That's a Windy Place

The author may be a newbie, but I would like to make a suggestion. The contrast between the male protagonist's past and present life is too great, and it is very fragmented. I was a pure loser in my previous life, but I can say that I am a successful person in this life. I have brought the carelessness of my previous life to this life, but I cannot find any charm. It is hard to imagine that I can be liked by the 30-year-old Hongdou.

Come on, it's really beautifully written. I don't know about others but I really like it.

Brother, I'm on holiday, so I can add more. It's quite beautiful. I never thought Liu Yifei was beautiful before, she's so fairy. You Fengxu Hongdou is really pure and lustful, full of charm. . . . . I really like reading well-written Youfeng fanfics, but there are too few of them.

The writing is good so far. I hope the update will be more powerful. I like to read fan fiction about Youfeng.

Hello author, I have copied your book on other platforms. The feedback from readers is very good, it is very popular, and there are many rewards. I plan to mention a new car again. I hope you will update a few more chapters so as not to affect my income or make my readers anxious. Thank you.

It's been a day and there's no update yet. The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. Please update soon.

Your writing style and writing style when writing about Huayu are all based on Lao Liu's traffic. Youfeng fan is still too niche and can't write a long story.

Come on, as long as you don't cut it, I'll finish it

Come on~ Work hard~ You have to work hard when writing~ It doesn't matter if you can't write it~ Drag it out and shoot it 😁

Why isn't this called Ito Castle? Why isn't the heroine called Liu Ruyan?

So far, so good. I still think it's better to have a single heroine and multiple heroines.

Well, how should I put it? There are indeed very few books with romantic themes, so the final article written by Lao Tuo is quite good, and the two books are about entertainment, so keep up the good work. However, I felt quite bland after reading it, maybe because I am new to the book. In fact, there are many places where I can expand on the writing and smooth out the logic and rhythm. Especially the relationship between the ex-boyfriend and girlfriend is quite difficult to write about. Hahaha, last year I also opened a book about Xu Hongdou's Corgi Boyfriend. I am good at reading and speaking, but I felt that what I wrote was not good, and I was too busy with work, so I took it off the shelf.