Douluo: Be a Genius, Not a Consumable!

Why does it feel like the more I write, the more I feel like an indigenous person, instead of someone who spreads the message?

In the first chapter, the protagonist obtains the second soul ring and passes the previous content, so the reader is unlikely to realize that the protagonist is a "traveler who does not know the plot" There is a plot where the protagonist dreams and recalls his indigenous parents, which is briefly mentioned. The author left a comment here saying that it is foreshadowing, but the foreshadowing is a bit too blunt In Chapter 28, the "turmoil of ten years ago" appears repeatedly, but he does not specify what it is, it is too riddle-like, this kind of writing is stupid and annoying. To be precise, the ambush was not laid out reasonably and smoothly enough When an unfamiliar term (new setting) appears for the first time, you have to find a way to explain it, otherwise readers will not be able to read it with confusion. How to explain this unfamiliar noun smoothly is a matter of the author's strength Suspense cannot be built by throwing in unfamiliar nouns (new settings).

Thinking about boxing, thinking like a spring! 👊🏻😭😭👊🏻 Think of the dong sword and never forget it! 🗡️😭😭🗡️ I want to control it for the rest of my life! ✋🏻😭😭✋🏻 This unforgettable dong, ta is: A Bibi Dong B Dongfeng Valley Sanae C Dongma Hesha D (According to relevant laws and regulations, this entry will not be displayed)

Those who write about Qin Ming can only say that they are neither above nor below in the Dou Yi timeline. Yu Xiaogang and Fei Lande were children when they were young (after the separation of the Golden Triangle, Fei Lande opened Shrek Academy and Qin Ming enrolled in it). When he reaches middle age, Tang San will be a child😰😰😰

The author should stop accepting girls, there are too many, and this is not a pornographic book

The author Qian Xunji is not bad at talent, "Qian Xunji is the previous generation of the Pope of Wuhun Temple and the only son of the great priest Qian Daoliu. At that time, he was also hailed as a generation of wizards of Wuhun Temple. He reached the realm of Titled Douluo at the age of fifty, and then made breakthroughs one after another."

I'm afraid of new books The collection has been growing recently, but the reading data has never been good, and my confidence is a bit lacking I know that there are indeed deficiencies in plot arrangement, but if you feel that this book is still interesting, I urge you readers to read the latest chapters every day (just click on it and scroll to the last page) New books, the most important reading, thank you for your support 🙏 Thank you very much 🌹

Thank you readers for your great collection and follow-up reading! Thanks for the recommendation votes and monthly votes! Your support and love are the driving force for me to move forward! Newcomer, new book, deeply encouraged The author is actively saving the manuscript, and there will be more updates when it is released The heroine of this book has not been completely determined except Dongjie, but the author will try his best to write in a multi-girl style If you have any suggestions or thoughts on the plot, Yes, welcome to discuss in the comment area. I read the comment area every day (For plot considerations, the settings of some supporting characters will be adjusted to some extent, please understand) Thank you all again If you think the writing of this book is still eye-catching, please help to read it every day Thank you! (I'm afraid of new books, if I don't read them enough, I won't have the opportunity to recommend them!)

The author doesn't want it. There are too many heroines written about them. I admit that some fan fiction heroines are popular because they are written too much. It won't be low either. But I still don't think there should be too many female leads.

I just saw that the protagonist still wants to practice weapons. That's just right. The is often used as a weapon's swallowing mouth as a decoration. You can practice a natal weapon and then transform the entire weapon into a beast soul like Snake Spear Douluo. The protagonist will transform into a beast martial soul weapon, and then he can also swallow the head armor as a whole.

Qin Ming is about 30 years old, Bibi Dong is 44 years old, and Qian Renxue is 24 years old and 26 years old. . . . Master Tang Hao is about 50 years old

I have been working hard to save my manuscript recently, and I often feel that I am lacking in inspiration Especially issues such as the choice of hostess and interaction methods always give me a headache If you have any ideas, please leave a message to help, thank you for your support 🙏! We already have a relatively complete outline and timeline, so please don't worry about unfinished work or eunuch issues. The author's first book must be completed no matter what! Thank you again for your support and encouragement, 🙏Thank you everyone!

If you have any thoughts and suggestions on the direction of the plot, please feel free to discuss it here The author promises that he will spend time reading the comments every day Finally, I would like to ask for a follow-up reading New books by newcomers, and I still hope to get more recommendations Thank you for your support 🙏

There won't be such a bloody plot of Bibi Dong being raped by Qian Xunji, right?

If Ah Yin is also the heroine, then Tang San's origin must be arranged. The conflict between Qian Xunji and Tang Hao is also the key plot development of the original work.

Damn it, why did the author spend more than 10 chapters writing about sect rankings?

It's okay. It's a semi-indigenous protagonist (a time traveler who doesn't know the plot). There are some flaws. For example, the protagonist wants to set a ring on the second martial soul of the twin martial arts in advance. After being stopped by the elders, he is still eager to try. It would be okay if you can accept "a time traveler who doesn't know the plot".

I have started reading. The author's writing is very good. It is definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that is decisive in killing, sharp and joyful. "Old Man in Time Travel Picks Up Rags and Survives by Making Bad Movies" is hilarious...

It is suggested that the protagonist develops in the direction of Yaizhen. Yaizhen is warlike and has excellent fighting ability. Moreover, he is the son of a dragon and a wolf by blood, which is also relevant.

Since Bibi Dong will not be raped, what should Qian Renxue do?