My Peninsula Artist Girlfriend

I started reading the book when the author first started writing it, but actually I almost finished the first one and not the second one. I would like to make a suggestion. I think it is a problem in all three books. The author needs to think more about the plot. These three books basically describe the relationship between the male and female protagonists, which are all based on emotions. The author usually constructs the existing emotions of the male and female protagonists, promotes this emotion through soul collisions such as chatting, and then drives the development of the plot through emotions This results in the plot alone being too thin, lacking contradictions, and incomplete The most attractive part of the book written by the author is the deconstruction and analysis of love, and the classic fragments of various movies described through the mouth of the protagonist. However, these cannot completely cover up the problem of the plot being monotonous and incomplete. How to tell a story well, how to naturally introduce a series of characters, describe the interaction between them, and how to set up conflicts from the characters to promote the plot, I think the author needs to spend some time on this Recommend a book to the author, "Unemployed at the Beginning, I Let the Great Singer Return". This book also contains a lot of movie and song clips. I think Qidian is a very good work in this field. The author can learn from it The above content is only a personal opinion and a few suggestions provided by readers. Whether to adopt it or not depends entirely on the author himself.

One person's blood letter! Create a book club

This writing style is absolutely top-notch from the starting point. Most platinum gold medals are completely inferior to the author. He is so powerful. I have read the past 2 books. They are so good and I love to read them. Come on! ! !

When will the new book be released

Brother Dazhu🤓

It will be almost a year since the last book was finished. Where is your new book?

The most beautiful Bae Joo Hyun

Readers who can accept literary youth, middle school students, and pretentiousness can read it, it should be quite good.

Panellia crosses the dimensional wall🐶

I feel like I have some symptoms of literary youth disease. I've gotten better in the last few chapters. I hope I can be more down-to-earth.

There are too many famous quotes, and I feel tired after reading too many of them. It feels a bit pretentious, but the writing is really good. I will wait for a few days before reading again!

When will you sign the contract? Korean entertainment is not easy. I will support you. I hope this book can write more than a million words. Come on!

Beauty incarnate

Chinese cabbage

The last book I read about Bae Soo-hyun was Neighbors. Bae was really attractive.

No one is more out of the circle than this one

Brother, where is the new book?

I haven't read the first one yet, but have ordered the other two. I read this book in the middle of last year, when I read that I had just fallen in love and stopped because of the final exam. I watched it again last night and it still felt the same as before. If the author wishes to continue writing, I can still support him. Come on👏

Author, where is the new book? It won't be the 25th National Day 😭😭

A romance novel based on Korean entertainment, but it doesn't have a high reading threshold and ends in a hurry? But after this article was made public, there wasn't much that could be written. I recommend it.

The literary atmosphere is too heavy and the plot is too much.

The writing is good, but this is a male video. If you write about love and don't have a golden finger, it is destined to have little success.

What about the new book😍