From Love Apartment to the Top of the World

I don't know why, but I felt like something was wrong while reading it, and it didn't feel as smooth as reading other novels.

Is this a novel written with AI? It looks so weird 🙂

It's okay so far, but I think the protagonist's force value should be raised as soon as possible. Hu Yifei cannot be allowed to occupy the top of the food chain. Otherwise, the protagonist will be very frustrated watching being pushed down by Hu Yifei all the time.

Is there a female protagonist? I won't read urban fan fiction if it doesn't have a female protagonist.

If it doesn't give me the interest to pursue my studies, I'll just work and do it happily. The protagonist is making money.

I'm so tired looking at it. . . The subject matter is very interesting. . There is no other kind of time-traveling stiffness, and the characters can match it, just like your writing. . It's tiring to watch, there's a lot of confusing dialogue, and all kinds of jokes come and go.

I know all the characters, I understand the plot, it's funny and funny, but I can't understand it all together, it's like calculus, it's too big

To be honest, it's great that the author can have his own thing in the plot, but after reading the novel, I always have a feeling of insanity and madness, and my temples are twitching. I really can't enjoy it.

I know all the words, but when they are put together, I don't know what they mean.

Author, can you check the article after you finish it? Don't you feel that the sentences are not smooth?