My Daily Life in Tiwatri

I've basically finished reading it. It's a good casual novel, but there are a few small problems at the beginning. The protagonist just follows a template. In more than ten years, he can't even learn how to make a living? If you don't increase your performance, you won't learn? I originally thought that the protagonist couldn't learn it, which is understandable. But then you told me that the protagonist has the so-called largest e-book network in the world in his mind, but it turns out he still can't learn it? You don't want to talk about braised pork or anything like that, but you don't even know how to cook egg fried rice?

It's okay if you don't know how to cook, but that reason is too ridiculous, but this little poison is still bearable But then you met Yan Fei, and she taught you how to cook. You said that you had wanted to learn for a long time, but you just didn't have the time? Brother, do you remember that you set it to fetal wear before? You, a time traveler who has been here for 17 or 18 years, say you don't have time to learn to cook? Forget it, just be a little bit cruel, this kind of thing can be tolerated, but do you remember the reason why you wrote earlier that you can't cook and buy food? What you wrote before is clearly that you don't want to improve your performance and don't want to learn To be honest, why don't you explain it, why do you have to talk about cooking? The two plots of yours are both minor flaws, not to mention that they are related to each other. The difference between reading the previous paragraph and the next is no more than two minutes. Originally, the so-called reason for not being able to cook was a bit confusing, but later on, the plot was related to cooking. It was inconsistent and the protagonist's character was fragmented.

After reading the comments, I also feel that it's ridiculous that someone with such a strong learning ability can't cook. The reason why Thor can't cook is just to create a contrast with the cook next door. This setting is more interesting. However, the main character of the book is just because the author himself can't cook, so he just thought of a reason to fool people. It's really inappropriate.

This book describes what a country should be like, other fans are following the same thing

The explanation of not being able to cook and not being able to do science is unreasonable and a bit contradictory. Especially when you have the advantage of being good at learning and e-book library. If you are advanced, you can say that you have no talent and your brain is not bright. But I can't even do the most basic things like cooking or making a pedal boat, so it's very toxic.

How many heroines are there? Don't tell me that you want a single female protagonist when writing a fanfic 🤔

Book friends have raised many questions and doubts about the protagonist's inability to cook for more than ten years. Here I will explain or make up for it. First of all, this is definitely my problem. Not writing it clearly caused everyone to have questions and even some misunderstandings about the plot. In my original idea, I wanted to shape the protagonist into a person who only focuses on things that I think are important, such as reading and writing papers. I don't pay much attention to other things that I think are not important, such as cooking. To put it simply, the protagonist knew the benefits of cooking at the time and had the ability to learn it, but he thought it was not worth his time to learn. In addition, he thought he had no time (excuse). Without external intervention or a good opportunity, even if he was given another hundred years, he would not take the initiative to learn to cook. The sentence mentioned by Yi Yin in the text just reminded me of such a thing. I did not want to write that the protagonist did not learn to cook because the template unlocking level was not increased. After all, everyone can see that the so-called template's presence is really not very strong. I also did not want to write this article as a work that can increase the template unlocking level just by "playing". The above is the logic behind my arrangement of such a plot. There will definitely be omissions and poor considerations, and not everyone can accept my statement. I hope everyone can forgive me. Thank you very much for your support of this work.

That's it? That's it? Huh? Is this the end?

I feel like for the second golden finger, I might as well not write it. If I write it and don't use it, it feels disgusting, as if I might have eaten it while eating. Feeling

The text is good but the plot feels too flat. It's suitable to be read alone after a long story.

Wen Qingwen, there are many logic bugs, let's go

When ordinary people cook, they may not taste good the first time, but they can definitely make edible meals the second time. Don't talk about the heat or not. As long as you have eyes, you can use your eyes to judge whether it is cooked or not. As long as it is cooked, you can basically eat it. On this premise, just add salt and soy sauce to season. What skills are needed?

After solving the case, the author should not be of the same class as us ordinary people. In daily life, he is the youngest one and has a lot of elders. Otherwise, it would be impossible to be different from ordinary people's common sense, including but not limited to not being able to cook, being called Xiao Su by those younger than him, and having no restrictions on spending money, etc. But what hasn't changed is that the author is indeed a two-dimensional enthusiast and has other hobbies like ordinary people. This proves that the family education is good and he has not become a dude.

You have to know that we are a farming country. Isn't it convenient to grow vegetables?

Don't delve too deeply into the data in this book. It will make you feel better if you read it as a travelogue. In other words, lose some of your brain first

It's basically okay. It can be considered top-notch among Genshin Impact fans, but the timeline is too boring.

Come on, don't be misled by the comments, and work hard to write wonderful stories.

Why does it feel so verbose?

Is there a group? Ciallo～(∠◠ڼ◠)⌒☆

The author doesn't even check the information and settings when writing a fanfic.