Did the Wife Who Chased Me Use the Demon Slayer Order?

This writing feels like a life simulator to me, with all text descriptions. That will lead to the result that you will have no sympathy for the people in the play, and it is impossible to generate a lot of emotions. And I personally think this is not a good way to train artificial intelligence, and it seems that these people have a very low role in training. Wouldn't it be possible to train without these people? There is no trace of the change of perspective, leaving the reader to think for a while, you are not good at it, the first thought is full of loopholes, how can you continue reading?

Will he be just another copy of the virtual world when he returns to reality? How can the author write that he really returns to reality? If it is not written well, the plot will have a sense of fragmentation later on. This is a test of writing skills and plot control, but I can't trust the author, so I quit.

What can I say after collecting more than 100 books? First of all, my family members must read it~ Don't think I'm just a junk fish that only sells books worth 300,000 yuan. There are really too many new books that have been read to death! Currently, there are two stable heroines. Rhine understands that the first heroine is the main character, holding the little gluttonous bag with the demon-slaying order. In terms of status, Rhine is in a high position, the protagonist is in the middle, and Milong is at the bottom. This is cheese sandwiched between two buns, and the cheese melts and flows out. If there are female characters added in the future, they will only be supporting roles and related side plots. There are too many female protagonists and it is really hard to hold on. The lines of the three of them will almost burn out the GPU. . . . . .

As the title states, I am preparing to speed up the game. Some branch lines and unnecessary ones have been cut off. This one is still full of attendance. I will update it in about four months... I guess there will be two more copies in the future. Thank you to my friends who have been following me for reading, I sincerely appreciate it~

I have to keep reading. I can't do it four times a day.

It's not very good, and the result of writing a text adventure flow is not concise at all. Then there is absolutely no need to take risks with this text. And the first ten chapters are unbearable. As a high-level executive with unlimited power, Rhine actually requires evidence when investigating a case? From the moment she doubted the protagonist, the protagonist died.

I'm stupid! ! ! ! !

? Does the protagonist have any doubt that Rhine has changed so much? Don't forcefully write that the protagonist doesn't know, just use wisdom.

The writing is indeed good, but there are too few updates. If you post more updates, more people will follow it. If you write so much every day, who can read it?

Judging from my experience in my novel career, I am definitely not a newcomer. 🙂

The author's writing is smooth and the plot is compact. I have collected it. I hope you will keep updating it. Come on! 🤭

I found a potential work and it is currently well written. I have invested in collecting it and I hope the author will keep it up.

I would like to ask, do I need to vote for monthly votes and recommendation votes?