In the Super Era, I Became Superman

Please read it! Everyone.

The writing is too plain, and only a few things were explained after reading about twenty chapters. If the protagonist you wrote does not have him in these chapters, it would not be inconsistent at all.

The writing is so awkward. The main character is either exaggeratedly worried or exaggeratedly frightened and angry. He has a glassy heart. After reading more than ten chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.

Oh, I forgot to mention it when I posted earlier. The words I just read were written when I read Chapter 12. I'll look down now and see how it goes.

The book is okay, but too bland

New book updates seem to be unstable

It feels a bit awkward to see this picture now. Modern people, especially rich people like him, should often go online to read various movies or books and articles. So by now, he should already know that your body has mutated and the murder case that occurred should also be related to the mutation. Don't make the protagonist too stupid. This article looks awkward. The writing should be good but you should pay attention to common sense issues. He is a modern person and does not know anything in the mountains. The protagonist is written too stupidly, his reactions are too slow, and according to the clues you left, he said that he has practiced kung fu. He has seen his parents die beside him and his grandfather is an old soldier who trained him, so he should not be so panicked and careless when something happens. So you'd better set it up when writing the protagonist and don't write it like this.