I Have a Portable Cave

How should I put it? I feel that these protagonists are too anxious. To use the saying of the super god world, a main god needs at least a hundred years to learn, a thousand years to gain strength, a thousand years to accumulate ideas, and a million years to establish a system.

Let the author see my joke, a draft I wrote: mixed mythological Da Luo transcendence method, immortal magic power method plus Taoist tools, heavenly priesthood seal conferring system, covering the sky secret realm method plus early combat power, latitude cosmology plus fairy world disc box. Low to high: Jingwu (light and dark transformation of true elixirs and adding some concepts and Feng Shui techniques), Qiwu (Jin Yong's martial arts series adds door-level Taoist spells and abilities), Shenwu (slightly lower-level Gaowu like Fengyun in the early stage, Demon Sword, Tang Dynasty, Tianlong). The three elements are returned to their roots and origins, and then they start cultivating immortality again. This requires those skills of the Human Immortal Martial Arts series to cultivate the essence, energy, and spirit, and then combine the three foundations to change the foundation, Taoist body, divine body, etc. 1. Draw lessons from Journey to the West (Eternal Eternal Void Immortal), then to Pure Yang Xuxian (Eternal Immortal Void Immortal), to the Chaos True Immortal (Zhetian Immortal), to the Mysterious Mystical Immortal, to the Immortal Golden Immortal, to the Heaven-level Taiyi Heavenly Way, to the Heaven-level Daluo Avenue, to the Hunyuan Wuji Eternity, to the Mythical Daluo Fifth Tai. Anyway, I wrote a draft of tens of thousands of words in vain, haha, anyway, I have no descriptive techniques for novels, and it would be a headache for me to write a thousand-word essay! Instead, I wrote hundreds of cheats! I can't even remember it myself! Each one is more outrageous than the other!

There is no doctrine, no rules, it looks like children playing house. A sect has many departments, and the code of conduct is strict, and rewards and punishments must be clear. As a pope, you must have the majesty of a pope. The protagonist looks like a college student, a completely unexperienced veteran. The social experience is too poor, carrots and sticks, clear rewards and punishments, and the art of controlling people, none of these. The author is advised to look at history, the kings of the past dynasties, the history of sects, and the Western and Eastern sects. Look at how these sects deceive people. The author's writing is not very good! Look at the veteran officials and people who have been in the system, how they do things.

What level of person is Hua Tiandu? The fusion of Hua Tiandu's martial arts and The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty allowed me to see the beauty of Pangu playing basketball and Destruction Day learning Wing Chun.

Pig's Feet doesn't even have magical powers, but it recruits a bunch of people, what can it do? The world we go to in the future will not all be solved by force. Especially in an increasingly advanced world. It's equivalent to collecting a bunch of garbage.

Chapter 1: The main consciousness is not written well. It looks very weird. It is not a mental illness or schizophrenia. How can there be so many main consciousness personalities? A normal person only has one main consciousness and one subconscious mind. One more is schizophrenia. In the eyes of normal people, a psychopath

The meridians and acupoints of martial arts internal skills are like the circuit board of a computer host, while the eyes are the computer display screen, the ears are the speakers, and the brain is the information processor. If you use computer knowledge to study the secrets of internal strength, you will surely be able to deduce the internal strength into a version that physically travels across the universe, right? !

The author should be a newbie, some of the plots can be seen, but the writing style is also good, not so brainless and has a halo of wisdom. From the first world, it can be seen that the protagonist is not suitable to be a leader. The force of the world only accelerates the growth. Since the creative power, why not search carefully? After all, it is a world that not only has the protagonists and supporting roles, but also other talents. If you are just looking for talents for cultivation, there are a lot of martial arts, fairy tales and even animations. In the modern world, it takes time to train people. According to the Internet, there are a lot of toxins in the body of modern people. And it's useless and useless. Does the protagonist do charity? If you are looking for management talents, it will take a while. In modern times, it should be easy to find an elite talent with no worries!

I read this introduction several times, and it successfully made me question my own knowledge of Chinese literature 🙂 The introduction is like this, how scary is the book? If the brain is stored, it must be contaminated by memes, right?

This protagonist is such a big loser. I feel that it is not interesting in the world. Even what he does is not interesting to watch. You are just a person who has high strength and shows your presence at critical moments when major world events occur. Then you come out to be a troublemaker. Things were messed up and ended hastily. They just came out to cause trouble. Then the enemy came to kill the protagonist. The protagonist was able to fight in and out and became famous all over the world. No one could kill the Grand Master if he wanted to run away. Are there many Grand Masters in this world who besieged one person?

He said that the fourth level of divine power was about the same as Tyson's punching power. I didn't want to watch it anymore. The strength was gone all of a sudden.

I was advised to give up at the beginning. The layout is very difficult to read, and the writing is not fluent, so it is very difficult to read.

To put it bluntly, they are nouveau riche. What I admire the most are the aristocratic families in the novel Zhe Tian. The physiques of Taiyin, Sun, Chaos, Ancient Times, etc. All appear in the aristocratic families. If you still don't understand, just pretend I didn't say it.

It was decided after chapter forty that this book would never be subscribed.

Standing and standing at the same time, plundering the world and giving back to the Holy Mother?

The Nine-tailed Sky Fox in the Zhuxian World will not be accepted? Liu'er's mother was imprisoned in Fenxiang Valley

Author, do you know what a poor man's mentality will be like if he suddenly has 100 million? Yours is even more exaggerated than a poor man's 100 million. Do you think the protagonist's mentality will collapse?