Fighting: Starting from the Jia Ma Empire

I don't know why, but the first 20 or so chapters seemed okay, with training, character interaction... But the later chapters became more and more boring. I didn't feel much after reading about 40 chapters. I thought there were more interesting things like skills, adventures, beauties, etc. In the beginning. After the Kyoto banquet, it seemed that the setting was too high. It can't be said that everything is covered, but there are so many chapters about fighting monsters and refining alchemy... Is there anything to see in this? ? Looking at the catalog again, I feel like I'm going through Huo Huo's journey in advance... And there are not as exciting character interactions as Huo Huo! There is conflict, cooperation, and excellent supporting character interaction, otherwise it is a single-player game, which is very boring.

The creativity is very good, and it is good to dare to write about things outside of Wutan City. It's a pity that your configuration can't keep up. It seems that your writing skills are a little better than mine. I give you one point and you can beat me three points. Therefore, the more you write poorly, the more you like to use it, especially the second one.

Are there any semi-saints in Glacier Valley? This fucking disgusting person actually added several Half-Saints to the Glacier River Valley. There are only three Half-Saints in the two sects. Well, now he directly crushes the strong men in the Glacier River Valley and crushes the two sects

In fact, it was okay in the beginning. Although the plot with the heroines was a bit awkward, I could still watch it. However, after arriving in Zhongzhou, I gradually became incomprehensible, especially at the end of Dou Qi World. You are the first Dou Po fan I have ever seen, and you asked Xiao Yan to become Yan Emperor first to save you. On the one hand, I was afraid, but also very strange. After the Tuoshe Ancient Emperor's Mansion was opened, it was clear that there was Origin Qi in hand, so it was fine not to give it to Gu Yuan. If not to Zhu Kun, hurry up and get a Dou Emperor? This is a problem with the ending, and the other is a problem with the text. First of all, the author likes to write plots in which the protagonist pretends to be cool, and then a bunch of people want to give birth to a monkey for the protagonist. The same is usually true for some tough-minded people in it, especially the time when the Gama Empire refined the Douzong Dan and had to draw three times. Award, for the second time, a woman came up to secretly kiss the protagonist. Did you think this plot was very interesting? Secondly, including the one above, it can be said to be a common problem for new writers. They will add a lot of jokes that they think are interesting in their articles, and then they will get excited about it, but then basically forget about it.

I haven't read the book yet, so let's read the reviews first. The number of reviews here are basically based on pictures, so I won't be able to read this book.

Xiao Yan didn't dare to brag about Dou Sheng killing Dou Emperor. In the original battle between the two emperors, Xiao Yan only had the upper hand. He gave up his body to seal the Soul Emperor because he didn't want to kill him. Now Dou Sheng and Dou Emperor are just old wounds that have exploded, which is really impressive. Goodbye

I've read a few chapters, but there's nothing to comment on. It's a greasy novice novel written by a middle-aged loser male. It's not interesting. I have no desire to read it. The writing style is average and the descriptions are average. I can't relate to it at all. To put it bluntly, I just can't read it.

Why didn't you go to Canaan College earlier? In the early stage, if you don't have the background or resources to find a better backer for yourself, if Dou Po is not from the Xiao family, the best backer in the early stage is Canaan. In the mid-term, you can go to the Danta Pagoda. In the later stage, the backer must be Zi Yan. When the time is right, I will recognize my father-in-law and ask the old Dragon Emperor for some means of self-protection. At the critical moment, I will report that my father-in-law is the Nine-Star Dou Sheng Taixu Ancient Dragon. Even the Soul Emperor may not dare to touch you.

Randomly changing the setting, the protagonist in Chapter 17 is a great fighting master, a third-grade alchemist, and a group of alchemists were born in Qingshan Town with just some guidance. According to the way you write it, the alchemist may not even be as good as a fighting master.

How come your writing is not as good as the original? What do you want us to think? The writing is not as good as the original work. Should I read the original work or read it as a fan like you?

This author is getting more and more nonsense. The author probably doesn't even believe that the Heavenly Supreme Lord will not die. Otherwise, the Mokogu tribe will take action?

I originally wanted to read the comments in the comment section, but I was disgusted by the pictures.

The writing is a bit stuck, and the emotional scenes are so vomiting-inducing, and the anti-inflammatory is actually better than the protagonist? This is a bit overwhelming.

I have read too many novels about Gu Zhenren, who are decisive in killing, unscrupulous, and have a harem of three thousand. These novels, which are sanctimonious, aim to defeat the original villain, have no goals, and strictly control the wife, are boring.

I was persuaded to quit at the beginning. The way it was written ten years ago, women would be shy at every turn, fluttering into their arms and blushing, while men would smile evilly.

Niubi, if you don't understand, let me ask, can Doupo practice multiple techniques at the same time? The protagonist is practicing 5 types at the same time, which is too...

The biggest taboo in fan fiction is to overpower Xiao Yan, who is not as good as the original protagonist. When writing a fan fiction, the protagonist should overpower Xiao Yan, otherwise he would not be the protagonist.

I wish you all good luck in the new year, may your family be prosperous and everything may be prosperous!

The plot direction is okay, and the pig-footed characters are okay except for being a bit of a middle-aged girl. I support the idea of ​​having a girl, but your writing of the emotional scene is really bad, and the rest of the writing is almost acceptable. The poor emotional scene will only make you pick your feet, and the two women have too much writing, which exposes the author's shortcomings. Alas, I really feel pity

This is the author's evaluation of him by others. I think it is correct, although it is a bit one-sided.

It's not as good as fighting against the weak Lin Feng

It's a bit poisonous, the woman's cheating is too serious, the emotional line is not well written, it's better not to write it at all, it's just too embarrassing to read.

Will the name of the ancient Heavenly Emperor be changed when the time comes? One Daqian and two Heavenly Emperors?

Is there any fan who killed the snake directly?

If you fight against your colleagues, you will definitely win the Little Medical Immortal. Farewell.

Without Yao Lao, Xiao Huohuo could reach Douzun. But with the opportunity and talent of the protagonist and the time traveler, he can reach the semi-saint level, and he may be able to reach the fighting saint level in his lifetime. By the time Xiao Huohuo reaches Dou Zun, Emperor Hun Tian may have become Dou Emperor. If Emperor Hun Tian doesn't cleanse the Dou Qi Continent with blood, and then opens up the passage between Dou Qi Continent and the upper plane, Xiao Huohuo can slowly rise to become the great master, because the dominion has already been destined, and the reverse effect is the cause, and the reverse result is the cause!

There is no system in the introduction, but you still add system flow in the tag?