A Ghostly Version of Immortality, Do You Call This Cultivation of Immortality?

In which chapter is the sword opening the palace door? I want to see what palace door it opens 🙂

Why should you join a cultivating sect and engage in the plot of a palace-fighting drama? Nowadays, palace-fighting dramas are poisonous and can easily lose readers and lead to death.

No, what is a skeleton sword? Can you give me a detailed description? These three words alone have no impact at all! Is the hilt a sword spitting out of a skull's mouth, or is the sword a blend of large and small skulls? More detailed descriptions! What a great word-count solution! You can copy and paste it every time you use the Skeleton Sword!

Unbelievable

The author's setting made my eyes light up, the plot design is also good, and the jokes are easy to pick up. It is indeed a masterpiece worth looking forward to and reading, but there is too little written, so there are more chapters~! There are also some shortcomings: For example, some modern terms such as cheating and cheating, it is recommended to change the words later. But "The Mistaken Young Woman" noticed again, maybe the front is not easy to modify, it's just a bit of a drama; I feel that I can use more other punctuation marks to show the character's psychology, such as exclamation points, dashes, etc.; (PS: Some curiosity: The author feels like a veteran, right (bushi🐶)? And there is some special care/concern for the appearance. The author must not be like a flower, right?) Finally, I look forward to writing more! ! ! ! !

Anyway, I think it's pretty good-looking. I don't know if others will see it. I hope you can stick with it.

Every chapter is inseparable from the handsome protagonist. I'm here to see the psychotic plot, not the author's self-pleasure. Let's go, bye.

Trying to be funny, but it feels like a tokusatsu drama

Fortunately, when I saw the character card of the protagonist, I finally saw that he was no longer a 180cm.50Kg tall girl. I'm really happy and congratulated. I finally have a normal protagonist.

After seeing this, the author should actually understand that it is all because your novel is too short and not enough to read, so almost many people have the idea of ​​​​raising them first. After all, many people now cast a wide net, watch the fish come up, and then slowly raise them, and then slaughter them after they are fat. Secondly, most of today's books are the same, so you can rest assured that your book is among the best, at least different in content and style, so in the middle and later stages, more people will read and collect it. But there's still that problem, it's too short, so I can only keep it up first…

After reading the first few chapters, I felt that the story was told well, but occasionally there were small passages that made people confused when reading it. After reading it several times, I still couldn't figure out who did what.

I didn't react when I saw the Qingtian Sword, but I reacted when I saw the sword opening the palace gate. It's true that Bengbu lives in it It's fun to have fun like this, right😰

This idea is quite good, although it fits the style very well, but I think it would be better if it fits the normal style. Don't comment on my personal preference The three-headed demon has not entered the country. I feel that it can be set as a little demon in the first realm, otherwise it is too low, and the wisdom is a bit high. It may be better to set it to the first realm The protagonist's sword skills have transformed twice, and he is still a mortal, but he can kill demons with a sword! Why should I talk about the principles? There must be some principles in the early stage. Even if it is made up, as long as the logic is self-consistent, it cannot be completely idealistic "For example, what is connecting Feijian and the mind? What acts as a driving force or energy source? Whether the essence of the sword has changed or not depends on whether it is a sword or an object." "For example, the transformation of the soul, using the sword technique to affect a certain energy between heaven and earth + the sacrifice of one's own blood to make a flying sword, the power that explodes depends entirely on the flying sword itself + the soul, combined with the sword technique to leverage the extraordinary energy of the world, etc., The energy consumed for control depends entirely on one's own soul, the explosion is extremely high, three seconds of real man" These feelings are more reasonable, well, don't complain, and then normal people use their strengths instead of making up for their weaknesses. After all, this is not a weakness. You can't be proficient in all 360 lines, right? In this case, you can completely train the flesh and blood of the three monsters, so use the alchemy technique The most speechless thing is that after the alchemy technique is successful, you actually abandon the flesh and blood... Even if you rob their lifespan and origin, the remaining souls and complete bodies they leave behind are also a considerable amount of energy, which can be used for physical training In the end, the alchemy technique was to reintegrate some of the master's rubbish elixirs... With a little spiritual power, the elixirs were dismantled and reorganized. It was the first time I saw this kind of operation, mainly because my level was too low. Although the alchemy technique was barely understandable after a transformation... I feel that eating monsters is the best way to use the alchemy technique Of course, the style of this novel is not a normal style, so it fits this style pretty well. The above is just a personal opinion, and does not represent the public. Please don't criticize me. I have only read two chapters, and I will only talk about these two chapters

This introduction, hahaha, made me laugh. 😏

This setting is not a tomato, am I not a drama god? 😂It's rare to see Tomato's setting march towards the starting point, and the writing is not bad, and it's quite comfortable to watch.

After reading three chapters, starting with slaying demons and slaying demons, immortality is the same routine, and the settings are the same

Using informal descriptions to do serious things, is the author a moderator who has gone online?

It's confusing and weird to read 😅

Not bad, not bad. I haven't read such a good fairy tale in a long time. Keep up the good work.

To mediocre people, we are mysterious and unpredictable. Fallen. Decay. It's chilling. You cannot understand where we came from or why we are what we are... Until you realize that we have not fallen, but have ascended. "

The sword opens the palace door, and the palace is the palace of the womb 😁~

The synopsis looks similar to a novel from more than ten years ago, with certain characters making comments and exaggerating.

It blends weirdness with fairy tales and funny settings. I hope the author can finish it. I really like it after reading 10 chapters.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that is decisive in killing, sharp and joyful. "Old Man in Time Travel Picks Up Rags and Survives by Making Bad Movies" is hilarious...

Isn't this a break? , The screenwriter also recommended it to the notification bar?