When the Necromancer Lu Mingfei Returns to the Dragon Clan

A person who has lived hundreds of years will be like an ignorant student, hahaha, should I scold him? Still scolding?

Author, please think about a person who has lived for nearly a thousand years, returns to high school on Earth, and hooks up with Su Xiaoqiang. Isn't this the same as the Urban Immortal King? I still think and write like this later, and this book will definitely be a hit.

As the enemy of the living and the eternal lord of the undead, you should have higher pursuits. I hope you won't mess with Chen Mosquito and Nuonuo. Can't the undead satisfy you?

A poor boy who has lived for a thousand years and stands at the pinnacle of strength but is still indecisive and likes to escape.

Qidian is one of the few books about Lu Mingfei's return with normal fighting power. The other universes that Lu Mingfei fought in other universes were all extinguished, and the avenues were wiped out. As a result, when he returned to Earth, he fought back and forth with the clones of bosses like Odin, who were at best mere soldiers in other universes, and even failed to defeat him. Too abstract🤔

The writing style is quite good, but the literary youth is seriously ill. Almost as pretentious as Jiangnan.

1. It feels like this novel was written as a romance novel by you, the author. 1. The character of the Necromancer has collapsed. After nearly a thousand years of training in another world, the protagonist has been closed and indifferent to the outside world. 2. How could the protagonist have all kinds of intimate actions and names with his classmates from thousands of years ago as soon as he returns? It doesn't matter if other girls don't understand, but the protagonist can't live like a dog for a thousand years, right? 3. The protagonist feels like a romantic male Aquaman who suddenly gained superpowers, and then lusted after a person with a story for himself. It has nothing to do with the original character Lu Mingfei, and he doesn't look like a good-for-nothing male protagonist after he matures. 4. The plot of this book about Lu Mingfei's relationship between men and women actually does not need to be advanced so quickly. 5. Why do readers read fanfiction? Mainly because they want to rewrite the tragedy of the old thief so that the original tragedy will not happen. 2. There are many author's poisonous points that I will list for you here: 1. No harem, dragon-themed fan fiction is not suitable for harem. 2. Don't fall in love with Hui Liyi out of nowhere. Don't listen to what the comment section says about "accepting Hui Liyi" (those people are like sz who support the fire). Hui Liyi has the mind of a child. You can be her brother or teacher. Just help her grow normally and protect her safety. Those writing about the heroine wearing pear clothes are basically cool. 3. The returning protagonist must be mature and stable. The main thing is to grasp the plot twists and realistic logic, and don't be too passionate and desperate. Did he live like a dog before returning? 4. Lu Mingfei has successfully changed his appearance. He can change from Xi Si who talks bad words to a person who is a bit humorous, but can really get things done. It can also be the image of other mature men who take responsibility for their actions.

Sorry everyone, I have received a lot of complaints from people about this recently. Because it is my first time to write a book, so the portrayal of this aspect may not be very good, but I hope you can read it before deciding whether to abandon the book. These problems will be eliminated in the next book. I hope you can give it a chance, please!

I hope you can comment more when you read it. Your comments can be considered as feedback of my efforts. I am still very happy. By the way, I would like to thank the first tip I received in my career as a writer, from "Su Yueqing". Thank you.

The protagonist has reached the stage where he no longer wants to live and has no goals. Why did the author write the protagonist as a Santa Claus to fulfill wishes? How does the reader introduce the protagonist?

The writing is quite good, and no poisonous points have been found yet, but I am very curious, will Vanessa come to the dragon world to meet Lu Mingfei later?

An idea suddenly came up before, Necromancer Lu Mingfei The original setting was that Lu Mingfei traveled to another world and became a Necromancer. After discovering that the gods were playing tricks on humans, he launched an undead natural disaster. After killing all the undead, he became the God of Death and fell into a deep sleep, and then returned to the dragon world. In the beginning, you directly drive Odin, then go to Kassel to become the vice-principal, summon small skeletons to torture students, and then combine a trembling goddess from the previous life with any female protagonist. Afterwards, I rejected this idea because Lu Mingfei was too invincible. The second version is that Lu Mingfei becomes one of the apprentice candidates of a necromancer. While learning knowledge, he watches the people around him being eliminated (killed). Lu Mingfei also wants to make them undead with his own hands. After traveling back to the dragon world, I also killed Odin first, but I have never beaten this version. I just snatched back Chu Tianjiao's soul, and then used the death knight's body as a container to allow him to move for a period of time every day. Then he cooperated with Ange and sent Kassel's people into the dungeon to practice actual combat, using ancient dragons to simulate dragon slaying. Then senior brother Lu Mingfei and Chu Tianjiao investigated other dragon kings together. This is what I came up with when I was bored. I saw someone writing about the Necromancer Lu Mingfei and I wanted to share it on a whim. Use these ideas if you want, because I am most likely too lazy to write novels. It would be best if I could help some people.

When will Master Gu Lu Mingfei appear?

It's great. The angle of the original work is very clever. Come on, author!

If you want to write the plot to the later stage, you will inevitably encounter a problem, that is, if the heroine is immortal, there is a high possibility that Lu Mingfei will not be immortal later, and there is a high probability that it is destined.

Very well written! I wish there were more words

Old Tang has a future, Su Xiaoqiang will not be sad all his life, everyone has a future, and it makes up for my regrets. Thank you, the author.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Borrowing my precious treasure, I recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and clever, and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies", which is hilarious...