Fairy, Don't Look Back, I Am the Spirit Stone

Can I write two hundred chapters? Most of the articles I have seen start to update unstablely when they reach more than 200 updates, and then stop updating. I think it is best for this kind of article to have a relatively complete worldview, otherwise it will be difficult to write in the long term. If you think of or see any good ideas, you can write them down first for later material.

I think it's pretty cool, but I can't stand this brain circuit.

Looking at the profile, he is a top tool person.

I feel like after writing this book, the next one will be a masterpiece.

It's well written, but it's so messed up that I don't know who you're writing about.

Interesting, but too wordy

Online simulator, but from the Lingshi perspective... To be honest, I came here for the Qingqi perspective.

Don't look back, author, I am a reader

The simulator is too detailed and will interfere with the real plot. It is best that the simulator is just a prediction technique and does not give too detailed secrets. In this way, you can slowly unfold the world view and make readers look forward.

Maybe I'm vulgar, but I really want to see the protagonist show off, rather than a bunch of high-end combat powers fighting for a long time without the protagonist doing anything.

The writing is a bit messy and looks strange.

The painting style is unique The author still needs to practice You can watch it

I saw the potential new book on the home page. I looked at a few pictures of visual inspection of food and grass, and I will keep it first.

Personally, I feel that there is too much information in the first 20 chapters or so. The Xiao family's affairs should be a task in the middle and later stages! But putting it all in the front would be a bit brain-burning. In the early stage, it only needs to deal with the sect's affairs, and the system only needs to postpone it. As for how the stories of other characters are postponed, there is a bit of a bug (for example: Xiao Wan) where the mental journey is read out before the character is unlocked...

I wrote "Taishui" several times in my mind. Although the writing method is different, the content is the same and repeated.

The name of this book is wrong, it should be called "I traveled through time and became a spiritual stone, and the content is all about obscenity". I've read dozens of chapters, and I've always been obsessed with obscenity...

Although I haven't read it, the author's name is too explosive and very attractive Also, Don't look back, author, I am a reader

Can I fix it?