On the Peninsula, I Want to Be a Singer

As I watched later, I felt that the protagonist was becoming more and more disconnected. The emergence of Suzy's character was a failure, and the transformation of the protagonist from an innocent boy to someone who wanted everything was also very disconnected. I felt that I didn't think too much about it when I started to create the character. I created a character who has never been in love, but is not an LSP. It will be difficult to change the harem later.

I don't know why, I just don't have the desire to read on. Maybe it's my problem, bye.

You'd better stop writing, it's so embarrassing. The protagonist feels like Silly. Is this a reborn person? There are so many bad jokes mixed in, which greatly affects the experience.

The character of the protagonist, the rich second generation of the chaebol, is really two-armed, which is really worse than the other book Asteroids.

It's fine if you have a chaebol background, but it's too cheap for a chaebol like you to become a singer. You have so much money and are so handsome. These celebrities can just play around and change one every day without repeating the same thing.

In fact, I have been struggling. In fact, it does not matter whether I am older, the same age or younger. You can be taken care of when you are older, after all, the male protagonist has just turned 18~ If you are the same age or younger, then be happy. No matter what people do in Korea, there are too many things to see. I'm a little unsure personally, so can you give me some advice? Let me refer to it. I don't pay much attention to Korean entertainment, I just know about it. So if there is anything wrong with the writing, you are welcome to point it out.

Are you bowing your head now? I feel that Jisoo is a bit over-the-top. I feel that the protagonist is a little too nice to her. Once or twice is enough. You will have a different feeling when you look at it. Don't do too much next... Next, the protagonist should not run the schedule like a hard-working worker. Don't compromise!         "", suzy, Don't lick the heroine. If you can flirt with her, don't do it.

Suzy, I really like her looks. At least if I hate her, I can't say she is ugly. As far as I can see the current progress, I still want to have two heroines. Of course, Jisoo is still big, Suzy is too wavy.

Does Lin yr appear often? If there are more, I don't really want to see it... What an old witch 😥

The protagonist travels through time, not rebirth. The appearance is just the same. His initial thought was very simple, just to make up for the unfinished pursuit in his previous life.