The Mother Who Is Always Fighting

Recently, I have been reading the work "Mom Always in Fighting" by the author Erdong Ichiba Sansheng. Looking at the characters in the story, I seem to have returned to the early days of reform and opening up. In a small county that has not yet fully caught up with the tide of the times, a touching love story is happening. The growth line of the protagonist Qian Ling is becoming more and more clear, but where is her fighting spirit reflected? I hope to see the transformation and change of the heroine in the subsequent stories.

The paragraph is well written, but it is too long. I suggest you make it shorter in paragraphs to make it easier to read.

I feel that the writing is quite good, but traditional literature is actually not suitable at the starting point. If you just want to write something you want to write, then go for it.

The writing is quite good, but the segmentation needs to be more even.