The Age of Rebirth: Starting from the Ordinary World

If the educated youth could live such a comfortable and prosperous life, Jiantian would make steamed buns, dumplings and braised pork, and everyone would go to the mountains and countryside. The male pig has no system, and his parents are ordinary workers. Compared with other educated youths, he is more than above or below! Why can he eat and drink endless amounts of White Rabbit toffee every day in the countryside, and build a cave dwelling with four or five holes, while other educated youths can only eat chaffy vegetables! The county magistrate's family at that time could not live up to the standard of living of a male pig.

I can't tell you how many things the protagonist brought, but he kept buying and buying, and kept dividing. If you bring a system and a space, you just ask for it and write nothing. If a pack of toffee is distributed from Beijing to the village, is the pack a one-ton pack? If you have a single heroine, don't write about being ambiguous with other women. If you have multiple heroines, consider the times and circumstances and your writing skills. You won't be able to win favor by sitting on the fence and swinging left and right.

The first part of the story was pretty good in China. The male protagonist was established, but after going abroad, it immediately collapsed and turned into a stallion. The first part was a good period drama, but the second part turned into a fantasy. I lost the desire to watch it anymore! Another author writes about the American Capital Group as philanthropists! The author has not understood the nature of stock market futures, and thinks that if he goes back to the past, he can kill people in the market. It is simply stupid, because he is afraid that if he makes money, he will lose his life!

I said that I didn't give him a golden finger. I can only say that the author is too naive. There are also white flour steamed buns to eat directly. In fact, if you can eat sorghum flour and corn flour, it is a good day. You may not be able to eat refined grains until the New Year and the holidays. Modern people are really abusing their masters if they don't have any plug-ins! !

Except for the fact that the female characters seem to be written without any thought, this book is overall pretty good. But I personally suggest you change your name: In those years when I was Zhou Dyu's licking dog

There are a bit too many emotional scenes, and there is more than one heroine, and Zhou Jingqiu's descriptions are too much. It would be okay if she was the only heroine, but now that there is more than one, it makes the protagonist look scumbag and stupid. And if one of your original female characters is compared with Yaya, what do you think?

Such a good novel, don't write it as a stallion novel. In those days, Aquaman would kill people!

The beginning is okay, but it gets messier as I write later. Later, the author's subjective consciousness was too strong, causing the whole book to have a deformed tendency. It's just off topic. The ordinary world is not about height or depth, but about angles. It is neither written from the ideological perspective of modern people nor from the ideological perspective of the 1970s. Instead, it is written with feelings. Close to reality, but far away from reality, pursuing the lofty, yet so ambitious.

Since we decided to have a harem from the beginning, it's straightforward to be a scumbag. As long as the protagonist is good enough, responsible, and never abandons or gives up, no one will accept him even if he is flirtatious. After all, no one is perfect, and the protagonist does not need to be a perfect person. There is no need to carry those moral baggage. As long as both men and women can accept it, life can go on. But in the end, he has to be affectionate and a stud at the same time, making himself a disgusting hypocrite. It is really disgusting. It's obvious that you're greedy for other people's bodies, but you just want to say that you like them. You're despicable. If you are a real man, you should be honest and honest. I like both of them. It is fate and God's will that bring the three of us together. I don't want anyone to give up. You just have to figure it out. If someone quits, then it is logical to have a single female protagonist. If both parties are angry, then forget it and find someone else. After all, they are all cheating, so why worry about not having a wife. If you feel bad about it afterwards, just make up for it in your life and just make it as long as you can. It is childish to have a harem and still think about peace of mind. There is a courtyard novel in which the main character is Li Wuwei, and the harem is opened very naturally. The protagonist does not have any moral baggage, and he opens the harem naturally because he is charming, rich, and smart.

A young writer who likes ugly yellow ducks and has an original heroine who is full of all kinds of sexy tricks and poisonous points. He can't afford to leave.

Judging from your connected plot, the male protagonist is probably going to be Aquaman! I was really not afraid of death in those days.

It would be great to choose the little yellow duck as the heroine for the protagonist.

What did the author think? Since he didn't want to take Tian Runye back, why did he write the plot of the hero saving the beauty? Just make her like Sun Shaoan according to the original play. Why not marry her?

Damn, He Xiulian didn't accept it and gave it directly to Sun Shao'an. It's really poisonous to have a little yellow duck come out.

After all, I ended up writing a stallion novel, which is a pity, because the previous ones were pretty good!

Northwest, don't say you can grow vegetables in the winter. Who still has radishes in their fields? If you put them in the cellar without covering them, they will turn dry. Why don't you plant something with a hammer?

There are many female protagonists in this book, so I would like to show you respect by sneaking away first.

How many twists and turns does it take to write a chronicle and emotional story? What about writing sadomasochism novels? Stop writing chronicles, go to female channels and write them.

Looking at the name, I thought it was Zhu Tianwen, but it turned out that they were the same person.

It's boring. This kind of period article is just looking for abuse.

One is more watery, and the other is that the protagonist's sense of proportion is problematic, and it's too taken for granted.

No matter what the article is, it should at least be proofread, especially in the later stages. Gone

My writing in China was okay, but after I arrived in the United States, I seemed to have been infected by the rabid dog virus. .

The front part is very good, but the back part is too messy.

Write this book to the heavens!

Okay, I didn't keep Runye waiting in vain, I decisively started reading again.