In the Troubled Times of Demons and Martial Arts, I Use Martial Arts to Prove Immortality

The author's writing is good, but the story design has problems. When I read Chapter 6, I felt so depressed. It was all difficult and not satisfying at all. The use of cheat fingers is also unreasonable. When you are full, you will have blood, and blood will transform into attribute points. Since the protagonist can borrow 350 Wen through favors, why not borrow a loan shark? What's more, he already has 423 Wen, which is about one tael of silver. With this money, he eats a lot and becomes a muscular man in three to five days, right? Even if the attribute points can only increase martial arts proficiency, then the wood chopping knife is also a knife skill. It can chop wood but not kill people? The most speechless thing is that my sister has sold her body for a few taels of silver. She doesn't want to rely on a golden finger to make a fortune, so she gives all her silver to the gym owner, hoping that he will waive a certain amount of tuition fees, and then she goes to learn martial arts, all in one go. I have typed a lot, and this is the first time I have posted such a long comment. The main reason is that the author's writing style is really good, but the story needs to be redesigned, otherwise it will be difficult to continue reading.

This kind of novel always starts off miserably!

Suppressing the protagonist, I don't understand what the author is thinking. It can be done like this with just a few extra panels, just to highlight the person surnamed Shi. Once he is a martial arts genius, and once he breaks through the second level. Also, can I say that the panel type archery should be the same, there is no game outside the city? Can't find an archery villager in more than 400 articles?

All I can say is this. Only three points are added from the beginning to the end. At the end, there was only the second level. The introduction and title were all about killing monsters randomly, but in the end, there were more than 80 pictures with no trace of the monster. Like other books with the same title and theme, monsters will appear in basically two or three chapters, and then 50 chapters will almost make a county invincible, and then the monsters will be killed randomly. The small map for leaving the city is over and you have left the novice village. As a result, you are still in the second level with more than 80 maps. Either don't make the title and introduction look like a cool article, or the pace should be fast.

The scene with my sister was written a little too much and was unnecessary. It is necessary to add some experience, etc., To enhance the visibility

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Let me ask a question first, can my sister come back alive?

Is there any point in the Wei family always raising the food for the slaves in the laundry room? Can this win people's hearts? There's a lot of people.

Monster meat is too expensive. Even having a drink would cost you money.

Looks like it's time to invest, come on author