Under One Person, Your Reverse Life Reaches the Sky?

The writing is really bad, the plot is sparse and the characters are not three-dimensional. Is this all your writing style? Don't argue with me. If you want to prove yourself, please slap me in the face with Chapter 20. I will give you two votes first😜

Yes, but it's not normal for the protagonist to have killed so many people and still not be famous.

It will be difficult to write later, and it will collapse if you are not careful. Most of the development sects are poison points. After all, to develop a sect, the minimum group characters and the operation and development of the sect must be written with an online IQ, but well, I haven't seen it written.

It's all rubbish, a lot of nonsense. If you are not convinced, read more chapters.

This is the most enjoyable fanfic I have ever seen.

The preparation time is too long, it is clearly a crushing game, but so much ink is spent describing a character who does not exceed 30 or 40 words in battle.

24 Seconds of fighting paved the way for 24 days

The protagonist is not decisive in killing, bb just kills this person and says this, it turns out that conservatives really exist hahahahahahahahahahahahaha

After reading so many novels under one person, this one is the most enjoyable one I have read, and it is also the best-written one.

After saving Wu Gensheng several times and becoming sworn friends with him, the image of the protagonist that he created would fall apart if he let go of it.

There must be no compromise with the company. Is it because the company's top executives speak high-sounding words from the moral high ground because they are afraid of threatening them?

The modern chapter is really boring. There is no such long preparation. The protagonist seems to be an outsider.

I don't understand, is the whole sex so united? How dare you cause trouble when you are already dead like this? What kind of organization is this? It can fight to the death to cause trouble, but it doesn't end like a beast?

I feel that the combat power is a bit too high. I don't know how the author connects it to the modern plot. If I continue at this pace, there will be several more combat powers at the level of the Heavenly Master. In this case, there will basically be no setbacks in the plot. If you want to add original characters, they must be able to compete with the protagonist, but it is not a long-term solution. You can only kill and create new ones. If this continues, it will easily lead to aesthetic fatigue.

Of all the people, this one is the most enjoyable. There is also a book about time traveling and becoming Zhang Zhiwei, but it's also pretty good. In that one, he and Wu Gensheng have sex with each other. Damn it, I'm convinced.

It's hard to calm down

Stealing the innate energy of others, making oneself immortal and immortal, Feng Xu controls the wind, can teleport, soar into the clouds and ride on the mist. It is even more possible for heaven to become a true heaven, which is the potential of the so-called cave heaven and blessed land. As long as one masters an infinite energy method like nuclear fusion, this is not an immortal, what is an immortal? Develop sword-controlling skills, beast-controlling skills, and raise the mountain of Trinity Gate to the sky. This will be the Immortal Gate.

The strongest point of the Trinity Sect is not the third level of rebirth, but the true method that has never appeared before. He can always refine and master the energy of nature. Other inheritances are still "practicing martial arts", but here he has absorbed the spiritual energy of heaven and earth and is cultivating immortality.

The following routines feel mostly repetitive and a bit boring to watch. The world is invincible and the enemy comes from the sky 🙂

Be careful of going too far, the author should control it. Such heavy killings make me feel that this book is going in a direction that even the author cannot control. Of course, it does not mean that the author's arrangement is inappropriate. In fact, a truly good book cannot be controlled by the author if he wants to control the plot. As the plot progresses, the characters change, and the content will change. The author is forced to move forward, and the author can only make some repairs, advancements, and maintenance as the plot changes, so it is very important to grasp the degree, otherwise there will be a serious imbalance in combat power, extreme changes in character, and self-contradiction in the plot, so that the development of the plot is unreasonable or even illogical, leaving readers feeling tired and speechless. So come on, the author, it is estimated that after arriving outside Tianyuan, it will be almost over. In fact, we can arrange some intersperses of secular forces such as Longhu Mountain, which can be their ancestor plot. It does not have to be a decent one or a villain, to make a transition. I actually feel that the recent plot is a bit rushed. The Shenlin Sect, Beyond the Abyss, Underground Human Race, Starry Sky Human Race, Dragon Race, Monster Race, Overseas Alien Race, all come one after another. If it weren't for the author's writing skills and proper arrangement, I almost felt that it was going to be unfinished. There was no pause or foreshadowing, it was too fast. Having said so much, I hope the author will control the details and not let the protagonist really become a heartless or even ruthless messenger of heaven 🌹🌹🌹

Well, I can't tell whether it's good or bad, because it's been like, ah, ah, kill, kill, kill. Many people say it's cool, good, and I can't comment.

I have not read the original work, so I know the general plot, but it does not affect my enjoyment of watching it. It is very decisive and decisive. Of course, the writing style still has a lot of room for improvement, but I believe it will get better and better. I am very proud of it.

Develop the sect, strengthen the core personnel of the sect, and let the core members spread their branches and recruit disciples. The sect will handle all matters, and do everything else personally. Let the disciples stand out and make the characters more distinct. Isn't it just a group audience that one person attracts? Come on, author.

The battle before it was put on the shelf was already awesome. It's hard to imagine that there will be so many pictures later.

The writing is really good. There are so many fans under one person, and your writing is the most comfortable.

Add more fanfiction, the more you write, the better

It turned out that the name had been changed, so I said why I couldn't find it.

This is the most passionate thing I have ever seen written by one person, and the author keeps up the good work. There is a saying that since the protagonist appears and beats Quan Xing like this, and the Japanese invade later, the protagonist can also turn things upside down, or even 36 thieves. According to these directions, in fact, the author can actually write according to his own ideas in the future, and it does not necessarily follow the timeline of the original work.

The realm system is a bit messy, but everything else is fine.

Why don't you cum for me