Cover the Sky, the Invincible Swordsman, Reach the Sky in One Step from the Beginning

The third chapter is already unbearable. In the first chapter, in the boundless sky above the Eastern Wasteland, you have survived the quasi-emperor's ninth calamity. Isn't that still near Beidou? Is it because you can't go to the outer wilderness of the universe? Are the people on Beidou trying to mess with you, or are you, the quasi-emperor, a parallel import? In Chapter 2, the plot unfolds inexplicably with too many elements. He ran to the ancient restricted area and said, "You are finally here." You must have watched Infernal Affairs too much. Didn't I say that I was sitting in front of the cliff all the time? As for the sword holder, the three-body one is very impressive. Chapter 3, the combat power setting is poisonous. You and the Supreme actually fought on the Beidou, with a hundred-foot-long sword light, and the Supreme suddenly smashed a deep pit thousands of feet in size on the ground. Even Zhetian colleagues can't have such combat power, even Xiao Huohuo of Dou Po is stronger than this.

Your description of fighting doesn't look like an emperor, but like a saint. I suggest you change it.

1. The quasi-emperor arrived at the nine heavenly tribulations 2. Overcoming the tribulation in the sky of the Eastern Wasteland 3. 3 Swords broke into 3 restricted areas 4. Great emperor level cultivation 5. The emperor's tribulation was sealed by the system 6. The ruthless emperor proclaimed himself (using various fairy golds) in the Bronze Immortal Palace in the ancient forbidden land 7. The highest etiquette to worship the ruthless emperor 8...

Siri can't stand it now. Why don't you just write one word per page?

This author feels like he has never read the original work. Writing blindly

There is a huge difference... This protagonist is not even as good as many of the supporting characters in the original work, and the plug-ins are useless...

After reading the reviews, I found that this book is not much better. I don't say whether I have read it or not, but your introduction did not arouse my interest.

The author gives me a suggestion, I wonder if you will take it. Go and watch Ximen Chuixue. You can't write the flavor of the sword fairy. There is nothing except the sword of the sword fairy. One sword can break all laws. It's better to change it. If you write it like this, your grades will definitely not improve.

Support the author, but I also hope everyone will support my friend's novel. I would like to recommend you a fantasy novel that is extremely imaginative. This novel is: Returning to the Fairyland, the book is at the starting point. This is a very silly novel. The author specializes in funny novels. There are various plot contrasts and funny plots in the novel. The novel is very funny. I hope you can support my good brother. I hope you can support the crowd and the seat. Thank you all fellow Taoists for your support.

Generally speaking, opponents and passers-by call pig's trotters names, so how can I call them pig's feet? Embarrassing😳

It feels pretty good, keep up the good work and make the plot more compact.

Can it be fixed? Just asking if you can fix it? Don't you think it's stretching your crotch? Already quasi-emperor

I just saw the first chapter and I didn't want to read anymore. What did the author write? 😳