Pokemon Hogwarts

The first few chapters were a bit messy, but things got better later on. However, the protagonist always gave me the feeling of being a stranger. The various difficulties in the early stage were very uncomfortable to watch, and the progress was a bit slow. The memory of the protagonist, his parents, and the magic problem were all digging a lot of holes. Until more than seventy chapters, there was not much positive revelation, and no solution was mentioned, which just looked awkward.

First of all, the ideas are very interesting. Although they are just permutations and combinations, it is indeed a refreshing theme. The writing style is also online, and the overall flow is very smooth. It can be said that it is no problem to beat more than 80% of the peers 🤭 However, the problem is also obvious. I personally do not reject slow and hot writing, but the general environment is here. I already have a very good idea, but it has not been transformed into something exciting. Instead, it has buried a lot of small and medium-sized holes that cannot be filled at the moment. It should be noted that it is about 100 chapters and 200,000 words long, but the protagonist's strength improves very slowly, or seems very slow, and there are no supporting plot points. The protagonist in many content does not participate, but is semi-dissociated, such as Pokémon playing games while others are playing. If you want to write about two worldviews or even fusion, the protagonist is still a time-traveler who knows the plot. There should be many so-called "refreshing points" to satisfy the readers' psychological expectations, but they are wasted. Not only that, Old Deng is a surprise when he first meets him, and the protagonist's own growth curve is not impressive at all. Such an article must be sent 😴 I want to say that I don't want the author to write a shocking article, but something that is not called "refreshing" will become plain water and cannot attract people to follow up. Even if you don't mind slow reading, you will choose to keep books. If you don't achieve results, you will probably be pressed (sad). If you must maintain the current rhythm, then at least you need to make some choices, such as adding other elements, and not requiring you to show off in front of others. You cannot really treat the protagonist as a little wizard who goes with the flow, immersing himself in doing his own work, and quietly waiting to be coerced by the big events that are about to happen. If you say it's not true, show it instead of slowly laying it out. Although the situations written by many fan authors who seem to have wisdom but are actually idiots are very funny, it is also rare in fan fiction that they appear to be weaklings but are actually stupid (lucky). In addition, there are some other details. For example, the protagonist is an adult time-traveler, and the writing style needs to be changed. Although you can do many childish behaviors in a young body, you cannot really treat people as children when describing their mental states and narration. The writing style needs to be changed to a certain extent. I wish the author will write better and better.

I saw a Pokémon before➕Harry Potter's novel It's a Pity that the Pokémon was a Charmander and later he received a magical animal called Niffler.

Really, except that the creativity is useless, nothing has been explained. Is it Pokémon time travel or world fusion, or the protagonist's ancestors sent the protagonist to the Pokémon world. Anyway, I look confused. There is also whether the protagonist's parents and ancestors know the existence of Pokémon. Nothing is written. I want to persuade you to quit.

Could it be that the poor little author earned this monthly ticket by himself?🙂

It seems that the protagonist traveled through the ancient Pokémon world...

Author, I have some doubts about your body shape description. Are you too small? I looked at these curiously and saw the size of the Pokémon. After looking at it, I discovered that the Ultrasonic Bat is 0.8 Meters long and the Big Mouth is 1.6 Meters long, which is about the same as an adult.

It's a bit interesting, but the addition of elves and magic will test the writing skills. I hope the author's writing skills can hold up.

The previous writing about Pokémon and Hogwarts was a bit too confusing...

Author, I would like to give you a suggestion. When transitioning between Pokémon and Hogwarts, create a dividing line. I often look at it and find that it has jumped to the other side.

It's well written, but it doesn't look good. Brother, are you not thinking about what's going on? 🙂

It's very interesting, to me, please give it a try, author.

Are there any books where the heroine is Pansy?

Be sure to tell me that it's not Hermione as the heroine, or there is no heroine at all. Of course, a big car is better ()

There are quite a lot of elements in the introduction, and the other three hundred or so are still in the first grade. Is the author planning to finish the book with ten thousand chapters?

There is too much urea, you are a member of the D family😏

The writing is a bit confusing, but overall it's readable.

Fantasy Cover

Is this a eunuch or is he just having fun during the National Day?

The main character's name is Donald, and my first impression was that he was so weird 😂