes have reached the next stage of automatic unlocking. The second question is about ability fusion. For example, the upper limit of some abilities is locked, such as Devil Fruit. That doesn't matter, just integrate it into the system tree. However, high-potential abilities such as basic passives are directly integrated at level 1. This ability has not grown to its limit. What is the use of integrating it, and it cannot continue to improve. Let's not talk about the problems with this method of integrating various other abilities to improve it. As for a high-level ability, at most it can be used to develop some low-level abilities at present, but won't this be covered by the ability? Or is it similar to high-end perfume mixed with inferior perfume, and the final blend is a good thing. The third problem is the resource utilization of the park. The system tree ability is so rubbish that even the park cannot be upgraded. Then the soul crystal can only be used to exchange for skill scrolls. It sounds very high-end, but in fact the first-level is just a pile. If the skill ability does not happen to have the emblem of inheritance, then the rest is simply useless. You can only hold the resources and stare at them, unable to use anything. To sum up, this system tree is a hodgepodge of abilities regardless of whether they have grown up or not, and then they are integrated into a piece of equipment. When the level reaches the level, the next ability is automatically unlocked. It is just like a useless snack. If the protagonist didn't have some technical proficiency and high basic attributes, it would be over. To give you a suggestion, let's just say, can't we combine the more than 20 career buckets into a brand new career, which will not be affected by the previous careers, a super invincible and infinitely powerful career? Wouldn't this problem be solved? Why is it so complicated? It feels like watching shit recently. I'm writing a cool article anyway, so you don't have to worry about it. In the future, if there are new abilities like Devil Fruit that are all integrated into similar abilities of this profession, all the nodes should be changed to levels to maintain the growth that they should have, so that soul crystals and the like will not be wasted. Isn't the soul crystal in the paradise the most perfect way to improve abilities? The result was a mess, which made me feel so uncomfortable. Even if there were more than 20 professions appearing in front of me, I was actually indifferent at that time, but the integration was really bad.
It looks so boring. The protagonist is always wandering around there, not even fighting a few battles. There are also mandatory tasks and so on, and there are so many abilities, which are too complicated, and readers and even the author cannot recognize them all. Also, the protagonist's strength has expanded too fast. I was afraid that he was too weak before, but now he has not reached the top of the first level, and his combat power is directly at the third level, which is outrageous Speaking of which, the protagonist didn't speak in spoken language before, so how can he be the same now? And the protagonist's character, he wasn't such a happy-go-lucky guy before, right? The changes are a bit big, and the author wrote that the plot about Su Xiao is a bit deliberate I feel that the current protagonist has a happy-go-lucky personality, and has no subjective initiative at all. Then there is the amount of updates by the author now. After watching a world, I estimate that I will need to raise it for about two months, fuck @Upside Down Cross
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An invincible rhythm at the beginning. (Immortal)
Stop playing with knives, okay? There are obviously so many ways to go, why do you have to play with a knife in every one of them? I still want to see something new. I might as well watch Samsara Paradise again.
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The main character's system seems to have been changed twice. It's really troublesome to remember. I keep changing the system.
It looked good at first glance, but once the system tree came out, the impression was a lot worse.
I don't know what to say. I always feel that I am forcibly suppressing the combat power. The setting of the system tree is very good, but after the integration, I just feel that most of the protagonist's abilities are gone. Is this the integration rather than the weakening? Why can't the previous abilities be used after the integration? If it can still be used, even if it is weakened, it will not be so uncomfortable. There is no need to mention those skill scrolls, someone has already mentioned them. The 100% extra life added by Abundance is gone after being integrated, but the upper limit of extra life added by Eternal Life Tianhua is nothing. This is not an ability. Looking at this situation, the potions that increase the attributes used by the protagonist later should also be integrated. Is this treated differently? This self-system tree feels like it was written because a lot of skills were mentioned before, and I wrote them as soon as I had an idea (after all, I wrote several chapters just to introduce skills and items, which is really impressive), so there is no outline in this regard. After all, the protagonist is in the world. The author's writing is quite invincible, but this system tree gives people a feeling of overwhelming power. A bunch of resources are thrown at it, and there is no improvement at all. They just add some node degrees, and..., Let's read other people's comments. Some people have said it, and I don't want to type anymore. The above is just a complaint. After all, it is difficult for the author to change now, and the plot and writing are also good. It is just that it is very uncomfortable to watch. A considerable number of people may have given up here. After all, the more you read the later chapters, the fewer comments (suddenly much less than the previous chapter), and the comments seem to be a bit less.
So little
Quick update
There are so few. It seems that they need to be raised.
So little
So little
Can the skill system be fixed? It keeps changing.
Is it updated every two days now?