Konoha: Start with the Strongest Magician

The curse system comes from negative emotions, and the Evil Sword Fairy, the Yellow Lantern Monster in Green Lantern, and the Beast God in Zhu Xian all come from negative emotions. Looking at it this way, as long as it comes from negative emotions, the upper limit is still considerable, and it mainly depends on the user's amazing wisdom.

Wenqing's illness is so serious 😅

It's a little too slow to catch on, it's already 140,000 words long, and the protagonist is still only three or four years old 😅

Can the negative energy of the mantra system promote the advancement of the Sharingan? Does the Chest of Bliss match the spell system?

Chapter 1 says that adults don't want parents, Chapter 12 wants maternal love, speechless, becomes a child and follows the wisdom

Well, let alone the novice village in more than fifty chapters, not even the novice mission was triggered. Is it too slow to warm up?

I've read a chapter, why don't I leave it here to play games? If you are dissatisfied with this or that, why not just open Fengling Yueying? It's like playing a game anyway.

It's a good idea, but the writing is so disgusting.

3. What's the purpose of having a 4-year-old baby crying and making garbage content occupy the first dozen chapters? Everyone, run quickly

The previous part is too pretentious, especially when you want to give the protagonist a sudden increase in combat power but you are afraid of collapse, and the improvement means no improvement, so it becomes not fun at all. Baby flow is written like this, emmm, it can be said to be thick but not fine. I suggest the author think carefully about how to improve during the infant period, without losing his fighting power or overpowering him, and having a certain sense of enjoyment, instead of looking at the "literary youth" filling the screen, which is full of artificiality. Although he knows that the author wants to write a flesh-and-blood protagonist with a change of thought, but what is shown so far is too much pretentiousness. If it is not controlled well, the infancy will quickly transition to adolescence.

This is not the first time I have written this. There is no lesson learned at all and no progress at all. The problems in this book are exactly the same as the previous one.

It's too literary, the pace is slow, and I don't have enough interest and motivation to continue reading.

The writing is okay, but the pace is too slow.

It's very watery. Who can subscribe to it?

This author has a criminal record, is famous for his bad habits, and has a long childhood.

I can't stop reading Chapter 34. The baby stage plot is as smelly and long as foot wraps. Maybe this "slow-burning" novel is not suitable for me. I won't comment on it if I haven't read it later. After selecting the audience, I guess all I can read later is this one.

With just one magic cannon, I think I can sweep across the ninja world. As long as Lao 6 charges up and fires a cannon at them, it will do the same damage as a tailed beast bullet, and the followers cannot avoid it.

Pig's trotter has a very boring name, Tiger Curse and Nine Emperors are both good individually, but together they are very boring.

The pace is really too slow, 200,000 words, and the progress is like this. Many plots can be summarized directly. This shows that the author's one-sided writing, lack of plot ideas, and careful handling of plots are so tiring that no one follows them, and it is easy to interrupt. I really don't dare to read it.

What do you think about going to the orphanage? I came here to be the cannon fodder for Elder Danzo 🙂

I have countless boss templates next door, were they written by you?