Under One Person: Who Asked Him to Be a Temporary Worker!

Forget it, I think if the author wants to write a dead story, he shouldn't have to do so much foreshadowing. After reading it, I don't have a clear idea, so I gave up. The author's writing is very good, but the knife is a bit harsh. I gave up as soon as it was put on the shelves. I will give the author a big boost with two monthly passes.

When I saw this book, I read the introduction first, but the introduction was too dry... Fortunately, I have the habit of reading reviews, otherwise I would have missed it. I have read quite a few fanfics of one person, and this one is more like the original work. It is one of the few fanfics that makes me feel comfortable watching it. It can be seen that the author has worked hard on the original characters. When reading, there is no sense of violation. In my heart, I feel that the reaction of this character should be like this. This is why this novel stands out from other fans (at least in my mind). There are some areas that need improvement: The first is that the dialogue is confusing. Sometimes you need to read it repeatedly and carefully to distinguish who said it. The second thing is that the turning point is not clear, but this was corrected later, so give the author a thumbs up. The third reason is that the content is a little confusing, which may be due to the large number of long sentences and a few typos. Some long sentences are difficult to understand. The fourth one is that I voted for the monthly vote. Please ask the author to use Xuan Gong again! The fifth personality is activated. In short, considering it is the author's first work, it is already very good, and it has also been seriously improved. Looking forward to the follow-up content!

The reference prototype for Zhang Chulan's look is Sister Siye. This is a relatively complex character, and his design was originally inspired from the original comic title - "Alien". "Extraordinary people" refer to people who are different from ordinary people and are alienated from the "general public". Zhang Chulan's circle is full of "foreigners", and because of his past experiences, he himself is very defensive and will never reveal his inner thoughts easily, so even in the circle of strangers, he looks like a "foreigner". Zhang Chulan is not a traditional growth-oriented comic protagonist. This character has matured as soon as he appears. When describing this character, the author adopts the method of peeling off skin and drawing threads: at first the reader will have a one-sided impression of him, and then with contact, his outer skin will be peeled off layer by layer like peeling an onion, and then he will see his inner part bit by bit, and there will be a feeling of surprise. In the creation of this character, on the one hand, it shows some points in him that everyone can find resonance, such as his "cowardice" and some small entanglements when he encounters difficult decisions, etc., Hoping to increase readers' sense of involvement. On the other hand, it focuses on depicting his complexity. For example, although he is constantly surrounded by various situations and faces great pressure, he will deal with the problem rationally despite the pressure. This is a rare and valuable point in Zhang Chulan, and it is also an ideal state in my mind when facing pressure. Another point is his strong adaptability. When there is a conflict between the external environment and his heart, he will not complain about the environment, but will change himself in response to external influences and adapt to the environment. He is like an amoeba, except for the bottom line that no one will touch, everything else is a sacrificial bargaining chip. This is a "social person" who has been polished by the secular world, and he is also an "old fritter" who can handle different environments with ease.

It's good to read, and the writing is really good. As the protagonist, Lao Ai's character, conversation, and personality are the best among the many Under One Person fanfics I have seen. The author has something good, come on But I am thinking about why so few people read this book. Too low a introduction is definitely a problem. Goodfellas is too strong. I didn't click on this book when I first saw it Change it to another one, and the results will definitely be much better.

The following content is excerpted from "Under One Person Setting Collection" The original intention of designing this tube color was not to be a strange character to attract people's attention, although there are many classic "pervert" shadows in his body. What the author wants to write is that everyone will have the seeds of sin, and it is inevitable that there will be times when evil will arise. At this time, you must cultivate yourself and cultivate your character to be able to manage your family, govern your country, and bring peace to the world. That's why I created a character who has desires that constantly appear in him but who will restrain himself. Lao Xiao is actually not a very realistic character, but in reality some people often encounter similar problems. How to choose when your desires will harm others and society? The valuable thing about Brother Xiao is that even though he knew the seriousness of his problem and that he was a pervert in the eyes of ordinary people, he did not give up on himself. Instead, he worked hard to restrain himself, channelize his desires, and carefully maintain the delicate balance between his nature that is not tolerated by society and social rules. This attitude is very good. When writing this character, the author referred to perverts in many works and found that perverts have some common characteristics, such as: meticulous, rigorous, calm, not committing crimes due to impulse, elegant, erudite, and having strong curiosity about the world. Then I found the trick on how to write a popular perverted character: apart from the fact that he is "perverted", this character has all excellent qualities. In reality, there are also people who have many excellent qualities, but are completely deformed and rotten in one aspect. Such a person must have enough advantages to support him in continuing on the path of perversion. Perversion can also be perverted in style.

After so many preparations, Chen Duo still died. Although the author may have set this ending reasonably, Chen Duo cannot return to the bunker, and Lao Liao cannot die in vain. These can convince myself, but after all, I still have a sentimental side. Chen Duo, with so many experiences with the protagonist, I thought it would change her fate, just like Mr. Tian. I thought the protagonist would change her regrets, but no, although... I found many reasons to convince myself, such as, no It's just Chen Duo, not that important, not the heroine, not even the main supporting character, but... I still feel unhappy after all. I subscribed to a chapter after it was released. I originally thought that the protagonist used the Qi Body Source to transform Chen Duo's original Gu, but it didn't. Moreover, in the second chapter, the protagonist nonchalantly called Gao Lian Godfather, and then made a joke. After saying so much, I still can't convince myself. I can only say that it doesn't suit me~

Say goodbye, You are already a "martial arts idiot", What kind of women do you care about, don't be OOC You must understand that the protagonist is a "martial arts idiot", not Yujiro Fanma, and you cannot strengthen yourself by eating the forbidden fruit, Don't be so low in purity, be a little higher

The author was stabbed in the back by Mi Er. Scarface and Ruhua were pretended to be Zhou Sheng, and Zhou Sheng came to point out Wang Yefeng and Hou Qimen.

The prototype of Zhuge Qing is Zhuge Liang in Mi Er's early comic work "Nine Nine Eighty-One". He is a relatively positive character who will play a big role in the main plot. Zhuge Qing's character is what we often call tall, rich and handsome, and he is also very outstanding, but in fact his temperament is very close to today's young people. Modern people have both positive and negative sides, and Zhuge Qing is no exception. Zhuge Qing has always been a leader among the younger generation of the family, carrying some of the trust of the entire family. He is very good and very proud, so pressure is motivation for him, but unfortunately, he faces a series of setbacks afterwards. The more proud a person is, the greater the blow will be when he encounters a big setback in his proud field, so he can't help but have some negative and dark thoughts, but he will also feel ashamed and blame himself for having such thoughts. This is the same as most young people in reality who have the correct three views. Zhuge Qing is different from Wang Ye who "worries about the world first". He is a person who puts himself and his family first in everything and prioritizes his work. However, he also has a normal moral bottom line and is a very realistic character. Revealing a little gossip: He graduated from the Department of Acting at Shanghai University, and he once made his debut, but was hidden after being beaten due to unspoken rules (attempted) (laughing)

Judging from the twelve Under One Person fanfics that I have read so far, the author's writing is quite one-person style, and it is a rare masterpiece.

After reading a few chapters, I felt a little confused. When I read other novels, I just felt that they were very coherent. However, this novel seems to be a problem with the author's writing style. I feel a little confused.

Lao Ai's character design is very good, and he can play the leading role.

Is the protagonist simply overdoing it?

Unfortunately, I saw it too late and didn't support the author from the beginning, but I was afraid that the author wouldn't be able to persevere. The writing was really perfect.

I saw someone saying that Wang Zhenqiu was the protagonist of Mi Er's last work. I went to watch it and it was related to aliens. Then I saw a buddy saying that he had become an immortal or met an alien. Guan Qiye came to my mind.

So what exactly is Tired Sword Technique? What is its ability?

The setting of "Descendants of the Demon Sword" is very interesting. Come on, write more, big 🙂

The story develops into the Biyou Village chapter and begins to have a theme, and Chen Duo is the theme of the Biyou Village chapter - "choice". Many people complain that the protagonist of the Biyou chapter has less scenes. In fact, it is because the protagonist of this chapter has been replaced. This character did not retain much of her humanity in the beginning. She was a functional character. The author used "her" to describe "my" views on "choice". You will see that the human part of this character has been erased from the root, and then she is restored to her humanity bit by bit. I hope readers will think about the state of human nature facing choices from the root. In fact, if the character Chen Duo does not die, there will still be a lot to write about in the follow-up, including the recovery of humanity, but letting her end with the Biyou Village chapter is the best for this story, although it is a pity. Many people say that the two characters Chen Duo and Feng Baobao are very similar, but in fact they are very different. Chen Duo has a low eyebrow and is pleasing to the eye, while Feng Baobao is expressive; Chen Duo's temperament is lifeless, while Feng Baobao is full of vitality. They present two different attitudes towards life under similar circumstances. In addition, although Chen Duo's temperament, skills, and identity are very powerful, her character setting is actually that of a little woman. She is not awkward and will not solve problems directly. She has to beat around the bush, so she will have differences with Liao Zhong. Her feelings towards Liao Zhong were the inexplicable and ignorant feelings that a newborn child has towards its parents, a bit similar to how some little girls would grab their mothers and say, "I want to marry daddy." So she couldn't tell whether it was dependence or love for Liao Zhong, or even just possessiveness. This kind of emotion would only be subdivided after she matures. In fact, one thing that can be reflected in Chen Duo is: feelings are feelings, and they can transform into each other. Love may transform into family affection, and friendship may transform into love. There is no need to subdivide it. The final outcome for Chen Duo was to choose "euthanasia", which not only gave an explanation to the company, but also gave an explanation to himself.

The third level of reverse life can be cheated by Zhang Chulan's divine spirit

It's so amazing. It's clearly written so well.

The character dialogue is too wordy 🪖

Is there a heroine? Who is the heroine?

Will miracles happen again? Can it be resurrected again?

I would like to ask if there is a female protagonist, or if there is a ridiculous plot, can anyone tell me about Shen Nong?

Can you answer whether the updated novel has multiple female protagonists?

What's wrong with the No. 1 Update?😆

The answer to the previous comment, did the author forget the previous answer?

Come on, author😍

During the May Day holiday, I will update my little black room 😆

The logic in the recent pictures does not make sense. The protagonist beats the white owl so easily, but Yingtai is so troublesome, but Yingtai is no match for the white owl.