Driving a Train to Go Wild

When I woke up in the morning, I saw a lot of comments from book friends in the background. There was a book friend named "Breath of the Steel Dragon". The name seemed to be that of an old steamer. He dug out a bunch of Easter eggs like a sapper in the middle of the night. There is also a book friend of "Brahma Yuan". I don't know if the name is taken from the meaning of "Hinayana" and "Mahayana" in Buddhism. He was the first to guess the origin of the number SL772. Although it was still a little bit short, it surprised me. It's this kind of surprise where two friends are playing with their cell phones in a cafe without talking to each other, but they always find a big pudding in the leftover smoothie. The author keeps burying it, and the readers keep digging it, and each enjoys the process and tacit understanding.

Very good, but at the beginning, I am willing to vote for a monthly vote to encourage the author, in order to commemorate those who have fantasy dreams. Submit a name for the protagonist's company, let's call it New World. This world is a new world for the protagonist. The protagonist, who has experience in another world and fantastic abilities, will also lead this world to a new world. It is also a new world for readers. Add a little unknown and original intention to the resonant whistle of steam and industry. Out of the window in the early morning, at the ruins of the relocated train station, you can still hear several long whistles from the train passing by. This is the greeting left to people as the wheels of time pass by.

a. System upgrade b. Train upgrade c. Special team members d. Dimensionality reduction attack e. Customs and customs f. Exotic food g. Please tell me about others

The lack of writing power is like this (sad) The story is quite interesting, but the scattered descriptions, unfocused text, strange sentence fragmentation, etc... Are all things that the author needs to improve. It has potential, so work hard.

The main plot is unclear, the rhythm is like constipation, and the names are messed up. Some people compare it to Best Friend. Every character in Best Friend can be impressed when watching it, and the portrayal is very good. This book only has names but no places, so I don't even know what it is about. It is good for the author to be ambitious, but there is a suspicion of showing off. I predict that he will be defeated.

The content is messy and boring

When I saw the high-speed and small interception ratio, I knew that the author's theoretical knowledge was sufficient. Continuing to scroll back, I was caught off guard by the increasingly strong Western fantasy and literary flavor mixed with the hardcore steampunk content. Time is money, my friend. The time and energy required for such a novel is contrary to the entertainment and relaxation I seek. I didn't abandon the book, I just read a dozen chapters to complain about it.

There's nothing wrong with the content, but it's really unattractive. I thought it was a big escort driving a train, but it turned out not to be the case at all... Intrigue and intrigue every day plus a bunch of names of people and places that I can't remember...

Mao Xiong's response plan to the railway guerrillas

This is a book that is very picky for readers. The plot writing and some descriptions are very unique to the author. If you want to read the first three pictures, you will know whether you belong to the audience of this type of book.

I've just watched a little bit, but here's a suggestion: You can give a brief introduction to Goldfinger at the beginning, and then go through the plot first, and then lay out the setting after the reader has a preliminary understanding of the situation after time travel. Now this beginning is a bit dry.

It is said that the main plot of this book is too much, and there are too many side introductions. In fact, readers are not so fragile. They will abandon the book if they can't understand it at all. Some settings can be placed in the easter egg chapter with pictures. What I hope most now is that the author can make subtractions and simplify the unnecessary plots. There will be a climax (a bit more fun) between a few chapters, or a small one (a bit more fun). When accumulated bit by bit, it will reach a big plot and then the whole climax. I recommend an author ~ Let the Breeze Go ~ who specializes in writing refreshing articles. You can learn from the first half of this work, which is more suitable for the current state of the protagonist.

Hello author, I saw the latest chapter. It said that I drove a train to have fun, but except for the first time to transport goods, the rest were to upgrade the carriage and expand my contacts. I said I wanted to be free, but I feel that I haven't set off after so long. Of course, this is just my personal opinion and I am not the author. I just want to ask.

It's hard to read. Can you speak normally?

The plot and concept of the story are okay, but the writing skills need to be improved. The reading is not smooth and there is no sense of immersion.

There is no main plot, it is very confusing. After reading 8 chapters, I can't understand what the protagonist is going to do. I don't even understand the transfer of the train ownership, so I go to repair the car. I feel inexplicably confident.

Road and railway dual-purpose armored vehicles, corresponding to the railway guerrilla plan in small days

I read the first 6 chapters. The first one or two chapters are good. The next 4 chapters have been writing about data flow, cheat function, the situation of the world, and food, so stiff. After the time travel, the film was suddenly cut off. There was no dialogue with the supporting characters and no life foreshadowing. The functions of the golden finger and the situation of the world were written bluntly, which is equivalent to forcing science popularization. Also, the cheat function is a bit too large. It should be positioned as an auxiliary intelligence, allowing the protagonist to learn and improve manual and creative abilities, so that he can write better later and have more possibilities. When encountering problems, solving problems, accidents, and other unexpected situations, it will make writing more vivid. The results of the conference held by Goldfinger are the same as upgrading to defeat monsters. Just click on it. The book conference is becoming more and more mindless. The author has to write like this. Then we can only retain some readers who don't like to use their brains.

It can be seen that this kind of subject matter is very interesting, but the slight drawback is that the author's writing style is slightly inferior. Sometimes the person angle is confusing and the paragraphs are not well connected.

This book is too strenuous to read, and it is as difficult to read as Mystery. Is it because my literary skills and knowledge reserves are not enough? The threshold for reading your book is too high, and it is not smooth to read.

The author's writing is very good, but the main plot seems too awkward. I don't know what the protagonist is pursuing. I feel that the protagonist lacks everything and can just eat and die.

I just wanted to catch up, but I feel like the author has no motivation to write. There are only a few chapters published this year. 🙂

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