Starcraft: Reforged with Zerg Glory

After seeing the resurrected Abathur, I went to help the ghost agent. I wrote a few points that felt a little disconnected. I took advantage of the opportunity to change it before it was released. The setting of Ten Thousand Years was too long, causing many places to be awkward. For example, I think there is something wrong with the human military units if they are not changed at all after such a long time. Needless to say, the equipment used during the Guild War with Camorion was not the same as the equipment during the Masala period. After the Brood War, there was another major upgrade. As a result, the equipment has not been changed at all in these ten thousand years. The settings for the civil strife in the Protoss are not very reasonable, and there are problems with the details. After the Archbishop defeated Eamon, the Durham protoss essentially no longer used Kara. Although Tal'darin did not cut the nerve bundle, it had long been destroyed by terazine and could not connect to Kara at all. After the plot of StarCraft 2 ended, the internal conflicts among the protoss were mainly reflected in whether to restart Kara. As for the Tal'darin family, they didn't play with Duram at all. After beating Eamon, they went straight home and continued playing Chain of Ascension. The Zerg background settings also need to be modified. First of all, Abathur is a pure war sect, while Zagara is a peace sect, and has even learned a lot of human etiquette. Later, Abathur started a civil war with Zagara because he was dissatisfied with Zagara's ideas and believed that the Zerg should dominate everything. He also involved the humans and gods, and was beaten violently in the end. There is also the insect mother that Sister Kai hatched on the Star Spirit spaceship in the heart of the worm, because the last order at that time was to destroy the Star Spirits, and Sister Kai later ran away, which caused a bug, which made her always aim to eliminate all Star Spirits and fought with the Star Spirits many times. The plot of the female ghost agent should also be revised. After all, ghost agents are all agents, and the training is very cruel. They cannot be so innocent and easy to talk to. Overall, the plot about her feels very fragmented and has a poor viewing experience. My suggestion is to change the background and put the timeline after Valerian's death and the current head of state Mengsk is his son. It would be better. There is no need to change the fact that the Protoss is divided, but the reason is not because of the existence of the revenge faction, but because of whether to restore Kara. The revenge faction and being maimed do not need to be changed, but the reason can be changed to the fact that the archbishop was attacked and killed by bugs, so the revenge faction rose, and the protoss decided to fight the bugs to the death and kill them all. This is relatively reasonable. The background of the ghost agent also needs to be changed. Based on the existing plot, the author should want to design her as an eldest lady with a rich and powerful family, a relatively innocent personality and a desire for peace. Then her background can be changed to have only received psychic training from the ghost agent. Being a ghost agent is to realize the ideal of world peace and fight for war. Contender, she was able to join because of her good family background, and she has never carried out any too dark tasks because her family had planned it in advance, not giving her too dark tasks, and letting her play this aristocratic game where justice defeats evil. That's why she has such a character that is relatively credulous. After all, it is unreasonable for a ghost agent to behave like this.

Humans are sweeping across the entire star region like locust "insects", hahaha.

The Zerg carpet includes all the Zerg that have the ability to infect. If you directly infect the buildings here, it will be over. You can infect both humans and Zerg. Then use the parasites to inhabit the minds of the Karai class and directly open the three races.

I suggest taking a look at the Tyranid Zerg. Secondly, it is best for the male protagonist to transform himself into a bug like Sister Kai, which will make him feel more immersed. Secondly, can the heroine be Luova? No, how many thousands of years has this Luova been dead? But the insect swarm should still retain Sister Kai's genetic data. After all, Abathur has it, and it should be said that it is in Abathur's hands. After all, he is the only insect who has seen Sister Kai's whole body. I don't believe he didn't leave some genes on his hands. Secondly, now that the male protagonist is here, the opponent's mind and humans must be further strengthened, otherwise it will be boring or add another race, such as the orcs of Warhammer! Necrons and more. No, space is too powerful, Titanium Lord can do it. Anyway, as long as it's strong, but not ridiculously strong, you can add it. To add a little more fun, you can find a Ghidorah or some other Titan on a certain planet, and then add them to the insect swarm for insect modification. Anyway, it's already been several thousand years, so it doesn't matter if we add some other elements.

For Lao Sebu, the only attraction of the Zerg is Abathur's genetic modulation.

No, StarCraft is not Warhammer, why is it still like this after 10,000 years? Less than twenty years after the Brood War, the human military industry has been upgraded as a whole. It has only been a few years since Odin came off the assembly line and Thor was mass-produced. There are dozens of companies in Koprulu with an annual output of thousands of units. If you want to write a grand narrative that spans tens of thousands of years, I suggest you switch to Warhammer.

Although I have no interest in the Zerg, there are still people writing about interstellar. Let's give it a try.

Name: Rani Gu Type: Frigate class Specifications: length 240, fin width: 60, height: 42 The whole body is flat and strong, similar to a scavenger fish, but there are two biomass lamps on the head that illuminate the deep universe to attract firepower. The whole body adopts restorative horny outer armor, with elastic fat accumulated inside. There are heat energy storage glands under the skin, which can secrete heat-blocking and radiation-reducing body fluids. There is no living space inside, mostly solid biomass storage chambers, with multiple sets of energy conversion glands that provide biolight for the cuticle crystals on both sides of the back. Specially developed cuticle crystals have multiple sets of focusing lenses, combined with powerful observation organs and psychic stances, to intercept and expel heavy fighters, missiles, and artillery shells that attack Leviathan, Behemoth, and Brood Lords. Multiple sets of parallel brains can distinguish the target intensity and provide corresponding biological light energy focus to effectively destroy the target. Upgrade options 1 Psionic coercion, generates a psionic organ behind the focusing crystal, and coerces psionic energy into the laser to increase range and power. 2 Potential stimulation produces biological factors in the lymphatic system that improve the efficiency of mass-energy conversion organs and increases firepower density.

I can feel your love for the stars. But the writing style really needs to be improved a bit

When I play interstellar cooperation, my main force is 284. After all, humans and machines cannot avoid fire. The author chose the interstellar perspective thousands of years later very well, which not only avoids repeating the plot, but also reproduces the development process of a wave of insect hearts. After all, when playing games, the happiest thing is unlocking new units. T has a tank, and Z has dual sprays. I can trade less for more. I have a great advantage. However, it is very easy for the novels of the insect swarm to have a problem. Because of the resource recycling, it is easy to get bored and boring in the later period. The protagonist even pretends to be a bitter and powerful Dragon King, trying to persuade him to quit. I hope the author can avoid it reasonably. After all, the book starts with seeking development, not revenge. On this point, it has potential. I wish the writing will get better and better.

And humans have occupied the entire galaxy. Does that mean that the home planet of the swarm has also been occupied? Then the male protagonist will never be as awesome as Sister Kai in this life. If you can't get it according to Westerners' urine, then destroy it completely!

Thousands of years have passed, and the number of soldiers should at least increase a little, and the existing ones should also change a little. In the StarCraft universe, advanced does not necessarily mean strong. The protoss, whose technology is unknown, still lost El, lost Sagulas, and was turned into a refugee by the insect swarm, so there is no need to worry about the collapse of combat power.

I never thought I would be able to read a StarCraft book again. I feel like dead memories are attacking me 😭

There are also swarms of space units, and it can be said that air units are not as abundant as Tyranids. Secondly, since you have written a novel, treat your novel as a real world. In this case, there is no need to pursue the balance in the game too much. Just let the male protagonist be stronger than the enemies at the same stage in each time period you set. For example, let's take the male protagonist from one stage of development to the next. In terms of combat power during this period, the male protagonist just needs to be stronger than his opponent. I think you can think of this novel as rewriting a new battle yourself. Sister Kai's is Heart of the Swarm, and yours is Swarm Resurrection.

There is a saying that this book is okay, and there are no serious poisonous points (maybe I have been desensitized due to being poisoned too much)

Qidian. It's been a long time since I saw a novel about Zerg.

I see that many viewers feel very uncomfortable with the fact that Tyran technology has not changed at all in ten thousand years. First of all, this setting is because the author does not want to change the original plot! Just borrow the worldview! What is covered in the early stages of this book is generally civilian or non-elite imperial troops! Relevant unit innovations and additional designs will slowly appear in the following articles, mainly focusing on Tyranid troops There may not be many, and they are not that perfect, but the author will try his best to design!

Are there any new Zerg troops?

This introduction reminds me of a novel from more than ten years ago: Lord of the Swarm 🙂

I hope you don't do the basic thing, otherwise it's useless to talk about whether you should give up or give up. Everyone uses money to enjoy Kill if you should, Holy Mother, please Being influenced by this

Is the world view in the fanfiction a single world, or is it an infinite flow?

The author has made this progress, come on!

When will the author publish it?

The author's writing is good, please vote for more updates!

By the way, which one is better, the Star Zerg or the Warhammer Zerg?