Battle Through the Heavens: From Taming Beasts to Becoming the Strongest

Little Dragon Girl🙂

A few years later, Tian Xie Shen looked at the several masters in front of him and fell into deep thought.

I spent money to read it and gave it a monthly pass, so I would like to give you some comments. No. 1 - Because the timeline is two years later, Xiao Yan's realm is much lower than in the original work. Although a kind of strange fire is added, it is still a bit uncomfortable to watch. I don't know why when I read novels, I really don't like that the protagonist's realm is much lower than that of his peers, and then he needs to leapfrog and fight to show the protagonist's power. On the contrary, I prefer the protagonist to be ahead of others among his peers. However, it is understandable because your timeline is two years behind. I hope that the protagonist's realm can be explained later. Let's raise the world. Not to mention being superior to peers, at least we won't have a situation where a fighting master fights a great fighting master. Thank you (I want to ask a question here. I remember that in the original work, Xiao Yan's realm will be improved a lot every time he absorbs a different kind of fire, but here you are absorbing it. I didn't seem to see Xiao Yan's level improve when I collected Ten Thousand Beasts Spirit Fire and Qing Ling Earth Core Fire. Did I remember it wrong? ) No. 2 - Didn't you add a spirit-controlling body to Xiao Yan just to add one or two female protagonists? I hope to add some handsome, domineering, and mighty monsters in the future. For now, the little lion counts as one, but you haven't contracted it yet. Moreover, you have basically not written about the benefits that this physique can bring to the protagonist. It seems that you want to wait until Xiao Yan reaches a higher level to write about it later. But in that case, will the early stage be too useless? Now it seems that there is a "feedback" ability, but it has only been used once. I hope this constitution will not be too helpful in the early stage. The third thing I want to ask is that the price of your book is very unstable. Some chapters are more than 20 gold coins, some are 20, and some are 10. Let me give you a figure of 15 gold coins 🤓

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Medusa

Isn't it true that in this era, Xiao Yan is still making a pact with Nalan Yanran? Is breaking off the engagement considered an insult? In modern times, if you have no money or ability, which white, rich and beautiful person will be with you? You've already read fan fiction, why are you still doing this gambling thing?

Xiao Xun'er

For example, because there is a bloodline that can evolve, or the little lion that Xiao Yan finally did not accept, if the inheritance of the ancient beast tamer is obtained in any ancient ruins later, there will be a special way to evolve the monsters with low bloodline and poor foundation (if you add a setting, you must have strange fire, preferably the spirit fire of all beasts)

Heavenly Demon Phoenix King, Nine Netherworld Underworld Python Saint, what kind of name is this that goes against the sky? Don't you know there are ancient celestial phoenixes and ancient celestial snakes? And what about the Supreme Dragon and Phoenix? This is the strongest monster that has been defeated

Does the beast-controlling spirit body have no space for beast-controlling? Don't have the skills to summon a tide of beasts?