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I was prepared before reading the book and read it without thinking about it, but I still couldn't stand it. Because the author keeps trying to fill my empty head with shit💩.
Are you engaging in these serious copyright-grabbing activities again?
That means you have to have some brains to pretend.
A bastard was fired by his employer, and he still thinks that the employer is sorry for him? No matter which place you change, the amount of work a normal person completes in a day is 10, but you end up doing 1. If your company doesn't open, you will be kept here to celebrate the New Year?
Being stepped on one after another, the protagonist is not a dishonor, but stupid! Whether you are a fool or a slave, the premise is that you have enough strength. No one will like a slave who gives in blindly and loses his power and humiliates the country.
... I don't know how to put it, the protagonist is sick, really~ When someone stabs you with a knife, you still hesitate to fight back, fearing that the force will be too strong and you'll fall out? There are many more things like this... Whether it's that Huang Yuhua or that Xu Qiang...
The orphanage basically requires eunuchs to play in the entertainment industry at the beginning The logic is poisonous, and the essence is to become famous and make money, but in this orphanage you have to donate, you have to donate every year, and you can't write down how many houses and cars you buy It is different from other charities, where you do it once every few years, or even a few times, and then stop doing it, and no one will blame you. Your kind of orphanage start has inherent shortcomings, because you can't spend money, or even save money In the past two years, there have been so many orphanage starts like this, it's too silly, you can be an orphan, you can slowly become an orphan! This kind of kindness in the orphanage is too difficult for celebrities. It is like winding up, greatly compressing the pleasure and bringing too many poisonous points.
That, the author. Are you serious about your character creation? The female protagonist is 169cm tall and weighs 100cm The male protagonist is 182cm tall and weighs 65cm Should we say that the female protagonist is a tank or that the male protagonist is a jerk. It's a matter of life and death if it's windy or rainy when you go out.
When I see hip-hop rap, I say goodbye immediately
For a book like this, reading three chapters is the limit. It's a garbage heap of formulaic writing.
Thank you all
I am very grateful for your criticisms and corrections, which are the key to spurring my progress. I have listened carefully to the comments and suggestions from all the bosses. Not only people told me to delete comments, but editors also came to me and asked me to control the comment area. But I am quite stubborn and have always believed that an author who cannot even tolerate criticism can talk about progress. The first time I wrote an entertainment article, I also grew up in code words. If you feel it is poisonous, you can spray lightly. Can make suggestions. As long as it does not involve insults, comments will not be deleted. I also hope that everyone will not make a decision just by looking at the comments. I feel really poisoned, so I can leave you some suggestions before leaving. I also want to make myself stronger and stronger, thank you all!
When I see rap, I don't want to watch it. Any serious person who plays rap is a rotten fish and a rotten shrimp.
The author should be more rigorous. In Chapter 23, you are on the phone with the other party. How can you pat the other party on the shoulder when no one is around, and the other party gives you the middle finger?
A little suggestion
Can "the sound is very soft" be reduced in frequency? It appears too often and feels a bit boring, or does the author have no other adjectives?
There are a few times in each chapter where the main character loses his head, which is so embarrassing😳
The author should revise it. There are many sentences that don't make sense.
This book is pretty good for this genre. I give the author a thumbs up, but I have a few personal opinions. 1. Does the protagonist have the memory of the original owner after traveling to the past? I read hundreds of chapters and didn't see any mention of it, and I don't remember what happened with the heroine when they were children 2. The mixed group has been together for several years, but the protagonist has little money. I even thought the original owner was addicted. He said he likes playing with cars, but I didn't see a car until later. The generation was given to the orphanage, which is inconsistent with the character that the original owner likes to play. Such people will feel guilty for throwing money on the car or even not working hard to make money 3. It is mentioned later that it has been a long time and the debt has been paid off, but there does not seem to be many friends around me. Every time someone appears, it is like a character added temporarily. Well, I feel that the author's outline should not be so detailed, and he will write whatever he thinks of, which will lead to incomplete details Finally, I hope the author will not write this as a cool article, at least there should be some logic (just like I have seen the same type, every song has hundreds and tens of millions of fans, which is so boring). Of course, after reading hundreds of chapters, the logic is still okay, otherwise I would not have read it for so long.
There's another person filling everyone's heads with shit at the starting point. Thank you so much sir.
The author is not good at describing the business war part, so why don't you write it hard?
In the past few dozen chapters, Xu Lai has been targeting the protagonist's company in various ways to create obstacles for the protagonist. It seems that he wants to engage in a business war, but the protagonist has no means, and he wins seemingly inexplicably. It may be that I don't like reading this part of the content, so I felt uncomfortable reading it and slipped away.
I always feel that the positioning of the book is rather vague. I have a hand in business wars, a little bit in the entertainment industry, a little bit in daily life, and a little bit of fun. I want to fatten up, maybe I will die if I keep it.
I think it's pretty good. Some trolls are not nice to others. I just want to read it for fun, not to read the main text. There are so many opinions. Do you want to read it or not?
Why did they reconcile out of nowhere?
I originally read it as a mindless novel. Xu Shiji focused on the main character in so many chapters, and also brought in a military villain. He did all kinds of nonsense. I can forgive it, but I didn't feel happy at all. I'm almost at the latest chapter, and I'm bored. I gave up. I'm sorry to the author.