Water Margin: Brother, It's Getting Cold, Please Put on Some Clothes

Except for the brothel girl as a wife, the rest of the writing is quite good, but I can't stand it anymore.

This book currently seems to be a masterpiece among Water Margin, but Water Margin, Dang Kou and Shuo Yue are integrated together, and the background is quite large. I don't know if the writing will be broken later. The first 50 or so chapters look good. I hope the author can write well. It is rare to see a novel in which Water Margin, Dang Kou and Shuo Yue are integrated.

Even those local chickens and dogs in Liangshan can still dominate the world. A Fang La can crush them to death without Lao Fang even taking action.

I would like to ask the author, will he create a new dynasty of pig's feet in the future? Are they opposites to Song Dynasty?

This early stage has been a bit too long. When will the anti-Song Dynasty start? I think it is better not to suppress Fang La, Wang Qing, and Tian Hu in the early stage. Just subdue some of their favorite characters. No matter how bad the Song Dynasty is, there are still some nails in the bad ship. You can keep them to attract firepower, buy time for your own development, and you can also build yourself up. After all, these are not people who love the people. Fang La was too harsh on the officials of the Song Dynasty, and he would kill them indiscriminately if caught. The scholar-officials of the Song Dynasty in this period were not like those in the late Ming and Qing Dynasties. Although most of them were not good, there were still some scholar-officials who had backbone. Keeping these can also highlight the protagonist. After all, there is no harm without comparison. Of course, these are just some suggestions. The author can write according to his own ideas.

If you are invincible at the beginning, will it collapse in the later stage?

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Someone gave me some advice before, so I'll share my own opinion. First of all, as for the heroine, the emotional drama is really awkward. Let Master Li be the head wife. To be honest, a lot of people have been persuaded to leave. I would say that since you have decided on the head wife, then the emotional drama and the like will be brushed aside. In fact, harem stories without a heroine are not antagonistic, anyway. Toolman The second point is that there are too many original characters. You originally added Water Margin and Dang Kouga said that Yue was already chaotic enough. If you want to help the protagonist, just add three or four. However, as soon as you created the original, you created more than a dozen characters with nicknames. Originally, the fans of Water Margin were just to collect cards. However, as soon as you started, you were given a dozen cards that you had never heard of before, and the sense of substitution was instantly reduced by half.

Very good

A trash dog, if you don't cultivate yourself if you are an immortal, you will cultivate your inner strength. You will go blind for nothing and become a pustule after overwork.

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Everything else is fine, but Qingfeng Village is not good. After what happened, the three of them wouldn't think about whether the protagonist had premeditated it? In addition, the protagonist and Yu Qilin have a close relationship, why don't they mention Li Gu?