The Unburnt at Hogwarts

This book is a fanfic that focuses on relaxed daily life, with occasional "small-scale (it should be said that the scope is not very wide, and there are not many participants and magical animals)" defensive battles. The rhythm is relaxed and relaxed, the characters are portrayed in subtle ways, and the storyline is vivid. It can be said to be a good HP fan work. However, based on my personal understanding of the HP story, with the growth of the current protagonist group, the original protagonist trio (especially Hallelujah), and the secret accumulation of a certain noseless monster grandson, the friction and fighting between the two sides should gradually increase, and Dany herself must have registered with Voldemort, and subsequent plots will further test the author's writing skills. As the saying goes, "There are a thousand Harley Quinns in the minds of a thousand people." When I first watched the movie and the original book, I felt that the story written by Ms. J. K. Rowling was a revenge & growth story with "learning-fighting-learning" as the main line. And then after watching A Song of Ice and Fire, which is full of killing and intrigue, I felt that the character settings of Daenerys and Harry Potter were consistent. When I was still in school at the time, I was imagining that if the characters of Binghuo and HP "traveled" to the opposite world, how would they continue to write their own stories? Unexpectedly, I am now lucky enough to see the author's work, which may be regarded as fulfilling one of my "dreams". In the world of HP, little Daenerys, whose parents died young, is freed from the dilemma of being a "beggar princess" and her brother who frequently beats and scolds her. She has a mentor who protects her and a close friend who cares about her. She will no longer be married off to a wild man husband like a commodity at the age of 14, nor will she be hastily become a queen with obvious leadership shortcomings, nor will there be any tragic savior "destiny" in which Nissa reincarnates and sacrifices herself. In the world of ice and fire, the various character flaws caused by her upbringing environment will be filled and healed, and she will thrive like a normal (well, she is not a Muggle after all) pre-millennial British girl outside the slowly falling Iron Curtain. The humanistic care that the author embodies at all times in the book is moving. As a loyal reader, I will continue to support the author, and I sincerely hope with other readers that the author's mentality will become more stable and his writing skills will improve day by day. Let us watch Daenerys step by step and become a true "queen" together, just like watching Ms. Rowling's Harry.

The young dragon mother travels to the HP world, and it doesn't seem to be a big deal at the moment Advantages 1. I finally found an HP fanfic in which the protagonist really likes and cultivates magical animals. The other books I have read before are just used as tools and have no love at all 2. As a non-modern time traveler, I finally don't have to watch the poorly written wizarding world change 3. There are three marginal supporting characters who have almost no role, including Hermione, good reviews 4. The plot has been greatly modified, but it is reasonable and beautiful 5. Finally there is a protagonist who is not cheating and crushing all living beings... The protagonist is a proper academic scumbag except for charms and magical animals. It's too seedling, otherwise the evaluation will be direct to grass jelly Summary: If the quality can be maintained well, I think it may be as good as Professor Mowen

The protagonist is so happy that he left the mess of Game of Thrones directly and came to a perfect new world. The world of Game of Thrones itself is almost the same as some soul games, and the world keeps falling.

I personally strongly do not recommend that the protagonist go back to Game of Thrones, at least not for the current protagonist. His wings are not yet full, his thinking has not progressed, and his combat power is insufficient. The world of Game of Thrones is too dangerous. A world where ordinary people can kill demigods with a cork steel sword. That universe is extremely dangerous for spellcasters. The Three-Eyed Crow and the God of Light, Han Shen, all want the protagonist to die. There are also those so-called lords and kings. If the protagonist goes there, will he still have to scheming with a bunch of bad people? All the people there are probably killed in the fire pits of hell. Moreover, it is a thankless task. To prevent the destruction of the world of the Game of Thrones, the protagonist has to use his magic power to lift the world. The gain outweighs the losses. The universe does not get much reward, it is just an ember. The protagonist's family members are all dead, and the rest are all with evil intentions.

I don't intend to touch upon the world of Game of Thrones. I will only mention some related items and magic_(:з)∠)_ Mainly because there are so many things that need to be considered when writing Game of Thrones... War tactics and so on are beyond my scope of ability. Then it also seems redundant to the whole story. This is not a novel that focuses on time travel.

Originally, I couldn't understand the social basis of Rowling's pureblood stories. Until recently, after reading too many of Yuko's shocking remarks, I suddenly understood.

It's a good book. It has a sense of familiarity. It opens up the imagination. The protagonist is ignorant and kind, and it's age-appropriate. It's not that common. It has the feeling of a fairy tale book for adults. Ah, thank you. I feel very happy after reading it. so gkd

There is no third volume. It was too hasty when I first started writing. The outline of the third volume took more than half a month to work on, but there were more and more problems. I originally thought that no matter what my results were, I would finish writing my first contract. Now I find it's a bit naive. I'm very sorry to everyone, especially those who supported me when I was confused. But I really can't write it out.

It is not recommended to return to Game of Thrones Writing about Game of Thrones requires at least some political foundation, and at least an understanding of the rules of the game for feudal kings and nobles, otherwise the writing will be a piece of shit. 90% of the Ice and Fire fans in the starting point are this kind of layman and have no eyes for it.

It has the flavor of a new era fairy tale. 😁

HP alone is boring. Why can't we travel between two worlds? When I was young, I went to HP to learn magic and left Ryuuji. After I graduated, I just took Ryuu back to Game of Thrones.

Daenerys Targaryen - The Unburnt of Hogwarts What makes this fanfic different from other fanfics is that the heroine has three good friends from different houses. The heroine Dany is a brave and upright little lion who is in charge of the fire dragon and is good at all fire-related spells. Hannah is a sincere and cautious little badger who is good at potions and herbal medicines. Morag is a wild, bold, and clever little eagle who is good at alchemy and magic props. Pansy is a arrogant, careful and sensitive little snake, good at black magic spells. Four girls from four houses, the foursome play together and work together to explore or solve the troubles of Hogwarts. It really feels like reading a children's book. The biggest highlight of this book is that it describes many scenes of magical animals. The most regrettable thing about HP is that this part of magical animals is not extended in depth. For example, the fire crab at the beginning, the fire ash snake, dragon lizard, fire dragon, spider-eating sparrow, giant owl in the first grade timeline, the horse-shaped water monster in the second grade, the life of the fish-people group, the swallow-tailed dog that is as cute as ordinary dogs, Looks like the little fairy in the Peter Pan cartoon, Girl's perspective, Lion Court, Just traveled to Diagon Alley, be careful, Go to Hogwarts, cute and brave, The 11-year-old Dragon Mother has grown up from the Middle Ages Game of Thrones, travel to the HP world in 1991, and enter Hogwarts to be a little wizard The fairy tale style is interesting and warm The rhythm is smooth and smooth, the coherence is strong, The characters are vivid and vivid, The author puts the 11-year-old The description of Dragon Mother is very cute, very real, and the words express the tone, movements, and behavior of an 11-year-old girl. For example, she just bought a cauldron in Diagon Alley, and she would take the cauldron to her face and rub it. Well, it is really cute. The descriptions of magical animals are more vivid and lively, For example, the owl at the beginning is lying arrogantly on the lap of the dragon mother and being massaged by the dragon mother, and is treated like a coward~~~ For example, in the fire dragon breeding base, the fire dragon will help Dany lick her hair, and the fire dragon will line up to let the wizard cut his nails. For example, if you use grass blades to tickle a fire dragon, the fire dragon will wrinkle its face. For example, the revitalized armor that has lived for a long time, Maggie is super cute! Incredibly cute! It is very similar to the intelligent robots in the interstellar era, very similar to the robots created by Finch Hanks. It is extremely humane and has the same rich emotions as humans. It can think independently, be hungry, sad, sad and scared. The graphics are super strong, especially the description of magical animals! In Diagon Alley, the mother of dragons used her bleeding right hand to pinch Draco's neck tightly. This episode actually has a bit of the domineering and fierce spirit of the mother of dragons from Game of Thrones! It's crazy, but he's so handsome! Applaud! ! ! Who asked Draco to come forward to provoke, and said that Hannah's family was degenerate, and that Dragon Mother was a mudblood, and even smashed Dragon Mother's favorite cauldron on her body. He deserves to be choked! Should! Then Lucius came and used a red light on the 11-year-old Dragon Mother. Fortunately, Professor Kettleburn appeared and blocked the attack for the Dragon Mother. Then he wanted to take the Dragon Mother back to Hogsmeade. Little Hannah was scared, but she still chose to follow. She is always a sincere and brave little badger. Then she became Kay Professor Tellborn's assistant, the 11-year-old little wizard raises magical animals openly First grade timeline Danni, who just entered school, is really not a wizard. Her ability to fight back relies on her hands and feet, not magic. However, it is quite refreshing to see her punch Pansy in the stomach and nose with her fists! Danny was very interesting when she was drunk. When she walked around the corner, she bumped into Quirrell, and the Voldemort on the back of his head was directly stuck on the wall. She followed the snake and sang children's songs, discussed the dangers and sales of love potions with the Weasley twins, and kicked away the tail of a walking rat. Peter complained to Wood that the rules of Quidditch were unreasonable, and finally hugged the Patil sisters and joked. This student life is really fun, hahahaha During the summer vacation, I sent Norbert to the Fire Dragon Sanctuary, sat on the dragon boat, and encountered two dragons fighting! So passionate! Then the dragon boat Dany and the others were on was crashed by a brachynosaurus. Hannah, who had always been afraid of a plane crash, personally experienced the feeling of a plane crash with Pansy, hahahaha, so miserable When they arrived at the fire dragon breeding base (this should be the second set), Morag should be said to be a scientist. He had fearless courage and ran directly to the fire dragon. He stretched his head over his mouth, thinking that the fire dragon would not bite him, but the next second the fire dragon opened its mouth, hahaha, and would use many instruments to examine the scales of the fire dragon. The fire dragons in the breeding base are very cute, more like they are full of energy, full of endless energy, and full of strong curiosity about the daily life of wizards. Morag, the little eagle scientist, is really awesome. He invented the dragon horn device, so the ferocious lady in red in the reserve mistook the three of them as Charmanders and rescued them from poachers. These three little witches pretending to be Charmanders also instigated the rebellion of a larger dragon. The young fire dragon "Miss" serves as the pilot hunter, leading the lady in red to attack the poachers. In the end, Dany and the others only need to put on the dragon horn device, and then they can go to the dragon's lair and play with the little fire dragons. As the leader, the lady in red recognizes Dany and these little witches. It's so interesting! ! ! I really like the story of this fire dragon reserve. Although there is no Hogwarts story, the battle of wits and courage between the rangers and the fire dragons is very interesting. The lady in red regards Dany and the others as little dragons. It is very enjoyable for the lady in red to fight against the poachers! !

I didn't plagiarize the original plot, I wrote my own story, and it still has a fairy tale flavor.

Before, it was mainly about daily life, but after being reminded by readers, I felt that it would be difficult to write without a main line, so starting from the third year of school, I wanted to create a main line. But Voldemort and Harry are too tightly tied to each other to be placed directly on the main line. It turns the protagonist into a foil. So it is possible to dig out another villain, such as Haierbo (this guy invented the Horcrux and is still very likely to be alive today) I haven't thought about the details yet, but this will definitely make the story deviate further from the original work. It will become that kind of... Fanfic that is not quite the same as the same person. So let me tell you in advance so that no friends will care_(:з)∠)_

I watched it again, and I'm still disappointed. It's the most enjoyable hp fan I've ever seen 😭

Don't cut it, it's hard to find HP fans with such an appetite

Very good, don't care too much about what the comments say: follow it at your own pace: it's very comfortable to watch

Judging only from the writing style, they are considered to be among the better ones. They have their own style, but I don't know why no one seems to read them.

Ahhhhhhhhh the author is so good at writing silly and cute characters 😃😃😃

Terribly sorry. The mentality is broken. I should be able to finish this little story tomorrow. After that, I plan to take a two-day break, and then use three days to sort out the subsequent plot. Actually, halfway through the last short story, I felt a little unbearable. I thought maybe it would get better if I persisted for a few days, and at least completed three months of full attendance. As a result, the more I persisted, the more my mentality exploded. I thought about it for a moment, maybe it's because my writing speed is too slow and I've been rushing through the work. So some plots were written without careful consideration, resulting in bugs later. Then in the process of trying to patch it up, the outline got messier and messier. This time I will review the plot a few times in advance to see if it will be better. If I encounter a plot that is temporarily unsatisfactory in the future, I may stop again for a few days. Instead of rushing yourself to continue writing, your eyes will go dark after finishing writing, and nothing will be improved. To be honest, as a confused newcomer, I really need time to grow. But we also understand that readers have no obligation to accompany them. Therefore, I only ask you not to discard this book directly. What if after a few days of raising it, it will grow vigorously again_(:з)∠)_

Today's favorite hp fic, author, cheers!

I feel like the author didn't read much of the original work. This image of Daenerys only has the same name as the original, which is a bit too childish. In the original work, he lost his son at 13, and at 14 he was able to lead a group of old, weak, sick, and disabled people across a hopeless desert. At 15 years old, he established his own kingdom and could make two continents regard him as a powerful enemy. She is a queen and the period she lives in is the Middle Ages. Do you expect her moral standards to be higher than those of modern people? To be honest, Voldemort only caused trouble for a few thousand people in the wizarding world. Compared with the number of people he killed, Voldemort may not have been able to kill a fraction of Daenerys. There is also Targaryen's madness, which is a kind of madness that pursues goals by any means regardless of worldly views. It is not that he is violent and reckless and cannot control his emotions. Note: That string of titles is only given when meeting important guests. It is equivalent to a business card, not used as a name.

Hello, author, I like your article very much and think it is very well written. It is not like those mainstream novels that center on the protagonist personally, lay out a huge world view, and focus on upgrading and becoming stronger. It makes it very tiring to read. It's not like some niche fanfics, which are all just for one gimmick and have dry content. I think this novel is outstanding even among all the Harry Potter fans. The protagonist is set outside the Iron Triangle, and he does not pursue any power or glory. There is no obsession with bitterness and hatred. It has a fairy tale-like feeling. In a way, it has something in common with the original work. It is very easy for me to read. As far as the plot is concerned, the second chapter is indeed a bit messy, but the problem is not big. It can be seen that the plot is still advancing, and the four protagonists are still very likable. The author may have a bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder and perfectionism. If he finds that the article he writes is much different from what he expected, he will become increasingly intolerable, self-denial, and inwardly consumed. I am studying art, and I often have the same situation when I am painting. When I am painting, I find that a part of the painting is not done well, so I just keep revising it, and I will never be able to paint it well. The correct approach is to ignore him first, draw the whole picture and then fix the details. Serialized novels may not have the opportunity to come back and revise the deficiencies, but there is nothing wrong with focusing on a broad enough place. I suggest that the author write the ending first when writing the outline, and then divide the outline into paragraphs, and design a small ending for each paragraph. From now on, as long as the plot line is advancing towards the end, it will not deviate from the theme. After you finish the draft, add details and design some plot foreshadowing in the front that can echo the ending, so that the story will become fuller when it is finished. After these designs are completed, I will finally add some small daily plots that have little connection with the theme plot as embellishments. I think the story will be good in this way. I have tried to write a book myself, but I have not finished it. I say this to support and encourage the author to finish the book. A complete work is always better than an incomplete one. You can gain far more experience by writing a whole book than by writing half of it. Only by reviewing a complete work can you clearly see where you are deficient, and the next book can be better. And if you read the first book of Eunuch, you can easily read the second book of Eunuch. Online serialized works are greatly affected by performance. If the author is a full-time writer, he will consider it more. It is common for works that cannot make money to be completed. But no matter what, I like this book. I hope the author can finish it and don't focus on the details. If the plot is advancing steadily, advance first and then read. It may be more helpful to have a broad perspective and always examine the plot from the perspective of the entire work. Some minor flaws may not be so obvious. Hope it helps. 😡

Damn, I'm so angry now. When will a fire burn these rubbish so-called pure bloods to ashes? 😡😡😡

Without the little dragon lady, I'm going to be four 😭

I've given you a monthly pass, so you must hold on!

There is no obvious main plot in this book, and it is generally more daily-oriented. The interesting points are mainly concentrated on the interactions of several main characters. I believe that the author has an outline, and the main plot can be written according to the outline, because personally, the interactions between characters and small stories are more attractive. The author's book is still very good, and I can feel that the author is thoughtfully imagining it, rather than just writing it out of his head to practice writing. I hope the author will work hard.

Is she the Centaur Khaleesi?

Great writing! Is there a book club group? I wanted to learn from the author, so I also wrote a hp fanfic, but after reading the author's book, I didn't even have any ideas. It was too far behind.

I haven't seen it on the shelves yet, but I saw the author saying that it might be really Pansy in the future. Then why can't we be good sisters Luna, Astoria, and Nagini! We are sisters who have a very good relationship!