
Naruto: Dragon's Roar
火影:恶龙咆哮
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 837k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 9mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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After reading seven chapters, to be honest, the protagonist is not a native, right?
It feels like a second-hand job. Are you a modern person? Go to Tsuchikage and just wield the mace, or is it a time traveler? I'm really speechless. Are you stupid enough to time travel in modern times?
Kaido is not good enough. In his awakened state, he is super shadow level. The Twelve Talisman Holy Lord is more powerful. Of course, if Kaido's body of more than ten meters is compressed to the size of a normal person, with several times the muscle density and strength, he can still reach the sixth level.
The aborigines are not like the aborigines, and the time travelers are not like the time travelers. I feel that the writing is inexplicable.
Although the writing is terrible, I am basically a eunuch, but it is good if I dare to write it.
Don't be attached to the pirate system. Since you have come to Hokage, you must learn from each other's strengths. Learn the ninjutsu you should learn. If you can master the magic of magic, you have to find a way to master it. Let's just talk about the arrangement of the clone technique! You must know that the clone will disappear only when it is hurt. Even if the physique of the phantom beast species is not awakened, it is difficult to break through the defense. After awakening, how many people can actually cause harm. Refer to Gear 4 Luffy who can't let go of cherry blossoms. In terms of absolute attack, it is considered relatively strong among all Kage levels! But if you hit Kaido, you can't break the defense! Therefore, it is possible for a clone to reach a ninja village with Yong Ren.
The best thing about this book is that the main character finally fucking dies. Some of the Hokage civilization are obviously opponents. Those people in Konoha will never die. After fighting for a long time, a lot of supporting characters died. It seems that after the death of a protagonist, I don't know how to write the rest.
The protagonist is said to be fast, has high defense, and has skills such as finger guns. Fighting loess is like fighting a grandson. But he can't beat the unknown Uchiha jounin. His combat power is far worse than Minato. The protagonist also has brain problems. For the sake of the plot, he doesn't even have any brains. This can't last a few days on the shelves.
Why does this protagonist feel like a waste? It takes a long time to play some supporting roles. I am speechless.
The only common system that the anime system measures against is the map cannon. See who can shoot the map cannon. One Piece General can shoot map cannons, and Fujitora can pull meteorites. In Naruto, Shadow can fire some mysteries similar to map cannons to destroy cities. For example, in mobile games, A-nin each has his or her own ultimate move. But facing the meteorite, I was desperate. It shows that General Kizaru is at the level of Naruto the Nine Trumpets. General Fujitora is in the dirty class (super shadow level) —— Of course. Hashirama is here and can defeat three generals. The Six Paths are coming and sweeping across the One Piece system. The upper limit of One Piece's combat power is Super Shadow. No six levels appeared. Naruto swept across One Piece with a sixth level. But Kizaru. Fujitora is at the level of ultra-super cinematography in the dirty class
A bad guy, you dare to pretend to be Zhang Sanfeng after learning Tai Chi for three days
At the beginning of the third war, hundreds of cannon fodder backgrounds were killed in night battles and overlord-colored sneak attacks. Next, I kept pulling, without any tactics or combat power. The entire dozen or so chapters are filled with pretentiousness, rhetoric, nonsense, and the key point is that it is completely brainless!
The writing is okay, but there are too many Naruto fans. What attracts people now mainly depends on whether the imagination is big enough. Is it the main character who is a fun person? Or reform, let those class natives see the power of the proletariat. Come on.
Looking at it so far... I found... This green dragon seems to have no smoke?
It looks good. Those who say it doesn't look good are Japanese dogs. They don't like people killing Konoha people. They like to be dogs for ninjas and only deserve to bark. Just kill like this, kill all the Konoha ninjas
Entertain yourself
It feels like you are amusing yourself. Others say that Hashirama's wood escape is strong because Hashirama himself is too strong! In the same way, it is Kaido who is stronger, not the Blue Dragon Fruit
How should I put it, there is a feeling of wanting to be strong but suppressed first. The battle is not written in a way that the protagonist can hit casually and be injured or die after being hit, and the opponent can only run around as a clone. Then the opponent hits with all his strength, and the protagonist's weapon color can be easily broken. Continue Wrrrr To make some characters unable to die, you can say that you can smash the gopher for a long time, and the opponent's cannon fodder desperately blocks it. Finally, the important character can escape with a disability, inject white cells, resurrect with residual blood, and become stronger, and start the next round of battle. Devil fruits can also be connected with wedges, and you can directly enter the tattoo era. Considering the appearance of a dragon, you can make some deer, hawk, fish, and snake tattoos and distribute them to your subordinates. If you have them, you can write some low-end games, water and water.
Don't you think the fight lasted too long? I'm a little tired of aesthetics
I gave two monthly passes, it was so cool to write
I have two suggestions: 1. The Green Dragon Fruit has the ability of flame cloud, which can transport troops on a large scale. 2. You can try to learn the magic of immortality. Isn't the final goal of Longdi Cave Jackie Chan? Let's combine it
The smell of AI is too strong
The choice of words and sentences is really unnatural. It sounds like a translation. Can you use a better AI?