Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei from All Quiet on the Western Front

The author didn't really think that the hair-washer was an "anti-Semitic hero" and therefore wrote him in, right? The washers were truly equal in massacring non-Germanic peoples. The Jews were closely related to the Communist Party because German power was not imposed, so they were used as political scapegoats and bore the brunt of the massacre. France was quite lucky, with relatively few being massacred, while Poland was massacred more, the Soviet Union was massacred even more, and the occupied slave states were basically massacred as well. The Shampoo Guy ordered a bloodbath in Chinatown at the end of the war, so the Shampoo Guy also has a real grudge against us. Moreover, the hair-washer also expressed his disdain for Asians in his autobiography, so I really don't know what the author's meaning is in creating such a thing.

In fact, this is something that many fan authors have to face. If you change some settings of the original work, many people from the original work will criticize you. Some innovations will easily be criticized without good writing and plot improvement. Because you only have one brain to think about the plot, and there are many readers who will look at your article from different perspectives and positions. Anyway, if you, the author, want to improve, you can only look for your own shortcomings and omissions in the comments, and you should use them if you see any imaginary settings that suit your taste. And I personally feel that the quality of the plot has dropped a lot since your return. (This is also a problem with the original author's positioning of the book) There is no longer the "mortal" helplessness of the previous plot, and the "cruel" epic feeling of history (I don't know how to express it well) In the previous plot: students were lectured by teachers, encouraged by the environment, and civilians moved forward ignorantly about war. When young people became soldiers, soldiers were ordered by their superiors to march forward and die, and the old path could only be carried away by the people around them. This war itself has problems. It is just for the interests of each class, and people from the lower class are constantly allowed to die in exchange for their own interests. The problem now is that if you follow the plot of the original work, it will sound a bit petty. Join a group of college students with chuunibyou in a gunfight, and go to the Dragon King's hometown with the amateur dragon-slaying team. It's hard to say your plot is better than before. First, you did not write about the changes in the protagonist. You only wrote about the increase in combat power, but did not write about the changes in the plot and personal direction caused by the improvement of the protagonist's core. Some people just mentioned it, and the whole person felt like a wooden person and walked away from the original work. Second, the plot is written according to the original work but not according to reality, which creates a sense of tearing and comedy. If you write about the Three Gorges while doing Dragon King, then you should do it according to a bunch of foreigners in the original work. It is a bit unrealistic and funny. Although it seems to be the problem of the original author, if you haven't changed it, it doesn't match my understanding. It feels like you have changed the original work. The reality may be very nonsensical, but when writing an article, you need to talk about logic Three changes were made to the original plot, but the changes were limited and the changes were weak. If you want to make a change, it should be a major change or a magic change based on your understanding and interest. It should be interesting or have its own characteristics. It's okay for some authors to add some HS, some new characters, and some new settings. As long as your writing is interesting, people will read it. Now I can only say that the plot is on the decline. Personal feelings and understanding of other readers: The resistance to the alliance with the wandering earth and the dragon clan may not be correct and consistent with most people. Different positioning: For me personally, there is not much difference between Qidian's science fiction and fantasy novels, they are very magical. The readers who read this novel should be roughly classified as fantasy (playing blood). If you bring them together to play science fiction, the audience will not react at once. It is like you took me to see an action movie, but I didn't expect it to be this kind of action movie. The plot is unstable: Coming out of the war, the decline and weakness of the plot also caused readers to question the author's ability. There are many plots in previous wars that are referenced in other books to support your world view. However, the original work of Liu Cixin's The Wandering Earth is a very short novel, and the plot of the movie has been changed a lot by Director Guo and the creative team and a lot of things have been added. Although you may be looking for various information, many readers are afraid that they will be lost after writing. There is another problem that will cause big problems in the future, that is, there is a lot of description of Hill, and the writing is very brilliant, but considering the historical reasons, we still have to pay attention to it, otherwise it is still possible to get 404. Because of the large amount of mapping history, the more you write, the better, and the more likely your book will be banned. Because one day someone will report this plot, and the more people who know about it, the more dangerous your book will be. Don't forget the possible jealousy of colleagues.

Very good writing so far, I will vote for you with all my monthly votes 🤓

The essence of All Quiet on the Western Front is peace, while the essence of the dragon clan is war. The bad boy in the original book has no idea why he wants to slay the dragon from the beginning. It's the same essence as a farmer trying to kill another farmer he doesn't even know.

Many Dragon Clan fanfics have given Lu Mingfei great power, and then forcibly molded Lu Mingfei's mind to show his mental growth, but it is quite awkward to read. This book uses war to explain Lu Mingfei's mental growth in detail, making Lu Mingfei's character more three-dimensional.

"They all say that I am a crazy butcher. Only I know that I am fighting the devil"🤓

If nothing else, when Ming Fei goes to Kassel and finds out that these damn squids and the Presbyterian Church are still ruling the secret party, I feel that they will be chopped up immediately without saying anything.

The writing on World War I is very good so far. I can write more. For example, after the war, I wrote about serving in the government, army, and secret police of the Weimar Republic, the weird things in Berlin, Heidelberg University, ptsd, and my interactions with the hair-washer, etc. There are also accidental contacts with European mixed-race families and secret parties in the early 20th century. During this time, Meniek and Angers were both young people. Is Fingel's family in Munich or somewhere? They can also create opportunities to contact Lu Shanyan and others in the East. Kaczynski's name does not sound like a German, but like a Slav, whose ancestors immigrated to Germany? I feel like I can make a fuss about it. After the war, you can contact the Kaczynski family, settle down (?), And even leave descendants. In the end, he dies unexpectedly and returns to reality (laughs), and even his grandparents can become schoolmates (laughs)

All Quiet on the Western Front and The Wandering Earth are great, but I couldn't understand this chapter after Return, and I was ready to abandon the book at any time if things didn't go well. Ask a World War I veteran with a KD of over 10,000, a super pilot with a KD of over 500, a global military commander during the world model period, and a half-savior, and you want him to go to Cowherd's shop? I really don't understand. Let's wait until the new chapter comes out tomorrow and take a look. It's really a bit abstract.

Occasionally I recall the first volume, and I have to say that it is a talent to write such a good beginning like this.

It's hard for me to comment. Doesn't this feel inappropriate? The three books together feel so inconsistent I hope the author can meet readers who like this. I deleted the book. Before deleting it, I really wanted to ask, after reading your introduction and title, did I want to read this? If "All Quiet on the Western Front" reflects the cruelty of war and the desire for peace, plus some racial conflicts between dragons and human beings against indifferent hybrids, and uses Lu Mingfei's growth as the main thread, then OK, it's absolutely fine. This is what I want to see. Up to this point, the main conflicts are still the conflicts between dragons and humans and the hybrids inserted in the middle. Then what is the purpose of inserting "The Wandering Earth" now? It mainly solves the conflict between man and nature, which is the contradiction of survival. The racial conflict between dragons and humans is a secondary conflict. So in order to save the earth, should we unite the dragon race and the hybrid race? So what is the war to unite humans and dragons? More importantly, what is the content of your first battle? Next, whether to completely destroy the dragons and hybrids to ensure the implementation of the wandering earth plan, or to unite the dragons and hybrids, you will have to sew out your rejection reaction. Even if Zhu Tianwen knows about worlds with similar themes, I can still find it interesting. I can only wish the author to meet readers who have similar ideas to his own as soon as possible.

A group of people clamored that there would be no female protagonist. After the voting results came out, their arrogance was amused by their friends. For example: "Vote for harem ≠ follow-up subscription" "I hate the harem party, don't run away again when the time comes to subscribe" "The subject matter is not suitable for the harem"... Wait I wonder, how many of my brothers have traveled through time in the future? Did you foresee something that hasn't happened yet? On the ranking list of light novel themes, except for the monster of Samsara Paradise, I read correctly that the harem genre accounts for a large proportion of the books that have been at the top in the past few months. It's strange how it changes when it comes to some people's mouths. After all, don't most authors write books just to make money? As for those who are not motivated by money, I believe there are some, but they are only a minority. Since it is to make money, and in the field of light novels, the harem genre is more popular according to its current form, then why not do it? Don't talk to me about the silent majority. The rankings are there. Facts speak louder than words. As for the exception of the book "Reincarnation Paradise" that someone may want to mention, I have a better example, "The Circle of Fate", which is even more popular. Some people may also say, alas, the best-performing dragon fanfics all have single or no female protagonists. Before, it was popular in Naruto fan fiction that the eternal kaleidoscope was opened at the age of seven or eight. Why doesn't anyone write like this now? After all, whether a novel attracts readers depends on the author's writing skills. The single female protagonist in the harem is the icing on the cake, although at present, there are high and low icings on the cake. It is understandable that the author caters to a wider audience, after all, we have to live. As for some people, my suggestion is that instead of rolling around, it is better to reward a few big leagues, which is more effective.

The most attractive thing about this book at the beginning is the image of a fallen boy who grew up in World War I and became a deeply admired war hero, a steel soldier who came from history. This is an area that Dragon Clan fan fiction has not written about. There should be a lot of content to be written about exploring the secrets left by Hill and the Dragon Clan's secrets and unfilled pits. However, the Wandering Earth was stitched together, destroying this sense of historical weight and the character that a World War I war hero should have, including blindly following the main plot of the original book. It really ruined the writing of a fine book.

I think it's not because I wrote about Wandering Earth, but because I later wrote about running for Japan's parliament. A good double hero has already recognized the forces in Germany, and he is a Chinese by birth, but he went to Japan to run for parliament under a false identity on the grounds of "expanding influence". This plot is a mess. The following plot can either cooperate with the political forces in Germany and fight against the original Presbyterian Church; The author chose not to write, just thinking about the Cowherd's shop, and the writing was very poor, so he had no desire to read it. Originally, the plot of Wandering Earth can be regarded as the finishing touch, which can bring the original American personal hero values ​​​​of the dragon family to the Chinese people's view of history. All Quiet on the Western Front sets the theme as peace, and The Wandering Earth changes the perspective to a group portrait perspective. It could have completely gotten rid of the Riddler and conspiracy theories of the Jiangnan old thief. The group portrait can also write a lot of things without making the readers feel watery. But the author just didn't, and Lu Mingfei went around "rescuing people" and engaging in personal heroism, instead of writing the essence of The Wandering Earth.

I finished reading the World War I part and read the author's post. I'm going to write about The Wandering Earth as a follow-up. Then this book is finished with me. I don't have any positive expectations at all about the way dragons cross and wander the earth. If there are some hidden similarities between war and the Dragon Clan, Wandering Earth and the Dragon Clan have almost nothing in common. World War I seems to be a world that emphasizes the collective, but local battlefields can be dominated by superhuman individuals, and the overall battle situation that cannot be changed by individuals can be used to set off the heaviness of the times and highlight the tragedy of heroes. Therefore, the emphasis on individual dragons and World War I seem to have nothing to do with each other, but they can be connected through the description of local battlefields and battlefield duels between superhumans. The pain and powerlessness of superhuman beings in the war add to their humanity. The most important thing is that superhumans are transcendent. They can suffer, but they can always escape. The experience of the human world is like a dream in Shura Alley. At dawn, he is still the god of death. But The Wandering Earth's emphasis on the collective has reached another level, so high that it denies all individual values ​​except dedication to the collective. At the same time, the crisis it faces is too strong, so strong that it denies all established classes and nobility. Transhumans will no longer be aloof, they will be forced to fight for civilization, just like any other ordinary individual. At this point, it doesn't matter whether they are dragons or angels and demons. You can still tell their stories, but the people in your story don't actually need to be the group of dragons. They can even be replaced by a group of ordinary smart people. In other words, you eliminate the necessity for the dragon worldview to exist. So I am not optimistic about the future direction of this book at all. It will almost certainly change its flavor and become a Wandering Earth fanfic with some familiar strangers making cameos. So will readers of Dragon Clan really like a collectivist science fiction web novel?

In fact, there was indeed an organization with this kind of calling ability and huge transnational influence at that time, but it was not something like the Zionist Presbyterian Church. At that time, this organization was called the Communist International

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of ridicules begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates. So how long has it been and you are still trying to catch fish without updating, are you doing this to everyone?

Lu Huowang: Gua! I can't tell the difference! I can't tell the difference! I really can't tell the difference!

I don't quite understand why the author added the Wandering Earth. If it was the real astronomy, it wouldn't matter if it was added. After all, you can just skip this chapter. But for people like you, other worlds influence this world. It would be weird to add the Wandering Earth. The Wandering Earth and the Dragon Clan have different cores. If they are mixed together, it will only make people feel awkward.

No, I had a good Dragon Clan fanfic, so why did I start writing about The Wandering Earth?

I thought I wanted to read about Dragon Clan, but it turned out that the gun shooting was so good, and the Dragon Clan chapter was a bit uncomfortable for me. The author should open another book about World War I and World War II. They will do anything in the comment section The new book is dedicated to gun shooting.

What is the new chapter about? The United States is calling for peace because it is worried that a nuclear strike will harm the Japanese. Faced with the protagonist and the White King, who are beyond human beings, the United States actually considers that the use of force will harm the Japanese and refuses to use nuclear weapons. It also actively calls for not allowing other countries to use nuclear weapons to avoid harming the Japanese! ! Since when did America have such a thing as conscience and morality? What you write is more science fiction than science fiction.

The writing before I returned to modern times was pretty good, but it didn't look good after I returned, so I might as well finish it right away😓

It was a very enjoyable novel, but it was only enjoyable until Lu Mingfei returned to reality.

The difference between before and after is too big, can you give me the money back?😢

The chapter [All Quiet on the Western Front] is worth reading, and the others can be ignored.

An encounter with a golden-eyed little dragon in Verdun. Multiple speech spirits can be switched at will. The military shovel is as powerful as a monster. Even with all its strength, it cannot be defeated.

The growth and narrative of All Quiet on the Western Front were well written, but once the dragon clan returned, it returned to its original form. I felt something was wrong about the two chapters about Kassel's admission. As soon as I looked at the comment section, I felt relieved. Goodbye, thank you for spending time with me this day.

Come visit the grave and express your views. By standing on the shoulders of giants, the reference to All Quiet on the Western Front is a classic part of this book. At the same time, the combination of it with the dragon family is also good. It is not brainless, but it also has a clear path to growth. But it started to get worse later on, and I obviously felt that the style of painting was different. In fact, it might be okay if Lu Mingfei kept traveling on the battlefield (a bit hell) But I personally think that if Lu Mingfei returned to reality after experiencing the Western Front and did not go on the dragon-slaying life line of Kassel (the little devil would probably support Lu Mingfei to live a normal life), then the book would end there and it would be a good short story about youth growth. Reflections on reprinting on December 8, 25

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