Rebirth 05: My Left Eye Has Mutated

Author, there is no need for you to make changes at this time. Everyone has their own opinions. In fact, most of our opinions are that we feel that your writing is pretty good. You should gather people together first before breaking out the update, instead of deleting and revising again. If you are revising this, it means that your popularity is losing. Generally, revisions are made very late. Why? Well, because editors and readers are very unhappy with that plot, the author has no choice but to revise it. What you are writing now is not bad, it means that everyone thinks it is okay after reading it, but it is not helpful to you if you revise it again and again. The main thing you should do now is not to interrupt, everyone mainly reads the article that is refreshing, how can you pay so much attention to it?

In fact, your original title was very good, and your writing also has a light feeling. Now that I am so depressed, it will be much better to read your article. There is no need to write the traditional cool article, and it is not popular now. I know you want to imitate something similar to Golden Eyes, but there is no need. Write according to your own style. There is no need to imitate.

What happened? The money I just invested was immediately wiped out.

The subject matter is novel, but the number of chapters is too few and not enough to read.

Since it needs to be overhauled, I suggest the author get rid of cheating in the college entrance examination, otherwise you will definitely end up here in the future. As soon as you are reported for promoting this, you will be finished, especially the college entrance examination is not long ago.

This shouldn't have been written for a long time. Why did I get 76 monthly votes so quickly?

Faster, faster, keep it for a week

It's still quite interesting, but I prefer the harem. I wonder if the author has any plans to have a harem?

The progress of your plot is too slow. The latest I saw was the college entrance examination score evaluation and a series of sighs afterwards. I didn't see how you developed your golden finger. I watched it for your golden finger ability, not for your daily life 😴😴

The first ten or twenty chapters are quite boring. After the college entrance examination, I can write more than twenty chapters of this plot.

Although the word count is small, it has potential. I've given you the votes, so keep up the good work.