
Conan Trapped in Shura Field
柯南之身陷修罗场
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 343k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Come on, there are too few Conan fanfics featuring Xiaolan.
Amnesia is a bit of a surprise no matter what, and it probably dissuaded many readers.
This book is very interesting (please improve it)
This book sets up a lot of suspense from the beginning, making people want to find out. Although this book is a Mingke fanfic, Kudo Shinichi or Edogawa Conan do not appear. In fact, this is a very correct line. Because Conan is the male protagonist, if he exists, the whole story will be tilted towards him, so the start is perfect. But this also means that the audience will become smaller. Readers are choosing books, and books are also choosing readers. There are no OOC characters in this book all day long, and the two heroines also chose the manga version Miyano Shiho and the animation version Maori Ran with better personalities. The biggest question now is how to deal with the plot in the future. At present, Belmode is the protagonist's sister. The protagonist is born in the black organization. Why does he want to defect? What is his true relationship with Miyano Shiho? Why was he given A drug? Miyano Akemi's future plot What is the direction of love (I don't want Akemi to die, but Akemi cannot become a harem and refuses to be a biological sister), how Miyano Shiho defected from the organization later, did Ran and the protagonist save Belmod at the same time as Kudo Shinichi's rainy night in London? All of the above, I am full of expectations. I haven't seen a refreshing fanfic on Qidian for a long time. Please continue writing. I like both Shiho and Ai-chan. As long as the author doesn't write too many character designs, I will continue reading. Ran is very lovable now.
Analyze the situation of the four heroines
The first is Xiao Ai, who has the highest progress and is the heaviest in the protagonist's heart. But as it becomes smaller, the progress is directly stuck, so we can only work more on emotions. Then there is Xiaolan, who is ranked second in progress and is the most developed among the four female protagonists now, with a huge advantage. The third one should be Shiho. Xiao Ai feels like a meal replacement after she gets smaller. I wonder if the protagonist will have this idea. Another problem is that the protagonist's current feelings for Shibao developed from Xiao Ai. I don't know if the protagonist will be entangled because of this. The last one is Sister Bei, who occupies the identity of a sister. It seems that she has not developed yet, so she is the last one.
Amnesia time traveler or aboriginal?
Harem story, but pure love
See what I found? The gods are at the same time! I have to say that the author has a super good grasp of the rhythm! At the beginning, there is a puzzle created by amnesia, the party struggle between Shiho and Lan, and then the case and reasoning are in full swing. The foreshadowing of the Ferris wheel incident and the reasoning are intertwined. It is really enjoyable to write. I basically don't read books with female protagonists, let alone those with a harem. I happened to read this book while I was reviewing competing products from the same period and read it a little bit. I just relied on the author's wonderful reasoning to finish it. Do you understand the value of this book? (Tactical backtracking) I think one important thing is that the image of the protagonist is very refreshing, without the greasy feeling of other harem books, including Shiho and Randu, who are beautifully portrayed. In fact, the scene with Shiho on the Ferris wheel personally felt a bit greasy ( ), but the critical situation of life and death at that time was well neutralized. Others with dyslexia are those whose authors are too literary, including some private knowledge of philosophy, and descriptions of psychological activities that are too complex and exaggerated. I was a little uncomfortable watching it at first, but after watching it for a long time, I realized a strange sense of opera. The arias (...) Especially on the Ferris wheel, the feeling of drama is too strong, it feels like performing an opera high in the sky. This is a matter of opinion, and it can also be regarded as the author's unique writing style. I didn't like it at first, but after I got used to it, I found it quite interesting. But objectively speaking, it did scare readers away at first (honesty) In addition... They are all written about Ke Tong, and I speak from the bottom of my heart as the author—— The bad review on the cover. Bad review of copywriting. In fact, the title of the book can also be changed The author is begging you, please make a picture yourself or spend two yuan to customize a cover. Don't use the one that comes with the Qidian system. You can check the list yourself. Those words and sentences are not fluent, people disappeared after two or three chapters, and they didn't even sign the book cover. Is it similar to yours? Then the copywriting has one thing to say and one thing to say, but the information is a bit too complicated. It feels like the author wanted to include the supernatural, including vampires' personal settings. There are layers of foreshadowing in the article, although it's very abrupt, but it's okay. Putting it in the copy is a bit fragmented (honestly), including the two supreme battles later, etc., I don't understand what it refers to... And the fact that Belmod is the sister can actually be mentioned in the copy. Including a little tip, you can mark the keywords at the beginning of the copy. For example, [Conan fandom] [Multiple heroines] [Inference] [Red and Black] and so on. According to the page design of the starting point, you can see the keywords in the query list before you click on the book. Whether you use this technique depends on your personal habits. As for the title, it's actually not bad. At least the highlights of the book are revealed, but it's quite average (touch your chin). I personally think that in addition to the party struggle, the reasoning part is also very well written. This aspect is as interesting as the party struggle. In fact, it can also be reflected in the title. Just compare it with the book "The Collector Who Collects Xiao Ai" that has recently taken off with the same theme as yours. The title points out the identity of the protagonist as a collector. In fact, you can refer to it. Woo, sorry, maybe it seems a bit instructive But I can't hold it in, it's too uncomfortable to watch. Why is the cover and copy of such a beautiful text so off-putting? It makes me suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder () I hope the author will definitely change the cover. It doesn't matter if the copy and title are changed or not. I write without CP. Although I am considering a transformation recently, I am on the opposite track from the author. Some suggestions are not necessarily correct ( ) And I hope the author will keep writing. This is the first Conan fanfic with multiple female protagonists that I can read. It is very important to me🙏🙏🙏. I wish the author will take off~
There are many beauties in Conan, such as Ooka Momiji and Qiutei Reiko, will you accept them?
Nowadays, when a new author has such a volume, it is really difficult to get ahead by publishing such a book that is unstable and rarely updated from the beginning. The author is really a bit idealistic, including the indigenous-like writing method of putting the protagonist in a state of amnesia to dissuade a lot of people.
Good sister
Why do the current Conan fandoms either have no heroines or multiple heroines? Those with multiple heroines are seven or eight or even more. Some heroines have more roles to engage in ambiguity and have no role. Is it really so interesting to write about so many heroines? It is outrageous to include both mother and daughter in the heroines. It feels like the characters are intellectually stupid and there are no stories about the single heroine Xiaolan.
Author, do you really not have a large size? 😭 I really like your writing style
After watching Conan for so long, even though 73 has been poisoned in the portrayal of Mao Lilan, she still likes Mao Lilan. The seven-year-old child took on the responsibility of taking care of her father and learned cooking in elementary school. She has been careful to connect the broken family between her parents and clean up without complaint. The hygiene of Zhuma's house, and the gloves he gave him are treasured in his heart. He became a karate champion at a young age. He always maintains 100% enthusiasm for his friends and family. He will also be very lively and playful in Dorobiga Paradise at the beginning of the story. I hope the author can give the gentlest one-horned tyrannosaurus a good ending.
P a cover()
Using AI + Meitu Xiuxiu, it is a simple and crude way of doing it. Actually, there is a slight problem with Shiho's fingers, but you can't tell without looking carefullyhh The original picture is as follows
Why are there no fanfics about the red girl heroine 🙂
Please read the new book. Qingmeilan vs. Girlfriend Ai, which one should I choose? 🤭
Cats, subways, mobile phones #squint
Everyone who watched it was numb. Is it reincarnation or a parallel world? 😅
Come on, author, the subject matter is very interesting. It's the first time I've seen this kind of writing from a Conan fan.
The writing is very good, I look forward to the new book 😭
Author
Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?
"Who is the most vicious race in the world?" In the noisy tavern that was dark and smelled of sweat, people asked the bard curiously. "The Rat Man deserves it." The bard took a sip of the inferior ale beer and began to play and sing slowly: " In the desolate and dark underground, there is an endless unknown, where there is a brilliant green light, and bells ring from time to time. >The towering black tower, the sacred pendulum blooms. It emits a dark light, which makes the evil and cruel bloom. This group of morally nihilistic mutant rats with advanced technology. They are ugly, evil, and spread the plague everywhere. They are also greedy for money and paranoid. They are more crazy and violent than Chaos. They are more willing to backstab and be ungrateful than the high spirits. And he was so reckless that he flew up." After the chant, the bard ended with an aria: "This is the rat man, the evil fool who has been wandering in the parasitic world for thousands of years and still cannot see the light." "Yes, Yes!" The crowd echoed loudly. At this moment, thirteen bells rang outside, and a hoarse voice rang in the ears of everyone in the tavern: "May the horned rat walk among us!" "Yes, yes!" Groups of gray-furred rats with scarlet eyes and rotten teeth pounced on everyone in the tavern. "As for you, stupid bard, violating the "Anti-Ratman Awareness Act" of the Sigma Empire, what are you planning?" A ratman wearing pointed shoes, holding a civilized staff, and wearing a tall hat stepped over the flesh and blood residue on the ground and pointed at the guy hiding on the tavern counter and asked. "Don't get me wrong, I'm just a book promoter. The protagonist is not a rat man. This is just an advertisement."
Come on, it's very imaginative. It's obvious from the plot conception and emotional description that the author really put his heart into it. I hope you won't be a tj and will continue to subscribe.