Battle Through the Heavens: Starting in the Jia Ma Empire

The creativity is very good, and it is good to dare to write about things outside of Wutan City. It's a pity that your configuration can't keep up. It seems that your writing skills are a little better than mine. I give you one point and you can beat me three points. Therefore, the more you write poorly, the more you like to use it, especially the second one.

Are there any semi-saints in Glacier Valley? This fucking disgusting person actually added several Half-Saints to the Glacier River Valley. There are only three Half-Saints in the two sects. Well, now he directly crushes the strong men in the Glacier River Valley and crushes the two sects

In fact, it was okay in the beginning. Although the plot with the heroines was a bit awkward, I could still watch it. However, after arriving in Zhongzhou, I gradually became incomprehensible, especially at the end of Dou Qi World. You are the first Dou Po fan I have ever seen, and you asked Xiao Yan to become Yan Emperor first to save you. On the one hand, I was afraid, but also very strange. After the Tuoshe Ancient Emperor's Mansion was opened, it was clear that there was Origin Qi in hand, so it was fine not to give it to Gu Yuan. If not to Zhu Kun, hurry up and get a Dou Emperor? This is a problem with the ending, and the other is a problem with the text. First of all, the author likes to write plots in which the protagonist pretends to be cool, and then a bunch of people want to give birth to a monkey for the protagonist. The same is usually true for some tough-minded people in it, especially the time when the Gama Empire refined the Douzong Dan and had to draw three times. Award, for the second time, a woman came up to secretly kiss the protagonist. Did you think this plot was very interesting? Secondly, including the one above, it can be said to be a common problem for new writers. They will add a lot of jokes that they think are interesting in their articles, and then they will get excited about it, but then basically forget about it.

I haven't read the book yet, so let's read the reviews first. The number of reviews here are basically based on pictures, so I won't be able to read this book.

Xiao Yan didn't dare to brag about Dou Sheng killing Dou Emperor. In the original battle between the two emperors, Xiao Yan only had the upper hand. He gave up his body to seal the Soul Emperor because he didn't want to kill him. Now Dou Sheng and Dou Emperor are just old wounds that have exploded, which is really impressive. Goodbye

I've read a few chapters, but there's nothing to comment on. It's a greasy novice novel written by a middle-aged loser male. It's not interesting. I have no desire to read it. The writing style is average and the descriptions are average. I can't relate to it at all. To put it bluntly, I just can't read it.

Randomly changing the setting, the protagonist in Chapter 17 is a great fighting master, a third-grade alchemist, and a group of alchemists were born in Qingshan Town with just some guidance. According to the way you write it, the alchemist may not even be as good as a fighting master.

Why didn't you go to Canaan College earlier? In the early stage, if you don't have the background or resources to find a better backer for yourself, if Dou Po is not from the Xiao family, the best backer in the early stage is Canaan. In the mid-term, you can go to the Danta Pagoda. In the later stage, the backer must be Zi Yan. When the time is right, I will recognize my father-in-law and ask the old Dragon Emperor for some means of self-protection. At the critical moment, I will report that my father-in-law is the Nine-Star Dou Sheng Taixu Ancient Dragon. Even the Soul Emperor may not dare to touch you.

This author is getting more and more nonsense. The author probably doesn't even believe that the Heavenly Supreme Lord will not die. Otherwise, the Mokogu tribe will take action?

How come your writing is not as good as the original? What do you want us to think? The writing is not as good as the original work. Should I read the original work or read it as a fan like you?