Wonderful Stories of the Elf World

I have read all the chapters in the current update, and I will leave a book review I was very interested in reading this article at the beginning. The portraits of the ranch were well depicted, and I liked it very much, so I bought it all in one go after Chapter V. As a result, the more I read, the more biased the painting style becomes, and the viewer becomes more and more uncomfortable! Let me talk about the most annoying point first. There is no problem in solving the case, but can you please not write so much about the figure and appearance of the female supporting characters? Is it necessary? And the male protagonist is so offensive and has no sense of boundaries, but the female characters actually treat him with respect for them? Sure, maybe compared to the person he's pretending to be, but why compare to that scum? Or was it because he didn't covet them as much as he said he did that he discovered he was a fake? And one is not enough. On average, every story must have at least one female character, and she must have a good appearance, a good figure, a good family background, and she also attaches great importance to the male protagonist. Is this an elf novel? This is a harem story! Wouldn't it be nice to have the time to write more about elves? When the author writes about men, he won't go out of his way to write about their bodies, or speak pornographically, right? Instead of writing pornographic jokes, would you like to learn some war group portraits when you have time? ! That part was so well written! How many people who read elf novels, especially those with a pastoral style, would find this style of painting that suddenly turns to saving the world attractive? You can just spin it, and no one will judge you if it looks good, but the key is that it doesn't look good! It's still the same old story as the Qidian novels. Who among those who read Elf novels wants to read the harem counterattack? I don't want to see it anyway! The feeling was really good at the beginning. Each elf character had his own story, but then the plot began to speed up slowly. The more characters were added, the more things were missed, and the characters became more and more one-sided. In the end, only a few main characters such as Eevee and the Snow Witch were basically seen! The increase in human roles also allows the protagonist to mix more with humans and leave the side of the elves. Invisibly, they seem to be no longer equal, and the utopian pastoral atmosphere is completely destroyed! It also adds a wretched masculine atmosphere! It's so broken that I can't watch it!

I originally wanted to read it, but I found out there was a female protagonist, so I went to the next one, please support the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Yusanjia

Farm

If there is no golden hand, why should the protagonist surpass others?

1. The protagonist loves to think, has strong subjective initiative, and is rich in knowledge. If the author is poor in writing, auxiliary systems can be arranged 2. The protagonist is useless or weak in ability, which is actually more unsuitable for arranging the system. It is easier to write in the style of a system trainer, but it is not suitable for some microscopic thoughts (ps: Pokémon background is really not suitable for countries that reflect the real world, 😒, it is better to create a different world that has nothing to do with reality)

I feel like I'm constantly trying to level up. I don't know who the main battle elf is. Now this, now that. I don't know how to cultivate a few elves first. Cultivate a few elves, and then cultivate a second team of elves. I said before that I don't have the strength, so I won't cultivate a few elves first. I will cultivate this one, then that. How can I have so much time to cultivate so many elves together. I go out on an adventure and take the elves with me and put them outside. Is it troublesome to collect the elves in the elf ball and put them on me? Is it awesome to have superpowers when I go undercover alone without bringing any elves? Is it as powerful as it used to be when I have super powers? I still don't have an elf. I always worry the elf. I keep saying that I'm sorry to make the elf worry. It's not just once or twice. I don't have a long memory. What do I think of elf? This is a trainer.

30% Farm + 30% breeding house + 40% battle + daily or travel style book. It feels like it is the future of Pokémon background, but it is not easy to write. I look forward to it.

Well written, please keep updating the author

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Milk: Big Milk Can Garden: Mimosa, Cherry Blossom Treasure, Lily Root Doll, False Mantis Orchard: Miniature Hibiscus, Tropical Dragon Orchard Guard: Little Wood Spirit, Deadwood Demon Flying Guard: Bobo, Cuckoo, Spearow, Natural Finch, Murk Crow, Armored Bird, Pride Swallow, Green Sheepbird, Muckle, Bean Pigeon, Little Arrow, Little Duer, Juvenile Tit, Electric Petrel. Pasture Guard: Hairy Eagle, Bald Eagle Girl Delivery: Messenger Bird Seasoning: Hot Spicy Baby, Sweet Bamboo Bamboo, Salt Shibao Tea: Smooth Tea, Lai Bei Tea Aquatic products: Giant Claw Crab, Lobster Soldier, Iron Arm Gun Shrimp, Shiju Crab, Victorious Crab, Hairy Shore Crab Honey: Needle Bee, Three Bees Farming: Kentero, Mud Donkey Boy, Afro Buffalo Cotton: Shuttlecock grass, young cotton wool, kapok ball, braided sheep, sheep Dessert: Fairy Milk Mounts: Mount Lamb, Little Fire Horse, Spotted Horse, Dudu Pet Birds: Noisy Bird, Flower Dance Bird, Angry Parrot Viewing: Ancient Moon Bird, Lower Stonebird, Flamingo Water Show: Little Sea Lion, Small Ball Flying Fish Lake: King Carp, Ugly Fish Long-winged gull Slowpoke Lotus Leaf Kid Starfish Kodak Duck Baby duck Mosquito tadpole Goldfish Big tongue clam Lantern fish Marilu Ubo Sun coral Sea: Onyx jellyfish Ink sea horse Lapras Iron gun fish Teeth fish Fossil exhibition: Ammonite Fossil helmet Fossil pterosaur Nanny butler: Magic Wall Doll Miss Goth Sister Mizui Nurse: Geely Egg Almost Doll Careful Attendant Fat Keding Flower Therapy Ring Labor: Haoli Clan Handling Craftsman Guard: Clay Doll Giant Servant Sword General Shepherd Dog: Delubi Coyote Katy Dog Occasionally Called Mastiff Caller Dog Little Yorkie Gozan Dog Rock Dog Lion, Tiger and Leopard: Roentgen Cat Boss Cat Flaming Lion Cool Leopard

In addition to specifying the specific number of types of elves, you also need to give close-ups of each type of elves, such as Xiaozhi's funny water type elves, the cold and arrogant grass type, the powerful fire type, and the crybaby coal turtle. Don't express the emotions of the elves with numbers, such as joy, anger, sorrow, and joy.

The new version says that the first 100 pictures are somewhat Chinese-style, and those who want to see Utopia may feel a little uncomfortable.

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To be honest, elven farming is indeed very attractive, but you directly castrate yourself. Without time travel, you lack a sense of substitution. The protagonist cannot be too liberal in doing things, which means there is no sense of expectation. This is a problem. There is also the need to be innovative. This requires a golden finger, but you don't have it. Without time travel, there is probably no chance of remediation. When writing about elf farming, I suggest you refer to the book about being a trainer. It's very interesting. It's very interesting to use the abilities of mythical beasts to farm, and the interaction with the mythical beasts and elves is very interesting. Plus the warm daily life is simply the best. However, the disadvantage is that the battles are not well written. However, I think it is better to write less battles and use the protagonist's changes to the world around him instead. I didn't plan to comment at first, but there are too few elf farming articles. I hope I can give you some suggestions. It will be useful when you start this elf farming article.

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Well, the first few chapters are not very attractive,,, they slipped away

It's up to you to decide whether to watch the heroine or not.

I have been doing death all the time. I have elves but I don't have them. What will the elf ball do if I pretend to do it? Why do I have to do death all the time?