Siheyuan: so I Am the Biggest Winner?

After sending it, take a look for yourself, there are a lot of repeated paragraphs...

No matter how good the writing is, it is useless to travel through the silly pillars. The ugly B has no sense of substitution and cannot attract people

There is no need to whitewash Shazhu to the readers. You have traveled through time and become Shazhu. There is no need to explain Shazhu's past behavior.

AI article timeline is messed up.

What novel should I write if I can't figure out the timeline?

The name should be changed to "Siheyuan, it turns out I have an external incarnation."

What is written here? AI right?

Chapter 3: Poison Hair, Qin Huairu took off the ring after getting married, not just after getting married

When He Yuyu came to see the old deaf man, the old deaf man's first reaction was that he was hiding his face. Yi Tianzun did not give He Yuyu his living expenses. Silly Zhu gave the canteen food to Widow Qin again. It shows that He Yuyu grew up hungry. So are Shazhu and He Yuyu not born to the same mother? The old deaf man's family had white flour and food stamps to sell. Unless she has something to do with Yi Zhonghai or has her own channels. There is no martyred sign at the door. But there is also a legend that he gave shoes to the Red Army and even had problems walking on his own with his small feet bound. Delivering shoes on the Long March? Why did He Daqing run away after the founding of the country when his two children were both underage? Then he knew that someone would help him raise it. According to the relationship between the TV series Shazhu and the old deaf man, that person is the old deaf man! Every time she appeared, in addition to being for herself, she was hiding white noodles, selling food stamps, belittling Xu Damao, and plotting against Lou Xiao'e. The old deaf man was a selfish person. Silly Zhu didn't give her a lunch box, but Yi Tianzun offered her meals. But she still tried her best to help Shazhu, unless Shazhu was her biological son.

So well written. The writing is smooth. The storyline is good. I can see it. Platinum capital

After reading the first chapter, I was probably sure that it was written by AI. I went to the Finance Department in the middle and came back. At the end, I jumped back to the Finance Department.

A bunch of loopholes... It started in 1970. At that time, Director Yang was sweeping the floor, and then he went to the Finance Department, so he just called the Director of the Finance Department? He didn't have a personal name, and then he took out the documents from 1963 and said that more than 20 years had passed, and the timeline changed to start in 1983... What the hell

Sure enough, today's young people are still cursing little fairies while thinking about marrying little fairies. Think about it carefully, do Ran Qiuye overlap with today's little fairies? The ingredients are not good

The author is writing an elementary school composition! Very awkward to read