Zhutian Film and Television: I Just Want to Survive

Next, I will write about bad guys fighting for hegemony, and I will write about a new fictional ancient drama that has been released recently, and go and fight for hegemony in it. For example, Wufu. Nine layers of purple, beautiful tranquility, willow boat story. Wait, urban type. Going north, what other school dramas are there?

You changed the title of the book to Across the Heavens and published it just for Cao Pi to subscribe. Your name does not fit the content of the book.

Fairy Sister

The lower limit of the main character is very low. Those who like to read trashy stories can read it. Those who just love the party should not get involved.

It's okay to be a thief and sleep with women, but you can't be a thief and still stand on the moral high ground and point fingers at others! However, in reality, there are indeed many such people. Do the most obscene things and sing the loudest tune. After the sacrifice of the Dragon King, the world turned upside down!

Almost all of the male protagonist's points are earned by women, and the whole book is almost on the third path.

Such calculations are of no use, they are laborious, and there was no monitoring in that turbulent era. Whoever plots against you, just seize the opportunity to make others disappear from the world. No matter how big the problem, it is just a group of ordinary people. How can you calculate something? The residents in the courtyards all have jobs, and their living conditions are at least average in the country. If they are calculated like this, then won't all the poorer places and people die? It's really too disgusting to write about that era. How could it be so terrible in that era? Although that era was a society ruled by people, not the current legal society, that era had its own moral standards. It doesn't matter how awesome a poor person is. His reputation is 100% a stinker on the street. This cannot be avoided. After all, there are consequences for being unfilial. The saying "Three people without children will make you a big man" is really not an empty talk in that era. According to Yi Zhonghai's situation, there is no other possibility besides being able to keep his tail between his legs and become a big man. This is purely a mess of the screenwriter. In those days, people who were extremely poor were born to be viewed with colored glasses. Do you think that in modern society, it doesn't matter whether you have children or not? In that era, if there were not many men in the family, everyone would be bullied, let alone an ex-household with no offspring. Basically, the whole hospital would look down on him, target him, and bully him. Not to mention that he was only an eighth-level worker. Even if he was an engineer, others would still bully him. After all, in the eyes of people of that era, ex-households were the best targets for bullying. Execution was the norm in that era. There were many cases of ex-households in modern society, let alone that era. Therefore, an ex-household was born to be at the bottom of society in that era. , It is basically impossible to stand up, even if Yi Zhonghai is a high official, he is a high official, naturally there will be other high officials who want to kill him, he can't run away, unless he can make himself covered with thorns, making it impossible for others to start, as long as there is a weakness, others They would seize the opportunity to trick him. After all, it is human nature to bully the weak and fear the strong. Juehu was born weak in that era, which meant he was easy to bully. That era was the era of governing society with morality, and a Juehu was born without the protection of morality.

All female characters? Including the deaf old lady? Aunt Jia?

I thought it was about survival when I read the title, but it turned out to be a stud book.

Author, are you serious? Based on the size of the courtyard, you have written more than 80 chapters! The new drama will basically end in Chapter 20 and Chapter 30! Are you serious? What is the difference between this and a running account? There are still more than 10 chapters in one drama?

Zeng Shaonen's copy is too ridiculous. You're just watching other people fall in love. If you want to write like this, you should have told me earlier. My subscription was in vain. I'm really convinced, what I want to see is the protagonist killing everyone, not the supporting characters falling in love. 20 Pieces of several hundred points coins, you think I'm joking.

Sun Li is so ugly (purely personal opinion), how can she talk about it?

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Why is there a revival of spiritual energy? This is the most annoying thing.

It's all a running account, and the plot is driven entirely by dialogue between characters. . . Except for the Siheyuan, the other worlds are over after writing more than ten or twenty chapters. The diary flow

This is another novel in which the protagonist's growth is not very visible from beginning to end. After experiencing so many worlds, nothing has changed.

The main reason is that the emotional aspects are not well written. Pure love is just not easy to write down, and the harem is difficult to deal with. If you are not careful, it is not the problem of the harem, but the Teddy dog ​​and the sex demon.

After reading a few copies, I feel that the ending is a bit rushed in many cases, and many characters feel not written in place. The most important thing for a work is to understand the audience. If you want to write about multiple people, write it well. Be careful when describing the characters. The positioning of the characters must be clear and consistent with their thinking logic. The hero and heroine of the book have a clear role positioning, so it must be consistent with their behavior. Take action when it is time to take action. It is taboo to be both affectionate and devoted at the same time. It is a big taboo to please both sides. In addition, now that each world is replaced by the male protagonist, will my thinking and logic change suddenly? One world and one personality, isn't that schizophrenia? Is what you're writing about a mental illness? Just like Siheyuan and Renshijian, they are simply two people. If you continue to shape the main plot like this, it can be regarded as two novels. Another thing is that the key plot is vague, and there are very few specific operations to advance the plot. It is just a lot of character dialogue, without side descriptions and echoes. The transitions are also very jumpy and stiff, which makes people look like a dry account and unable to get involved. I think you should take a look at the writing of those well-written infinite flow stories and learn from the association. I think the concept of this book is good, all the female characters being the heroines are also very innovative, the extras are also very good, and the overall level is of a certain level, but it is a pity for a novel, it is not reflected in the results, you can't just follow it, you have to write something good to attract readers. I hope the author can learn more about how other good novels start, change, and describe, so that he can write better in the future.

I want to give up the book, "Zeng Boy", I really don't know what you are writing about... I have never watched the original drama, but after reading what you wrote, I can already imagine the original drama. Are you helping me save time watching the drama?

A slight smile is very charming Bei Weiwei

. . . From which world did the quests disappear, points started to be awarded randomly, and skills basically got messed up. Author, your writing is a bit confusing. What was the flow of quests in the heavens at the beginning and what is it now? The highlight at the beginning is the cool operation of the protagonist in the cool mission of the cool system. Although many people complained about the first world, I personally think that the first world you wrote is the best. You have to jump to read the rest, which is not interesting.

In the free chapters, you can forget about the plot. In the paid chapters, you should still write the original plot. The protagonist has not participated and has not changed. Although you have not watched the TV series, you do not need to copy and paste it.

Don't you want to live forever? These worlds of yours are more like going out to play

The ending was too rushed, it felt like many chapters were cut off

The plot of the latest one, Na Qingqing, is so SB

There are too many words. Listening to the book and speaking are too girly.

Since you can see the world you have already experienced, why can't you practice martial arts and exercises in the world? Can't you just go back and learn them?

Dream of Red Mansions is well written from the beginning to the middle! It fell apart a little later! After killing Qin Keqing first and not taking in Li Wan later, and the master's wife did not give any follow-up explanation, Jia Tanchun still died! It is better to unify the country again in the follow-up than to unify the country in the mid-term, with all the twelve golden hairpins in the account!

How long does youth have to end? What to write next?

I understand that when you write Siheyuan, you can modify some stories by yourself, but your modification is too stupid! 1. Write He Yuzhu as the son of a deaf old lady! It was the deaf old lady who used to be a prostitute in Bada Hutong, seducing the teenage He Daqing! So there is He Yuzhu! 2. The deaf old lady plotted to kill Yi Zhonghai's wife and let him marry his current wife. The current wife is still the person the deaf old lady used to win over dignitaries to sleep with! How did the author come up with this idea about Yi Zhonghai's current wife's appearance! 3. The deaf old lady plotted He Yuyu's mother to death! 4. Yi Zhonghai and Xu Fugui plotted against Jia Dongxu's father together! Together they also brought He Da's liquidation plan out of the courtyard! I feel like the author is hysterical! Write this outrageous wild history! There is also the word count of water! ! !